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<p>he breaths then curves his blade as he rushes towards the heights of the moon, "i will conqure it" he screams loudly as he speeds up his steps, his feet quickning as the winds left his lung, he was free. flying!</p>

new discord!!![please join im alone there...] anyway, this is me rating my novel..easiest 10/10 ever btw, thank you everyone thats reading right now, it only motivates me! bye now.



The story starts off with a calm and slow pace, gradually pulling the reader into the stakes as Leonardo transmigrates. It strikes a nice balance between character-driven and event-driven storytelling, following Leonardo and the group as they navigate their personal struggles alongside larger conflicts. The pacing is definitely on the slower side, and the first 50 chapters or so? could be described as "info-dumpy," but honestly, I love it. You can really tell the author put a lot of effort into the world-building. The Rasvian energy system is creative and intriguing, though its practical applications aren’t explored as much as I’d like. Overall, I’d give it an 8/10—it’s a solid read.

Has great potential. Good, interesting power system, the vision for the story is present, and writing is actually pretty good. 
The only thing that brings it down are the small linguistic errors, which are prominent in the beginning, but even those dwindle as the novel goes on.

Overall, would recommend.

If the grammar/lexical errors, and spacing issues are fixed, this might actually reach the top New Novels of Webnovel.

this is genuinely so good, one of the underated works per say?, continue working on this bro!!

I really need this to have illustrations omg that would be cool like I could visualize the beauty of the story AAAAA I'm still on chap 4 and I gotta catch up. It's still the beginning but it's already getting interesting 🙏🙏

outside of you updating i love this please continue

A wonderful book that is worth recommending . Kudos to the author 

this is honestly really good bruh, read till chapter 45 and had to stop cause im busy but im back and ill complete it!! continue making this alright 

I love the way the writers  structure  and detail the book. The book has the sense of humor which everyone always looks at when reading. I mean he is a great writer, keep it up always.


i have just read a chapter and I can't wait to read further because it is a wonderful storyline. wonderful author ❤

peak story, really slow in the start but I don't mind, the author lays it out well, mishaps but it dosent change the flow, I really like this novel.

I planned to read this one and was really looking forward to it once it conpleted 300 or so chapters and then one day i see 207 chapters and now 158 chapters and it’s conpleted…… why??
(Maybe i know cause there were not many who stumbled upon this)

Anyways i just wanted to let you(author) know that i was really into it… would read a chapter twice just to make sure i dint miss out on anything. 

Here is to hope that other people stumble upon your work’s. 

Sending a lot of positive energy. 


alright this is a new fresh read have to say its actually really good but i stopped at 50 so from what I've read its a solid 7 pushing 8.

I really like this a bit over explanatory but overall a solid 8?

Museum Of Narratives

Table of contents

Volume 1 :The stem

Chapter 1 - ITs cold