Happy Valentine's Day, everyone!
{Whether you're single or not, it doesn't matter.}
For me, it feels more like an Einstein day, considering I still need to study for exams. Honestly, I'm losing my mind a little—HELP!!!
Anyway, Phew! The first volume is done, and I have to say, I'm quite fond of this iteration. But I'd love to hear your thoughts too!
As for the next volume, I've decided to give Kyroin a real challenge for his character development: a battle with himself.
Once, he sought immortality, but now, he's searching for a different kind of immortality—one that I won't spoil just yet but will reveal in the next volume. However, I'm really curious about your opinions on this challenge for him.
In previous iterations, I had used amnesia as a character tool for Kyroin, but since it's not feasible now, I decided to explore paranoia about self-identity instead.
He's the kind of character who remains steadfast, but as his goals shift, his path and even his perception of himself begin to change.
When I first imagined Kyroin, I didn't really put much thought into his character development, and I'll admit, it was hard for me to decide if I should give him any flaws at all.
So, I'd love for you to answer these questions wholeheartedly. Your feedback is incredibly valuable to me and to the story as a whole.
1) Do you think Kyorin's character should have flaws, or does a flawless character sound better?
2) Is the current story feeling underwhelming compared to the previous ones? There's less action and fighting, and more focus on philosophy.
3) What kind of character development would you like to see for Kyroin?
4) What aspects of this work do you think are lacking, and do you have any suggestions for adding variety or allure?
5) In previous iteration, I used to include elements like songs and poetry. Do you think I should add them, or does the current format work just fine?
I hope you enjoyed the first volume! Please don't forget to support by giving power stones and leaving a review—it really helps a lot, and I love reading your comments.
Cya!