Sure, here's the rewritten version:
After a month of staying hidden from the world's eyes, Arthur and Jessica finally returned to Angel Island within the Angel Kingdom.
Upon their return, Arthur couldn't help but let out a sigh.
As he looked at Jessica beside him and thought about Raki, the night felt a bit awkward. Despite having a large Lolita with him day and night, he couldn't find a way to resolve his inner turmoil.
But as they say, there's always a solution to every problem!
"..."
Over Raijin Island, several empty islands that had been conquered three years ago were now inhabited. These islands were situated above the Grand Line.
Arthur planned to address the New World situation in a year or two. Currently, the priority was to teach Armament Haki to the elite warriors of Sky Island.
The once joyful Raijin Island was now bustling with activity compared to four years ago.
People were busy with their tasks when suddenly, a massive black shadow appeared in the distance. Everyone looked up in amazement to see a slightly smaller island than Raijin Island flying towards them.
"An island... flying here!?" exclaimed someone in awe.
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On the second cloud island of Raijin Island, government officials selected from various sky islands were handling various matters. The sudden movement in the outside world caught their attention.
A guard stood at the palace gate, observing the flying island and immediately shouting a warning.
Gang Cole, appointed by Arthur as the Archon, oversaw the management of the entire Angel Kingdom from a broad perspective. The commotion outside naturally drew his attention.
"What's going on?" Gang Cole asked suspiciously.
"Reporting to the Archon, an island has flown over!" the guard hurriedly informed.
Cole's eyes widened in disbelief. "What did you say? An island flew over?" he exclaimed.
Hurriedly leaving his office, Cole caught sight of the flying island. "What... what's happening! Could it be a Devil Fruit user causing this? God isn't present at this time."
As chaos erupted among the residents of the sky island, a voice echoed through the world.
"Dear citizens of the Angel Kingdom, I am God Arthur. I brought this island from Qinghai. There's no need to worry!"
Arthur, using his fruit powers, transmitted his message across Raijin Island and the nearby Jaya Island. Upon hearing his words, people quickly calmed down.
Arthur's presence that year not only didn't harm them but also enriched their lives with various policies and arrangements, making life more vibrant and enjoyable.
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The presence of Arthur didn't make the people of Sky Island reject him but rather earned him more respect. Knowing that their god was a powerful individual brought a sense of inner security.
Living on a sky island didn't mean they were immune to troubles, but Arthur's arrival led to the creation of stricter laws, reducing local criminal activity significantly. Arthur, with a modern mindset, introduced numerous changes to Sky Island.
For instance, Wyper, originally a small boat with a steering handle, was transformed by Arthur using Ray Metallurgy into a motorboat. This new invention was safe, easy to use, and quickly became popular across the island.
Arthur's boat initiative catered to everyone's preferences. Those with means could afford yachts, while others could opt for motorboats. Even those without much money could travel on passenger ships.
The idea of freely visiting other sky islands or vacationing in places like Raijin Island, known for its relaxing baths, was once unimaginable to the islanders. This newfound accessibility brought immense joy.
Instructing Jessica to position the island diagonally above Raijin Island, Arthur spoke his piece and vanished instantly.
On the dedicated cloud island for Arthur at the top of Raijin Island, a figure waited in anticipation.
Arthur reappeared before Raki, gently embracing him. "Sorry for making you wait."
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"It's alright," Raki's face lit up with a happy smile, though his eyes appeared slightly teary. "I'm happy to wait for you!"
Arthur was initially touched by Raki's words, then chuckled wryly. "Jessica's already here. I wonder if Raki will still feel the same after seeing her."
Just as Arthur pondered this, he sensed slight tension in his arms.
Jessica had arrived.
The current situation was that Jessica knew about having accepted it long ago. However, Raki was unaware of Jessica's existence, which posed a challenge.
Women's intuition was indeed powerful. Upon seeing a beautiful girl flying in, Raki instantly grasped the situation. With a smile, he gently pushed Arthur away and greeted Jessica.
Within minutes, the two women inexplicably bonded, leaving Arthur somewhat sidelined.
Observing them enter his palace together, Arthur shook his head and teleported to the next cloud island.
"Well, feel free to ignore me! But don't forget about me too soon."
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