I have split the chapters and added more words to describe the scene in the first chapter and edited any gramatical errors as far as I could. Still there may be some mistakes. I will re edit them again after some time. I will do the same for already published chapters as well . I intended to add more words and nuances as they were missing before thus making the chapters really flat and flavorless. This was my first novel and I wasn't very accustometed in writing, but right now I feel like I have gained some insights about how to write. I know I have been very irregular with my release schedulesguys and have dissapointed all the readers who have been waiting for a long time. This was because I had lost the plot of this story and have been stagnant for a very long time. As it was my frist ever story I did not think about a plotline, I thought once I started to write the story will progess on itself. But guess that is true for expert writers. So this time I have returned with a plotline and know how to progress the storty. Hopefully I will be able to release more chapters this time and finally finish it.