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Chapter 2 - 2

**Chapter 1: A New Beginning**

Tomaru opened his eyes, blinking as he took in the unfamiliar surroundings. The room was small, sparsely furnished, and strangely plain. He sat up, his mind feeling foggy as he tried to make sense of where he was. Snippets of memories flitted through his mind—jumbled, fragmented, and disorienting. He recalled an image of himself running, a flash of light, a child… and then darkness.

"I… died?" he murmured, a knot forming in his stomach as a faint realization began to take shape. "But… if I died, then where am I?"

He stood, walking unsteadily toward the window, hoping for some clue. As he peered outside, his heart nearly stopped. There, carved into the mountainside, were the statues of the Hokage—the faces of the legendary leaders of Konoha.

"No way…" His voice trembled, barely above a whisper. "Is this… really Naruto's world?"

He took a step back, running a hand through his dark brown, straight hair. The familiar faces on the mountain stared back at him, reminding him of all the times he'd watched this place through a screen, cheering for Naruto, feeling safe in the knowledge that it was all fiction. But now it felt far too real.

"Oh no…" Panic surged within him as he processed what it truly meant to be here. "This world is brutal… People here fight to survive. I've never even been in a real fight before, and now I'm supposed to live in a place where people could kill me in an instant?"

He began to pace the small room, his mind racing as he tried to make sense of the impossible situation. "I'm going to die if I stay here. I'm… I'm not a shinobi. I don't even know how to throw a punch, let alone kill someone."

He took a shaky breath, forcing himself to calm down, and then something else caught his attention: his reflection in a small mirror on the wall. He glanced over, his eyes widening when he noticed a faint glow in his right eye.

"Wait… is that…?" He stepped closer, examining the bright blue glow. "This… it looks like the Tenseigan."

A mixture of shock and hope bubbled up inside him. The Tenseigan was one of the most powerful dojutsu in Naruto's world, capable of extraordinary abilities. If this really was the Tenseigan, maybe he wasn't entirely defenseless here. Cautiously, he tried to focus on the strange energy he felt within him. Almost instinctively, he directed it toward his right eye, willing it to activate.

And then… everything shifted.

The world around him became sharper, more vivid. His vision stretched outwards, revealing details he never could've noticed before. His gaze drifted outside the window, his sight expanding far beyond the streets of Konoha. He could see beyond the walls, beyond the trees, even as far as the village gates.

When he looked down at the streets below, his vision shifted further. He could see chakra networks in every person, glowing in intricate webs that marked each individual's unique reserves. Most people were civilians, faintly aglow. Some figures stood out with stronger, brighter chakra networks—chunin in flak jackets, recognizable by their substantial reserves. Genin had smaller pools, and even fewer were the jonin, whose reserves radiated power and skill.

His focus shifted, and he scanned the jonin in his view. That's when he realized something astonishing—his own chakra reserves were enormous, easily quadruple that of an average jonin.

"This is insane…" he breathed, the weight of the revelation settling in. "My chakra feels like it's on par with Naruto's—maybe even his level during Shippuden. How…?"

It was a strange, almost terrifying feeling to realize he had power on this scale. But even with it, the world he was in wasn't going to go easy on him. People like Danzo, ruthless and ambitious, would stop at nothing to control power like his if they ever found out about it.

"I have to be careful," he murmured, a new determination hardening within him. "I can't let anyone find out about this… about me. Not yet."

Taking a deep breath, he steadied himself, feeling a small spark of hope within the fear and uncertainty. He might not be a fighter, but he had a chance here—maybe even a real chance to survive.

And maybe, just maybe, he could carve out a life in this world.

**Chapter 2: Fragments of a Forgotten Life**

Tomaru sat on the edge of his bed, his head still reeling from everything he'd learned. He closed his eyes, trying to focus. He felt like he was missing something—something essential that lay hidden in the corners of his mind. Straining to recall, he searched through the fog of his memories, struggling to piece together how he had ended up here.

