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Our Unfinished story

🇮🇳Dr_Mohsin_Patel
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You must have heard many love stories. Some such tales, which became immortal even after death. The love story of Romeo-Juliet, Laila-Majnu, Heer-Ranjha, and many more such tale that remained incomplete. Similar is the story of Amar, born in Kashmir, who falls in love with a Muslim girl and his own brother is the Cause of death of the girl. Amar is thrown into river Jhelum. From where he flows to a small village in Pakistan, where a shepherd saves his life. Will Amar take revenge from his own brother or Sacrifice his love
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Chapter 1 - Ruthless Childhood

The era of 1950 when even ten years of independence were not completed. Everyone was busy re-establishing their lives. The story of independence was over. But the story of love was about to begin. The story begins with a small village in Bandipora whose name was Dabban. Dabban is a small village in Kashmir. A child is born in the house of village headman Dariya Singh. Whose name he names Amardeep Singh. Daria Singh's first son Kuldeep Singh is just three years old. Daria Singh was a well known person of the village. The entire village believed in the orders of Daria Singh. Daria Singh was known for his justice. Due to his generosity, people gave him the name Daria Singh. He left no stone unturned in the upbringing of his two sons Amardeep and Kuldeep, but because Kuldeep was his first son and the first heir of their family, he was very dear to his grandparents. Kuldeep grew up with his grandparents since childhood. He spent more time with his grandparents than with his parents. This pampered love started spoiling her. Kuldeep was very stubborn since childhood. Teachers often complained about him. This same thing used to trouble Daria Singh many times. On the contrary, Amardeep was very intelligent. He was very fond of studies since childhood. He was always the first in his class. This thing gave comfort to Daria Singh's heart. Daria Singh was illiterate, he never took his own education, but whenever he saw Amar's passion for studies, he felt that one day he would definitely illuminate his name. Daria Singh had high hopes from Amardeep. Kuldeep Singh did not like this thing at all. Kuldeep used to burn from Amar inside. That's why he would not let any chance to fight with Amar pass away. He used to find out Amar's mistakes in everything. Sometimes the quarrel between the two increased to such an extent that Kuldeep would even raise his hand on Amar. This behavior of Kuldeep was beyond the understanding of Daria Singh. Daria Singh tried a lot to bring the two brothers closer, but Kuldeep was so jealous of Amar that all efforts of Daria Singh went in vain. Kuldeep and Amardeep's mother often used to cover up Kuldeep's mistakes. This style of Kuldeep was not only with Amar. Slowly, Kuldeep's behavior was becoming the same with the rest of the family.

On the other hand a daughter is born to a tailor named Sarfaraz. Whose name he names Nargis. Nargis is very beautiful. The tailor longs for a son, but his wife dies as soon as she gives birth to Nargis. Sarfaraz loves his wife very much. After her death, he never marries again and is determined in his mind that he will teach his daughter enough that she never feels that she has no heir.

One day suddenly Amar and Kuldeep's mother die. Amar was about 13 years old. This thing leaves a deep wound on his heart. But more than Amar, Kuldeep is shocked by this because it was his mother who always saved him from Daria Singh's scolding and always used to cover up his mistakes. Kuldeep remembers an anecdote from his childhood. When he gets into a fight with a village child over a minor issue, he throws a stone on his head and runs home. When the boy's parents come to know about this, they come to Mukhiya to complain about Kuldeep and Kuldeep's mother hides him in her lap and saves him from Mukhiya's scolding. Kuldeep broke down after the death of his mother. Kuldeep was getting out of hand. Now he had started taking drugs. He used to do drugs by stealing money from the house. One day when Kuldeep came home after drinking alcohol, Daria Singh threw him out of the house. But then Kuldeep's grandparents came to defend him and was forced to keep Kuldeep at home again. Daria Singh was the head of the village, the people of the village respected Daria Singh a lot. Kuldeep was getting his name mixed in the soil.

One day some people come to meet Darya Singh. Those people were very angry. But because Daria was the head of the village and people respected him, everyone lowered their eyes and started complaining to Daria about Kuldeep. One of them comes forward in a muffled voice, where Kuldeep and his three friends Ranga (Bhuvan), Shera (Pradyuman) and Kalu (Mayur) tease the women of the village. One of them said that this morning Kuldeep also blocked the path of his daughter. When someone tells him something, he comes down on grandeur. All those people respected the chief, so before going to the inspector, Wah came to meet the chief. The chief was very sad to hear this, where he asked everyone to go and assured that this would not happen again. People also obeyed the chief and left from there. After everyone left, Daria went to her room and took out her wife's picture from an old box and started crying. The chief was broken inside. Amar had listened to the people. Seeing the chief weeping, he came to him and put his hand on his shoulder and started comforting him. When Kuldeep came home in the evening, seeing him, the river got furious and started beating him with a stick kept nearby. Kuldeep left from there in anger.

Kuldeep did not come home that night. He spent the whole night drinking with his friends. When Kuldeep returned home in the morning, he was under the influence of alcohol. When Daria opened the door, she realized that Kuldeep had drunk alcohol again. Daria lost her temper. And as soon as he tried to raise his hand on Kuldeep, Kuldeep grabbed his hand and he pushed Darya Singh hard. Daria fell on the ground and hit her head with the Diwan kept nearby. Daria fainted. Amardeep was studying in the back room. As soon as he heard the sound of something falling, he came out. He sees that Kuldeep is drunk and Daria is lying on the ground. Daria's head was bleeding profusely. Amardeep turned red with anger. He never got so angry at Kuldeep. But he controlled his anger and picked up Daria and took her to the room. Amardeep immediately ran to call the doctor. The doctor tied a bandage on Daria Singh's head and where he would soon regain consciousness. As soon as Daria regained consciousness she asked about Kuldeep. Now Kuldeep's intoxication had also subsided a bit. Daria angrily went towards Kuldeep's room and started banging the door loudly. As soon as Kuldeep opened the door, Daria grabbed him and dragged him towards the door. Kuldeep did not regret his mistake at all. He was still arguing with Daria. Daria kicked him out of the house. While leaving, he started talking about asking for a share in the family land. But Daria flatly refused to give him the share. On hearing this, Kuldeep got very angry and left with his feet on the door. The hatred he used to hate Amardeep only increased. Daria Singh threw Kuldeep out of the house forever. Now Kuldeep has crossed all limits. What earlier he used to do secretly, now he started doing it in public. Theft, dacoity, hooliganism were all common to him. As if he was free now.