Hana_Frederica

Elena never knew the world that she lived in was a novel world. Elena is a villainess in the novel "Ceo's Moonlight," and Elena's character aims to help the male lead get along with the heroine. Elena didn't bully the female lead like any other villainess, but her existence as the male lead's wife made the female lead realized her foolishness and made her come back to the male lead.

Elena has been married to Luke Vander, the male lead, for three years, but Luke never acknowledged her as his legal wife at all and kept their marriage in the dark. Luke Vander ignored Elena's existence and left her alone in this marriage. Then Luke Vander got an accident and was in a coma. 

In the real novel, Luke would wake up after one year in a coma and divorced his legal wife and got married to Miona Jeremy, the female lead. But everything changed when Elena also got an accident and made her lost consciousness for three days. After Luke woke up, he loves Elena instead of the female lead. Will Elena accept Luke Vander back? Or Will she choose to leave him?


[ DISCLAIMER: the picture in the cover is not mine, credit to the owner! :) ]

An: This is original story by Hana_Frederica and not a translation.

Indonesia

I hate to see a great potential being wasted. I don't know if it's just the translation or nah but the grammar sucks. 

Elena walks down the road, thinking the novel she read yesterday was not good. Reincarnation and transmigration are popular topics lately.

She chose to read "The CEO moonlight" because the book cover was good, but she didn't know the story would not be that good.

The male lead likes the female lead so much that he goes crazy for love, but the female lead is very arrogant and thinks that she is better than anyone in this world. She likes other people, but she tempts the male lead and has an ambiguous relationship with him. She distanced herself from the male lead when he was close to death. When he recovered, she realized her stupid mistake and returned to the male lead.

The stupid male lead leaves his wife, who loves him wholeheartedly after getting the female lead.

He is a stupid scumbag. I don't want to marry a man like him but I didn't know that I would get hit by a package delivery car and I would be transmigrated to the blood dog novel where the stupid male lead is my husband.

I loved this Love story. The couple is Just trying to  find a way to find Love and happiness. They are Very strong about their decision to live their own cute romance...🥰🥰🥰🥰

Hi there. I would like to promote this novel to you guys because the plot of this novel really touches your heart... Especially the sad and heart broken parts... Of course, this book have plenty of grammar error.. So, if you guys have OCD towards grammar then I will not recommend this novel to you... For me, I really enjoyed reading this novel so far although there are some grammar mistakes here and there... But overall, the author did a great job... 

To whomever who reads this, from what you can gather from all the reviews, two things stand out. Writing quality and plot.

Writing Quality: 4*
Well, can't deny it. The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. The grammar needs a lot of work, the way the POV changes from one to another abruptly leaves a lot to be desired, and the chunks of text in a paragraph are just a few things wrong with it.

So why the 4* you may ask? 

Because you can SEE the improvement. English can't be the Author's main language and the amount of effort Author has put in to pour her heart out is admirable. Author soldiers on, has improved and I am sure, will continue to improve. For that perseverance in the face of adversity, Author gets the stars. 

Stability of Updates (5*): Constant, steady and Author tells if will be late.

Story Development (4*): It can be abrupt at times and plot twists are dropped here and there which makes your head spin sometimes. The smooth transition isn't there but it's not too bad so not lower than 4*. Reading pleasure is disrupted a bit.

Character Design (5*): Okay, so some of the things the ML does is a bit weird like suddenly being hopelessly in love with the FL after being in a coma while in the original, he was hopelessly in love with the moonlight. It would have been easier to accept if it was also shown how the ML gets disillusioned by the moonlight during his coma and not just have it one-sided "I now see how good my wife is" because let's face it. Just because another person is good doesn't mean you stop loving the one you have been loving for years. Then, worse, just because the moonlight wasn't a virgin, he disdains her? Was his 'love' so shallow? Urgh. And the FL. Don't get me started on this Saint. Despite how she was brought up, she could raise her twin brothers at the tender age of 8? Be aware at 3 that her parents don't love her but instead of being depressed, she grows more mature? And still be hopelessly in love with her husband who was cold and neglected her for 3 years? 

The thing is, no matter how much I disdain these characters, the fact that I can dislike them means Author has done a good job in creating them. So, 5*.

World Background: by default, 5* because there's nothing really wrong with it. It's based on the current world so can't put low stars because of it now, can I?

So at the end of the day, if you can switch off your mind from the language and get used to the weird, mixing way without smooth transition of one arc to another, you'll enjoy this novel. The idea of the story itself is good.

All the best, Author.

Fl love her husband but he never saw her for who she is a gental loving wife. Ml ends in a coma and hears everything his wife doing for him. Its until then he realizes he messed  up on not knowing his wife 

This is for through chapter 15. Maybe it gets better later but with the writing and holes I could not read more. This is too bad since the plot sounded interesting. (I had to read a review to figure out what the story was about since the summary didn’t explain much of anything.)

The writing was difficult to follow in parts. There are many problems with grammar which does improves a slightly as it goes on. Often times a sentence will just rephrase what the sentence prior to it said. Often the story contradicts itself. 