Then, faint and distant, a memory began to surface. He recalled a vague encounter with a figure bathed in light, radiating an aura of power and serenity that made it difficult to look directly at them. The figure had spoken to him, words slipping through his consciousness like water slipping through fingers. It had felt like a dream, something impossible to hold onto.

"Who… was that?" Tomaru whispered to himself, gripping the edge of the bed as a sharp pain shot through his head. He tried to focus, to capture the image of that divine figure, but each attempt brought more intense pain.

"Argh…!" he groaned, the pressure building in his mind. His vision blurred, and he stumbled, the room spinning around him.

Unable to bear it, he collapsed onto his bed and slipped into unconsciousness, the pain gradually fading into darkness.

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In the black void of sleep, fragments of memories began to emerge, faint images flickering like scenes from a faded film. He saw snippets of a childhood filled with mundane moments, daily life in the Hidden Leaf Village, growing up surrounded by other children who shared a common loss. He began to see glimpses of an orphanage, a plain, worn building filled with kids his age—each of them affected by the Kyuubi attack years before, a tragedy that left countless children parentless.

The memories painted a clear picture of a young Tomaru: he had lived a simple, humble life, blending in with the crowd. He was kind, polite, a little quiet, and—judging from what he could sense—completely unaware of any special power or destiny that might set him apart from others.

Scenes shifted. He remembered his first day at the Ninja Academy, looking around nervously at the other students, some of whom came from long, proud shinobi lineages. Others, like himself, were from civilian backgrounds. Yet, even with his average abilities, he was not without friends; he quickly gained a circle of companions, mostly because of his easygoing nature and striking looks—brown hair, a straight yet slightly unruly style, clear blue eyes, and a diamond-shaped face that made him stand out.

The young Tomaru, though aware of the attention, didn't think much of it. He wasn't particularly intelligent, nor was he naturally talented like some of the other kids. He was just… there, getting by like everyone else, trying to make it through each day. For him, life was about following instincts, blending in with the surroundings, and not overthinking things.

There were moments, though, when that popularity with the girls put him in trouble. He saw himself dealing with jealous stares, other boys narrowing their eyes at him, muttering under their breath. In some cases, girls would rally to his defense, stepping in whenever the jealousy turned into something more hostile. But for the most part, he drifted through each day without any grand aspirations, content to live as a normal student with no exceptional skills.

The memories shifted again, moving forward to a day when everything had changed. He'd seen a strange light, felt an unfamiliar energy surge within him, and suddenly, he had this powerful dojutsu—the Tenseigan. It was then he knew he was no longer the same Tomaru he once was; his spirit, his mind, and his purpose had shifted in a way that the old Tomaru would never have understood.

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With a jolt, Tomaru awoke, gasping as he returned to the present. The familiar room felt different, like a place he had both lived in for years and also just entered. He sat up, staring at his hands, the flood of memories leaving him both dazed and grounded.

"I… really am Tomaru," he whispered. "But I'm… also not."

The memories, as simple as they were, grounded him in this world in a way he hadn't expected. He could see himself in this life, not as an outsider, but as someone who belonged—someone who had already made friends, had rivals, and even a small community in Konoha.

"I'm just like any other civilian-born ninja… and yet, I'm not." He clenched his hand, feeling the pulse of power in his right eye. "With this Tenseigan… I have a gift that Tomaru never had."

But with that power came responsibility—and danger. He couldn't let anyone know. Not yet, not while he was still finding his way. He was in a world that could be both wonderful and cruel, and now he had to figure out how to navigate it without drawing too much attention.

As he sat there, he allowed himself a moment of peace. For now, he had enough to go on, enough to believe he could survive.

And with the memory of the divine figure lingering at the edge of his mind, he had to wonder… was there something more waiting for him in this life? Or was this power his only hint of the destiny he was meant to fulfill?

With a new sense of purpose, he resolved to find out.

Understood, here's a refined version without that phrase:

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Tomaru lay on his bed, staring at the ceiling. Memories drifted through his mind like fog, impossible to grasp clearly. Whenever he tried to remember his past life—or even his recent encounter with that divine figure—an ache throbbed behind his eyes, clouding his thoughts. The harder he tried, the more the memories slipped away, leaving him frustrated and exhausted. Eventually, his eyes grew heavy, and he drifted into an uneasy sleep.

