bitterreaderako21

Sundan ang not so special and hindi ineexpect na pagkakaroon ko ng love life? Matutupad ba ang gusto kong destiny? Masyadong maraming tanong wag natin gawing komplikado. 



Let's start the way of our DESTINY...

Philippines

I really admire Pluem and Chimon and medyo nabitin ako sa mga BL na ginawa nila and I really want to see them do more of BL series. Don't you think? Share your thoughts comment na!


Pluem Purim Rattanaruangwattana as Angelo Gabriel De Los Reyes 


Chimon Wachirawit Ruangwiwat as Mark Alexander Santos


This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.


First of all the story is great but i noticed that, there's more improvement to the book it .Like:

-adding the right punctuation in sentences. Like dot in the end of your sentences. It is important even in silent or oral reading a book.

   -> ex for the character who are expressing what they gonna say : "Ako nga pala si ____ ."  

-The end paragraph punctuation in character's pov. (I noticed some of the punctuation here is not present).

-check your final draft before publishing.
   -> I noticed your spelling in chapter 1 instead of 'medyo' it become 'meyo'. 

That's all^^. But don't stop writing! Improve more and more and you'll be succeed one day.






     




A Way of Destiny

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - FATE