Examples 
~ mc is sick and unable to wake for 3 days but the maid confused how mc forgot her husband is in a coma for ALMOST three days. 
~ in ML’s POV mc has been taking care of him for quite some time already and later she apologizes for being gone because she was sick
~ it’s said repeatedly mc doesn’t like to be a leader and the original Elena wanted a normal life. However, she manages and owns many successful restaurants and businesses. She is even the secretive CEO of the top entertainment industry called Frost Entertainment, that she started herself.
~ before coma, ML never looked at MC, avoided her, and even turns around the moment their paths cross. He calls her ugly then turns around and claims she is beautiful and lamenting over never seeing her beautiful smile & ect  again even though they had basically no interaction before he is in a coma.

Thing I just didn’t like
ML instantly recognizes how he wronged MC and loves her completely. It went from “She is ugly and only after my money to “she is gorgeous, gentle, and kind” in just paragraphs apart. Also he suddenly sees all the shortcomings and “evilness” of the lady her was madly and irrational in love with that he was going to leave MC for. 




I'm sorry for writing a review without even reading the thing, but the most important part is to first make a decent description. Please make it shorter and compact.

I love the idea of the story (the unloved wife of the ML). But if the story was polished it would flow and sound so much better. There are grammar issues which effect the feel of the story. As well as the pace of the writing. I hate to leave a review like this. With a few changes and a good editor, the writing quality would improve the story and background development.

I liked the story in the beginning and the concept of too. But the story has too many lapses. Plus the author needs an editor for grammatical errors. Not bad but needs improvement

I only read to chapter 4 but couldn't continue.   English translation is of lower quality so it interfered in the reading experience for me.  Also, don't know if it was because of the translation, but the story was kind of rambling.   I started reading because of the plot description but the writing just didn't suit me.

Cliche transmigration novel, but there are many who still enjoy the same plot over and over again, so why not? 

BUT, the grammar is bothersome. I don’t want to be a grammar nazi here, but please do try and go over your chapters to correct whatever you can. It will help make reading much more smooth.

Well
I don't know what i will write for review.😑

I just liked the story so far. I still reading until chapter 26 when I write this review.

I like when he still in coma, but when he wake up and back home, i somewhat cringy with they lovey dovey interaction. It too fast maybe?🤔

I don't know. Because i'm not romantic person.
I'm sometimes feel cringy when look or read lovey dovey interaction between couple. Well but i still read it though.



I enjoyed reading it. I’m not sure about the updates because I read it all in a night. The only problem I have is I think the male lead should apologize better for all the crap he put her through before the marriage. I would also think the female should be more cautious and disbelieving of his sudden change. Other then that there are no other problems I can think of. 

the idea of this novel is good, but im sorry that i will stop reading this for now. its too confusing. in some chapters, the stories are not match from one to another. to many word to describe a character/situation over and over again for the same issue that scattered in many chapters. but if you want to read it for fun and wont give much tough for the consistency of the story, then this is good for you.

Stopt reading after 10 chapters. it is too confusing due to the poor gammer. And there are too many contradictions regarding the characters. It’s a shame because it looked so promising.

The premise sounded interesting so i tried reading it, but from the get-go the author referred to the female lead as a “he,” if that gives any idea of what the grammar is like in this book. There are small mistakes that make it seem like the chapters were written and posted without another read-through, so sometimes there are two consecutive punctuations (like a sentence is ended with a period and a comma) or there are commas or slashes in the middle of words (ex. I,s—> Is, or co/ame —> came). The characters also seem kind of shallow and when the ML is in a coma and the FL doesn’t leave him, he just happens to suddenly fall in love with her. The relationship needed more development than just him listening to her when he was in a coma and suddenly “falling in love” with her. Also, the point of view randomly switches from first person (FL’s POV) to something like third person omniscient (to see ML’s POV) for two paragaphs and then back, which is kind of confusing and it would have felt much less random if it was just kept in third person the whole time. Also the tenses in this constantly change.

....Saying all that, I think this story would have been more readable if the author had a decent editor/proofreader and I wish the author/translator good luck (bc I’m not sure whether this is an original or translated). While I probably was pretty blunt in my opinion of the grammar/lack of story and character development, this story is still better than some other ones I’ve seen out there.

I like the description anyway.. Probably cause when an editor have the urge to write a book but have no idea fully.. It ends up like that so I get you.
What I don't get is that some sentences don't blend with the rest of the paragraph.
Please when you have the chance correct that. Other than that the story is interesting and interesting so far. 

I love your book why did she faint.? does she actually have a illness.? please update soon.!...................................................................

I'm sorry for writing a review without even reading the thing, but the most important part is to first make a decent description. Please for the love of god fix the grammar in the description or no one will give it a try.

I'm really sorry to give you this honest review, but the MC character is too weak and soft to my liking, the male lead isn't that good either, at the beginning the story said that even though the unloved wife is really good and kind, the ML still doesn't love her, but in the middle of story we know it doesn't true? the MC suddenly love this ML without any reason even though when the ML character in the novel is a cruel cheater, too many inconsistencies in this story that supposed to be mistery but rather than make me more curious, it makes me feel there's too many plot hole, i could see that the author have talent to be a writer but maybe this is not my cup of tea, i think I'll drop this one, Thank you for creating this novel, i hope i could read your better creation in the future ❤️

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The Tyrant Gentle Husband

Table of contents

Volume 1 :The beginning

Chapter 1 - Prologue