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Chapter 6 - Chapter 5

Early morning sunlight filtered through the trees as Ella busied herself at her stall, which now boasted an impressive array of products. Bottles of her new shampoos and conditioners lined up neatly next to the soaps and polished toothbrushes, each display carefully curated to catch the eye of passing villagers. The market hadn't officially opened yet, but already there was a buzz in the air.

Ella paused for a moment, her heart racing slightly. She was only one silver coin away from having enough to finally build her shop. The thought filled her with a mix of excitement and nerves. Today could be the day, she just had to sell enough.

Adjusting the rows of citrus-scented soap and lavender shampoo, Ella glanced over at Liam, who was helping arrange the last few bottles.

"You think we're ready for a crowd today?" she asked, raising an eyebrow.

Liam, always cheerful, gave a confident nod. "Definitely. They won't be able to resist. Between the new scents and these fancy toothbrushes? We'll sell out by midday, I bet."

Ella couldn't help but smile. "Let's hope you're right. I'm one silver away from the shop, Liam. Just one."

Liam grinned, a glint of excitement in his eyes. "I know. And today's the day, Miss Ella. People can't resist your fancy soaps."

Ella chuckled, her stall looked more professional, more polished than ever before. Each product was labeled with care, the bottles and soaps gleaming in the early morning light. She was proud of how far she'd come—from selling a handful of soaps to managing a bustling market stall that now drew in customers from other villages.

"Can you believe this all started with some soap?" she mused, running her fingers over a bottle of shampoo.

Liam shook his head, looking amused. "Nope. But now people are talking about your stuff from miles away. And they're paying good money for it."

"Good money," Ella echoed with a grin. "That's exactly what we need today." She paused for a moment, a flicker of anxiety passing through her. "Think we can outdo yesterday's sales?"

Liam shot her a look, clearly unfazed by her nerves. "Of course. If yesterday was good, today's going to be even better. Trust me."

Ella took a deep breath, letting the warm air calm her nerves. She had to believe it too. Today was going to be big—her last push before finally opening her shop. She could almost picture it now: a proper storefront with shelves lined with her inventions, a steady stream of customers, and no more scrambling at the market stall.

"Well then, let's get ready to make some silver," she said, clapping Liam on the shoulder. "We're going to need it."

As Ella finished setting up her stall, she noticed a new vendor across the way, a slick-looking man with a too-wide grin. His stall was packed with similar products—soaps, toothbrushes, even what looked like an attempt at shampoo. Ella's heart sank as she caught sight of the price tags. He was undercutting her by almost half.

She frowned, trying not to let it show, but a sense of dread crept into her chest. People had been coming to her stall for weeks now, trusting her products and paying a fair price. But would they still come when there was a cheaper option just a few steps away?

Garrett, the new merchant, seemed to sense her unease. With a smirk plastered across his face, he stood tall and started shouting to the crowd. "Come on over, folks! Why pay more when you can pay less? Get your soaps, your brushes, for half the price!" His voice boomed through the market, and several passersby started glancing his way.

Ella clenched her jaw, muttering under her breath, "Great. Just what I needed—competition."

She watched as Garrett slickly waved a bar of soap in the air, boasting about how it was just as good, if not better, than anything they could get elsewhere. It was obvious he didn't care about the quality—just the sales. People began to trickle toward his stall, curiosity piqued by his flashy, cut-rate prices.

"Is it really that much cheaper?" Liam asked, standing by Ella's side, concern etched across his face.

Ella let out a sigh, trying to hide the rising panic. "Yeah, but I bet his products are nowhere near as good. Cheap soap that'll dry out your skin, toothbrushes that fall apart after a week. But still…" she trailed off, watching as a few potential customers stopped to listen to Garrett's sales pitch.

She took a deep breath, straightened her back, and adjusted the display of her lavender-scented shampoo. "Well, we can't lower our prices, Liam. Not if we want to keep the quality high."

Liam nodded. "Your customers will know the difference. They'll stick with you, Miss Ella. They always do."

Ella smiled faintly, appreciating his confidence, even though doubt still gnawed at her. She had built this business on trust and quality. It wasn't just about the price; it was about giving people something that actually worked, that made them feel good. But would that be enough to sway them today?

Garrett's smug voice cut through her thoughts again. "Come and get it before it's all gone! These deals won't last forever!"

Ella rolled her eyes, but she couldn't deny the pang of anxiety tightening in her chest. She leaned toward Liam, her voice low. "Looks like we've got a fight on our hands today."

