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Chapter 17 - Element Of Mystery

[The Liar Of Love released a new chapter, Chapter 45 Nial's Message]

[The Liar Of Love released a new chapter, Chapter 46 The Reason]

[The Liar Of Love released a new chapter, Chapter 47 Conversation Between Twin]

[The Liar Of Love released a new chapter, Chapter 48 Flashback]

[The Liar Of Love released a new chapter, Chapter 49 Worried]

The notification sounds on Jasver's cellphone now sound endlessly without pause.

"Wow, she really keeps her promise," Jasver whispered, quite amazed by what he had just seen on his cellphone.

The five chapters that Carren promised have been published. If previously he didn't take Carren's words too seriously, now Jasver really trusts her, and don't forget that he is now sure that Carren does consider him a friend.

Jasver's fingers quickly unlocked his cellphone and read all notifications about Carren's novel that had just aired.

He was really curious about the storyline made by Carren.

How is Carla and Jayke's relationship? Then what about Nial and Judith?

Things like that were going through Jasver's head right now.

If previously Jasver looked relaxed when he was just about to open the chapter published by Carren, now he suddenly fell silent, with his eyes very focused on the screen in front of him. Oh come on, he didn't think that the storyline that Carren was currently showing was way beyond his expectations.

Jasver looked a little tense, lost in the story that was there.

In less than five minutes of running time, Jasver had finished reading the novel The Liar Of Love five chapters at once.

"Why is the plot so difficult to predict? Actually, where is the story going? and who is the enemy?" Jasver spontaneously wondered to himself.

Without waiting long, Jasver who was too curious chose to call Carren first. He thought that if he could contact the author it might be possible for him to get a leak from Carren directly, right?

"Hello," said Jasver when he realized that Carren had picked up the ringer on the other end of the phone.

"Hello, I guess that you've finished reading the five newly released chapters, right?" said Carren casually, and don't forget that Carren said it with a slight chuckle that enveloped her.

Jasver couldn't avoid it, instead, he immediately said to the point that one of the reasons he contacted Carren was none other than the novel he had just read.

"You didn't enter your chapter wrong, did you?"

"Of course not, how could I be wrong, I made the chapter this morning and just finished it earlier, so how can I waste my energy in vain if what I publish is not the chapter itself."

Jasver took a deep breath.

"I didn't expect it, I thought you'd make this story romantic, or maybe fluffy," said Jasver honestly.

Again Carren chuckled hearing Jasver's rambling which was almost not much different from Carla before.

"From your tone of voice, it looks like my storyline will work, because you can't guess even though you're my editor," said Carren who replied to Jasver's words very casually.

"Well, if you look at it from that point of view you're right, but if you look at it from another point of view then maybe a lot of people will think this story will be a bit heavy right? And what if some of them leave your story?" asked Jasver who said from a different point of view.

Carren didn't answer right away but digested Jasver's sentence first. She knew very well that Jasver was currently speaking as the editor of her novel.

"That's okay, maybe it will look a little heavy because there is an element of mystery here, but that doesn't mean everyone won't like it right? I don't want to have a storyline that seems ordinary, don't you know that I usually write tragic which has an element of mystery in it? in every novel, so it's impossible for me not to write an element of mystery in it, even though I don't include a tragic element as usual in this novel... you can say this is my identity as a writer, what do you think as my editor?"

A smile could be seen from the corners of Jasver's lips which were perfectly lifted. Now he was even more convinced that Carren on the other end of the phone was now a more mature person than before.

"Wow, I could hardly believe my ears you would say that."

Hearing Jasver who seemed to be praising her implicitly of course made her heart flutter even more for Jasver.

Oh come on, don't forget that Carren has really fallen in love with Jasver and if Jasver compliments her isn't it like a gift in itself for her?

"I was raised by one of the characters there," said Carren unconsciously.

{Hey!! Are you crazy? You're not going to tell him you can talk to me, are you? Is this really the Carren I know}

"Shut up," Carren said quietly, forgetting that she was still on the phone with Jasver.

"Huh? Did I say something that offended you?" Jasver asked over the phone.

Thump!

Checkmate!

Carren forgot Jasver was still on the other line!

"Sorry, I didn't tell you, I just told my best friend who was trying to disturb me," Carren said as best she could so Jasver wouldn't suspect her.

"Ah, you're not alone it seems."

Carren could only hum softly, she couldn't confirm or deny it, and she couldn't even tell what had happened to her.

{Apparently, you can also divert the conversation, you're not wrong to be a writer}

Of course, Carla's words implied that the girl was making fun of Carren. It felt like Carren, who heard that wanted to yell at Carla, it's just that her current position certainly wasn't in her favor.

"Ah yes, what do you think as a reader of my novel?"

"You made me tense when I read it, I drifted into your novel, and the five chapters you just published were a bit lacking for me."

Carren nodded her head happily. At least she makes a story that still plays with the feelings of her readers.

'Thank God you're happy, I'll make the story even more interesting even though it will take me hours to write some chapters that you say are lacking.'

{Ahem, looks like you are satisfied with the story you made for me, moreover, the person you like supports you}

Carren, who could not immediately answer Carla's words, reflexively took a piece of paper that was nearby by wrote down three words to reply to Carla.

[You are right!]

{'I already guessed'}

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