Gucciman17

Madness engulfs one, disconnecting from all. 
Granting the one’s wish, it is uncontrolled, lurking in the beyond, bringing its dissonance, for the one’s wish wanted. Bringing it, all will shatter like glass, as if everything was nothing but just a bad dream…

Madness engulfs one, disconnecting from all. 


Granting the one's wish, it is uncontrolled, lurking in the beyond, bringing its dissonance, for the one's wish wanted. Bringing it, all will shatter like glass, as if everything was nothing but just a bad dream…


My only problem is the use of proper punctuations. Aside from that, it has potential... Too early to tell how this story will unfold so I probably go back if this story has more chapters.

I like the story overall so far there is some problems with punctuatuations but  thats not that big a deal the biggest problem is the inconsistent uploads of the series its been a year since the last chapter so dont expect consistent updates.

So far, is good. Just a little lacking in adding a sign like an exclamation mark or whatever it is in some dialogue. The plot is quite interesting for me. Most importantly, the description of the situation shouldn't be overlooked, but it certainly doesn't need to be as detailed. Because if not, then the reader will feel quite bored.Maybe that's all for me.keep it up, authors!

Rlly unique, doesn’t have much basic system things, but a really creative idea and powers. Finally an update after an entire year of waiting.

This novel had a lot of interesting concepts and i am very interested where this story will go as of now it seems like its going to be good but we will see.

Ya’ll sorry for the long break, I’ll be getting back into uploading new chapters now, hopefully weekly, I’ll see. 
Hope you guys enjoy the chaos.

This lowkey seems broken af. 
Within the first 5 chapters there’s a destruction of an entire world, a near destruction of a world, etc. damn.

InHarmony

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Prologue