"More like a race," Liam said, glancing at the growing crowd around Garrett's stall.

Ella took another deep breath, then plastered on her most confident smile. "Alright, time to step it up." She turned toward a couple passing by her stall, raising her voice just enough to carry over Garrett's noise. "Morning! Looking for something that will actually last and make you feel like royalty? Our lavender shampoo and rose-scented conditioner will keep you fresh and clean all week long! Not to mention our soaps—they're made with only the finest oils. You'll notice the difference after one wash!"

The couple hesitated, glancing at Garrett's stall, then back at Ella's. The woman stepped closer to Ella's display, sniffing one of the rose-scented bars of soap.

"This smells lovely," the woman said, her eyebrows lifting in pleasant surprise.

Ella smiled brightly. "That's one of our best sellers. And it's not just about the scent—it's gentle on the skin too. No animal fat like those cheaper soaps. You'll feel the difference."

Liam, sensing the shift, chimed in enthusiastically, "And the shampoo—Miss Ella made it herself! Keeps your hair soft and shiny, not like that greasy stuff over there."

The woman smiled, clearly interested. "I'll take a bar and some shampoo."

Ella's heart lifted as she carefully wrapped up the woman's purchases. "Thank you! You won't regret it."

She glanced over at Garrett's stall again, where a few customers were frowning as they examined his goods more closely. It seemed that not everyone was sold on the cheaper option. Ella knew she couldn't control everything, but if there was one thing she could count on, it was the quality of her work. And that, she reminded herself, would always win in the end.

As the morning wore on, Ella watched with growing unease as more and more people gravitated toward Garrett's stall. His slick voice cut through the market air, promising deals that seemed too good to pass up. "Why pay more when you can get the same thing for less? Come on, folks! You know a bargain when you see one!"

Ella tried to focus on her own customers, but the crowd around her stall was thinning. The steady stream of buyers that usually flocked to her fancy soaps and new hair care products had slowed to a trickle. Her excitement from earlier that morning was quickly being replaced by a sinking frustration. She smiled at a passerby, hoping to draw them in, but they cast a quick glance at her prices and moved on, heading straight for Garrett.

She bit her lip, trying to shake off the nagging doubts that had started to creep in. She rearranged the bottles of shampoo and conditioner on her display, making sure they looked as enticing as possible. "Stay calm, Ella," she muttered to herself. "It's just a rush for the cheap stuff. People will come back for quality."

But as another small group bypassed her stall, her confidence faltered. She glanced over at Garrett's booth, his smug grin stretching wider as more customers swarmed around him. A pang of frustration hit her chest. Cheap wasn't better. She knew that. But how did she convince everyone else?

Liam, sensing her frustration, leaned in close. "It's just because his prices are low. People will realize soon enough that they're getting ripped off."

Ella nodded absently, but the knot of doubt in her stomach wouldn't loosen. "Maybe," she murmured, her eyes drifting back to her nearly empty stall. "But they don't seem to care right now, do they?"

She thought about lowering her own prices, just for today, to stay competitive. But the idea of cheapening her products made her stomach churn. She'd worked hard to make sure everything she sold was of the highest quality, and selling them for less would undercut that. It wasn't just about making money—she believed in what she was offering.

Liam gave her a sideways glance, reading the tension in her face. "You're not going to lower your prices, are you?"

Ella shook her head, though the doubt was still nagging at her. "No, I can't. I stand by what I'm selling. It's better than what he's peddling, I know that. But... I just wish people would see it."

She clenched her fists, watching as Garrett's stall continued to pull in more buyers. "They don't get it," she muttered under her breath, frustration bubbling up inside her. "Cheap isn't better... but how do I prove that?"

Liam looked at her, eyes serious. "You already have, Miss Ella. People know your products are good. It's just—well, you know how it is. Everyone's tempted by a bargain. But they'll be back once they see what they've bought."

Ella let out a deep breath and forced a smile. "You're right. I just need to stick it out."

As the afternoon dragged on, Ella couldn't help but feel the weight of the slow sales pressing down on her. The usual pride she felt standing behind her stall, showcasing her handmade goods, had turned into a quiet anxiety. She glanced at Garrett's stall again, catching the gleam of satisfaction in his eyes as he handed out another round of cut-rate soap.

"Keep smiling," she reminded herself, straightening her back.

As the day wore on, Ella's nerves frayed with every passing minute. But just as she was about to give in to her frustration, one of her regular customers, Mrs. Hodge, strolled up to her stall with a friendly smile.

