HakurenYuki

Hayama Takagi was a young Japanese boy that had just moved to the states, He was a shy but bubbly child that loved learning. He was rather skilled in the art of speaking English after studying vigorously and was happily on his way to his first day of second grade... until...

Thirteen was a dark SOB that hated life, pain, and people. He thinks of himself as a tool because in that way living would be a little less painful. Thirteen wanted to forget the past, his once happy self back at the young age of seven or so when he had his mom, his dad, and his normal life, not this shit show where he is constantly injected with unknown substances and the thing tied around his neck that gave a constant reminder of the day all the shit happened.

[WARNING: slow and irregular updates, in need of an editor... this is a completely unedited...

Also lgbtq+ romance involved.]

United States

Dictatorship, by no means, was our country a democracy. There was no such thing as "for the people", it was a facade masking the dystopia we lived in. This is not my story, it was my reality. This is not the start, couldn't even call it the end, this is only part of the sad revelation of what chaos our world rains under. It was always like this, always this horrific and disgusting truth. Power-hungry, greedy scumbags rule this world, and this is the effort I took to thrive in the trash I was born in. This is the story of our promise.


Writing Quality: 4/5 I think my grammar sucks... there is no doubt about that, but I'd like to say its well written...

Stability of Updates: 2/5 ... I already said I was a slow updater... I'm sorry

Story Development: 5/5 I think that's just a personal opinion, I like the development.

Character Design: 5/5 I spent a long time on these characters, actually I started this book about 5 years ago... and most of these characters are inspired person I know in really life, don't worry, they know who they are~

World Background: 5/5 Bits and pieces are scattered through out the whole and nothing will be fully describe as I did when I was finalizing everything... 

I really enjoyed creating this book, although its not all written down yet, I know whats going to happen. I must say that I really did want to make this book really messed up, and when I write it I might actually sensor most of it out of the book it self... It can be said that most of the relationships in this book will definitely not be a healthy one.

Numbers: Our Promise [BL]

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Description