This is a fantastic setup for your novel, Namsang! The progression of the characters, their first experience flying, and the history of the Begha Sect all feel immersive and engaging. Here's a refined version of your draft to help you re-establish the flow:
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The Journey to the Begha Sect
Five cultivators and twelve rookies were on their way to the prestigious Begha Sect. For most of the rookies, it was their first time flying, and they marveled at the breathtaking sights below. The lush villages, towering mountains, serene lakes, and cascading waterfalls filled them with awe and joy.
Among them, a curious young man named Su Dao turned to the elder accompanying them.
"Respected Elder," he asked, "what is the history of the Begha Sect?"
The elder chuckled, a sly glint in his eyes. "Why should I tell you?"
Su Dao's face lit up with curiosity. "I'm a member of this sect now. Please, Elder, share its history with us."
The elder, unable to resist Su Dao's earnest gaze, finally relented. "Very well. Thousands of years ago, there was a cultivator named Begha Qing Shan. He was the strongest cultivator in the Nang Continent, surpassing even his master. People called him Tiger Fang because of his mastery of the Tiger Claw technique.
"At the height of his power, cultivators from other continents—like the Hanman Continent and the Tai Continent—coveted his technique. They banded together to attack him, forcing him to flee. Eventually, he found refuge in this small state, where he established the Begha Sect. And that is how the sect was born."
Hearing this, Su Dao's eyes sparkled with excitement. "What an incredible story," he whispered to himself.
Meanwhile, another rookie named Su Tian nudged his companion, Su Fan. "Hey, do you know the cultivation levels?"
Su Fan shook his head. "No idea. Maybe you should ask the elder."
"Me? I'm too scared!" Su Tian said, grinning. He then turned to Su Dao. "Hey, Su Dao! Can you ask the elder about cultivation levels?"
Su Dao, already curious about the subject, nodded eagerly. He approached the elder again. "Elder, could you explain the cultivation levels to us?"
The elder sighed and gestured to one of the older disciples. "These four inner disciples will explain it to you."
One of them, a young man named Han Qian, stepped forward. "As far as I know, there are five realms:
1. Qi Gathering – This realm helps gather and refine Qi.
2. Soul Understanding – In this realm, you gain insight into the soul and can perform soul attacks.
3. Foundation Realm – This realm is about building a solid foundation for future cultivation.
4. Core Formation – This realm helps you condense a core, the source of immense power.
5. Nascent Soul – This realm allows you to live without a physical body."
Han Qian paused and added, "The four of us are in the Soul Understanding realm because we're inner disciples. Our master is at the Foundation Realm."
Su Dao and the other rookies were stunned. The vastness of cultivation left them speechless.
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Arrival at the Begha Sect
"That's enough talk," the elder said, interrupting their thoughts. "We're almost at the Begha Sect."
As they descended, the rookies were greeted by a breathtaking sight. Massive ancient buildings stood amidst pristine nature. Towering mountains, shimmering lakes, and cascading waterfalls surrounded the sect, making it a haven of beauty and serenity.
The elder landed gracefully and turned to the group. "Follow me and maintain discipline."
At the gates of the sect stood two guards, their auras radiating strength at the mid-level of the Foundation Realm. The rookies gulped, realizing the power difference.
Inside, they were directed to a man in a blue robe. "I am Luo Zhang," he said. "You must fill in your information here."
One by one, the rookies approached to write their names:
1. Su Tian
2. Su Fan
3. Su Qian
4. Su Hou
5. Su Feng
6. Su Zhan
7. Su Sen
8. Su Lou
9. Su Bai
10. Su Dai
11. su tanh
... and finally, Su Dao.
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The Assessment
The elder led the group to another building, where an elder named Mok Ha awaited them.
"I'll be conducting your tests," Mok Ha announced. "For the girls, another elder will assist with the assessment."
The tests began, evaluating their bodies and potential. The three geniuses—Su Qian, Su Hou, and Su Feng—passed with flying colors and were sent to the outer sect. Five others also succeeded.
However, four rookies, including Su Dao, were deemed to have weak bodies. Mok Ha frowned. "You four have failed the test. But don't lose hope. We won't send you home. You'll work in the sect's worker area. With hard work, you may still earn a chance to join the outer sect."
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The Worker's Area
Two days later, Su Dao was toiling in the worker's area. Though his body was weak from years of reading and writing to earn money, his determination burned bright. Fate had brought him here, and he was ready to rise above it all.