"Ella, dear," Mrs. Hodge said, picking up a bar of lavender soap and holding it to her nose. "You wouldn't believe it. I tried that man's soap—" she gestured toward Garrett's stall with a grimace, "—and it was gone after a wash! I'm back for the real stuff. Nothing beats yours."

Ella's heart lifted a little. "I appreciate that, Mrs. Hodge. I've been worried people were getting swept up in the lower prices."

"Oh, they might be," Mrs. Hodge said with a wink, "but cheap doesn't last, and it sure doesn't smell as nice as your lavender."

As Mrs. Hodge made her purchase, another regular, Mr. Cook, joined in. He eyed Garrett's stall from across the way before shaking his head. "I don't know how folks are falling for that," he muttered. "Ella, I'll take two bottles of your conditioner. My wife can't stop raving about how smooth her hair's been."

Ella handed him the bottles with a grateful smile. "Thank you, Mr. Cook. I'm glad to hear it's working so well for her."

As they chatted, a few passersby stopped, overhearing the conversation. One woman turned to her friend, raising an eyebrow as she glanced between Ella's stall and Garrett's. "Did you hear that? His soap only lasts only a wash?"

The friend nodded. "I've been hearing the same. Ella's might cost more, but it's worth it."

Ella, catching the exchange, tried not to let the relief show too much on her face. Slowly but surely, her regulars were coming back, and some of the crowd was starting to take notice.

A loud voice suddenly cut through the market chatter. "I'm telling you, this shampoo is magic!" It was Mr. Brooks, another loyal customer. He had a bottle of Ella's citrus shampoo in hand and was waving it around, attracting more than a few curious glances. "My hair's never felt better. You won't find anything like this at that other stall."

A ripple of interest passed through the crowd. A few customers edged closer to Ella's stall, eyeing her products with a new curiosity.

Customer 1, the woman who had overheard earlier, nodded toward her friend. "His soap barely lasted two washes. Ella's lasts for weeks, and it smells better too."

Her friend, now clearly more interested, chimed in, "You get what you pay for. I'd rather spend a few more coppers and have something that works."

Hearing this, Ella's confidence returned in full force. She smiled at Liam, who had been watching the shift with wide eyes. "See? People are starting to realize. Quality always wins."

Liam grinned back, clearly relieved as well. "Told you, Miss Ella. We've got this."

Ella watched as more customers began to drift her way, some cautiously picking up her bottles of shampoo and soap, others confidently handing over their coins. The tide was turning, and as the afternoon wore on, the steady trickle of buyers returned, making up for the slower morning.

By the time the sun began to set, Ella's stall had picked up enough business to keep her busy. As she wrapped up another sale, she couldn't help but glance over at Garrett's booth. His earlier smug expression had faded, and the crowd around his stall had thinned significantly.

As the afternoon wore on, Ella's stall grew busier, with customers returning not just for the shampoo and conditioner but for her soaps and toothbrushes as well. Word had clearly spread, and people were now gravitating toward her stall, curious to see what the fuss was about.

Ella barely had time to catch her breath between sales. Every time she looked up, there was a new face, eager to try her products. Meanwhile, Garrett's stall, once buzzing with activity, had grown noticeably quieter. The few people who had ventured to buy from him earlier were now trickling back to Ella, murmuring about the poor quality of his goods.

Across the way, Garrett's frustration was becoming more visible by the minute. His smug grin had long since faded, replaced by a scowl as he watched the steady stream of people flock to Ella's stall. He called out to the few lingering shoppers near his booth, desperation creeping into his voice.

"Come on, folks! You're paying twice as much over there for the same thing. Why waste your coins?"

But the crowd wasn't swayed. A few customers glanced at him, unimpressed, and went right back to browsing Ella's products.

One particularly bold customer, an older man with a booming voice, turned and called over his shoulder, "Or maybe we know a good product when we use one!" His remark drew a few chuckles from the surrounding crowd.

Garrett's face flushed with frustration. He grumbled to himself, furiously packing up his leftover stock. "These people don't know a deal when they see one," he muttered, shoving soaps into a crate.

Ella caught his eye briefly, feeling a mixture of relief and pride. She hadn't wanted things to get competitive, but seeing Garrett pack up felt like a small victory. She hadn't compromised on her prices or the quality of her products, and it was paying off.

As Garrett continued to pack up in a huff, another one of her loyal customers approached, buying several bars of soap. "I'll be honest, Miss Ella, I tried his stuff—never again. Your soap lasts longer, smells better, and my skin doesn't feel like sandpaper after using it."

