Shonpufi

God?
I never wanted to be one
But what choice do I have when all I care about is in death's hands?

This is an excellent rewrite so far and I can’t wait to see where it goes from here it has a really nice writing quality compared to the other one and I like the changes again I can’t wait for more

Great rewrite so far. I love the changes, though I wish you had left the MC picking the name Meliodas Pendragon the same as the original. I look forward to see what other changes you have made.

The pacing is great, the first chapters flow much more naturally than in the original.

it's still in its infancy but you can expect that the future chaps will be entertaining asF

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Cool.                                                                                Very cool

five star hehehe ........................

Excellent Dish Mi amigo, perfecto 

more Chapter

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Genshin Impact: The Spirit King

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Volume 1 :The Line Between Future and Past