"Thank you," Ella said, genuinely grateful. "I put a lot of care into making sure everything's the best it can be."

By the time Garrett finished packing up and left the market, his stall empty and defeated, Ella's table was almost bare, her stock nearly sold out. She exchanged a glance with Liam, who looked as excited as she felt.

"Well, Liam," Ella said with a triumphant grin as she closed up the last sale of the day, "I think we did it."

Liam beamed back at her. "Miss Ella, I think we're going to need a bigger stall soon."

Ella laughed, her heart light with the victory. Garrett had been right about one thing—people knew a deal when they saw one. And today, they had chosen quality over cheap imitations.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a soft orange glow over the village, Ella and Liam sat side by side at the now-quiet stall. The hustle and bustle of the market had slowed to a trickle, and Ella finally allowed herself to breathe. In front of them, the day's earnings were spread out—a mix of copper and silver coins, more than she had ever seen at once.

Her hands moved swiftly, stacking the coins into neat little piles, the weight of each one filling her with a growing sense of pride and disbelief. She could hardly believe it—after months of hard work, late nights, and endless planning, she had done it. She was holding the fruits of her labor in her hands, and it was more than she'd ever imagined.

"One silver, two silver..." Ella grinned as she continued counting. The realization hit her all at once. She looked up at Liam, her smile wide. "Liam, we did it. We're building that shop!"

Liam, who had been watching the pile grow with wide-eyed excitement, let out a whoop of joy. "I knew you'd make it, Miss Ella!" His face lit up with a grin so big it seemed to take over his entire face. He leaned back in his chair, clearly proud to have been part of this journey.

Ella nodded, feeling the weight of it all settle in—this wasn't just a stall anymore, this was her future. "Next stop—the best shop in town," she said, her voice filled with both excitement and determination.

Liam chuckled, clearly riding high on the victory of the day. "You'll have people lined up down the street," he said, his eyes glinting with excitement. "No one's gonna even remember Garrett after today."

Ella laughed, shaking her head. "Let's hope they don't. But the real work's just beginning, you know. Building a shop—that's a whole new challenge."

Liam nodded, but his enthusiasm didn't waver. "If anyone can do it, it's you. I'll be there, too. Whatever you need."

Ella glanced at him, feeling a wave of gratitude. "You've been amazing, Liam. Couldn't have done this without you."

He blushed, awkwardly rubbing the back of his neck. "Just happy to help, Miss Ella."

As they sat there, surrounded by the quiet market and the cool evening breeze, Ella felt a deep sense of contentment. This was just the beginning, she knew, but for the first time in a long while, she allowed herself to savor the moment. The dream of her shop was no longer just a dream—it was real, within her grasp. And she couldn't wait to take the next step.

The coins sparkled in the fading light, but it was the promise of what lay ahead that truly made Ella's heart soar.

As the sun dipped lower behind the hills, casting a warm, golden glow over the village, Ella walked slowly through the familiar streets, her mind buzzing with thoughts of the future. The weight of the day's success sat comfortably on her shoulders, but instead of feeling exhausted, she felt energized—alive with the possibilities that lay ahead. Her stall was behind her now, its shelves nearly bare after a long, fruitful day, but her thoughts were already on what was next.

She passed by villagers closing up their own stalls, some nodding in acknowledgment, others offering smiles as they packed away their wares. Ella smiled back, but her mind was racing. The shop. It was no longer just a dream—she had earned it. Tomorrow, she could start planning, making real moves to bring it to life. A thrill shot through her at the thought. It wasn't just about selling soap or shampoo anymore. This shop was going to be a beacon of innovation, a hub for everything new, fresh, and—most importantly—hers.

Her feet slowed as she reached the edge of the village, where the last few houses stood in the soft evening light. She stopped for a moment, looking out over the landscape, her breath catching in her throat. The village that once felt small now seemed full of potential, full of possibility.

Ella grinned to herself, the quiet determination she always carried inside her bubbling up to the surface. "This is just the beginning," she whispered under her breath, her eyes gleaming with excitement. "I'm going to make this village the cleanest, best-smelling place in the region—and maybe even beyond."

Her heart swelled at the thought of everything that was still to come. The shampoos, the conditioners, the new soaps—maybe even more inventions that hadn't crossed her mind yet. The shop would be the start, but Ella knew she could build something bigger, something that would leave a mark on this world.

As the last rays of sunlight faded into the horizon, Ella turned back toward the village, her steps light and quick. Tomorrow was the start of a new chapter, and she was more than ready.