As he slept, fragments of his new life began to surface. Memories from this body he now inhabited came in blurry, disconnected scenes: he saw himself growing up in an orphanage after the Kyuubi's attack, then moving into a small, basic apartment once he was old enough to attend the Academy. It was a solitary life, filled with passing faces—teachers and classmates he regarded as mere acquaintances.

In the memories, it was clear he didn't have close friends. His interactions had been polite but distant, never extending beyond casual greetings or basic conversations. He wasn't the type to reach out, rarely taking the initiative to form deeper bonds. Solitude was simpler; he could move through life without complications, without interruptions. Conversations, to him, felt like distractions, so he kept to himself, preferring quiet and the predictability of being alone.

Certainly, here's Chapter 3:

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**Chapter 3: Testing the Limits**

Tomaru stirred awake, the new memories still lingering in his mind, though not quite fully formed. The past of his current life was becoming clearer each day, giving him context for his surroundings. He knew he was an orphan, alone in a small apartment, and that this world—*Naruto's world*—was harsh and dangerous. Yet the memories from his previous life remained hazy, just out of reach.

He shook off the lingering fog from his dreams and stretched. "So, it's really come to this," he muttered to himself. "I'm actually here, in Naruto's world." A strange mixture of excitement and worry simmered beneath his thoughts. After all, this world was full of unimaginable threats. He'd never been a fighter, much less a killer. The very idea made his stomach churn. "How am I supposed to survive here…?"

His gaze drifted over to the small mirror hanging on the wall. Instinctively, he felt his hand rise to his right eye. "But then… there's this."

The Tenseigan. Just the thought of it made his heart pound. This was a power beyond anything he'd imagined possible in his old life. When he'd first felt its energy surging through him, it was overwhelming—almost like it didn't fully belong to him. But now, he wanted to know just how far he could go with it.

Steeling himself, he focused on his right eye, willing the foreign energy to respond. At first, he felt nothing—only the faint thrumming sensation, as if something was just out of reach. He tried harder, channeling his chakra carefully, letting it pool into his eye.

Suddenly, everything shifted.

The world around him sharpened, and he could see everything with a new clarity. "This… this is incredible," he whispered. Every detail became intensely vivid. Glancing out of the window, he could make out the stone-carved faces of the Hokage Monument with startling precision, each chisel mark, each imperfection. This was no ordinary vision—it was almost as though he could feel every surface, every texture.

He grinned, unable to suppress the sense of awe. "I can even see beyond the village," he realized. He focused a little harder, stretching his gaze toward the village's gates, and his vision extended outward, far beyond Konoha's borders. He could see the forests, the winding roads, the small groups of travelers and merchants moving in and out of the village. The sense of power was intoxicating.

Curious, he turned his attention to people nearby, feeling a new sense of control as he adjusted the intensity of his vision. The Tenseigan revealed more than just physical appearances—it allowed him to see their chakra networks. Each person's chakra system glowed with unique pathways and reserves. The chunin, with their standard-issue flak jackets, had mid-sized chakra reserves, while the younger students at the Academy wore their simple forehead protectors and barely showed any reserves at all. 

When he focused on a passing Jonin, however, it was like staring into a roaring flame. The chakra reserves were enormous, bright, and vibrant—a stark reminder of the gap between ordinary shinobi and the elite.

"Unbelievable," he murmured, glancing down at his own hands. He channeled the Tenseigan to get a sense of his own chakra reserves. The vast reservoir within him was something even the Jonin couldn't match. If he were to estimate, he felt as if his chakra was comparable to Naruto's during his teenage years. He'd read enough fan theories to know what that meant—his reserves were four times that of a Jonin's on average.

*But power alone doesn't mean I can survive here,* he reminded himself. He couldn't rely solely on his Tenseigan; he needed to be careful, calculated. Every move mattered. It was too easy to attract the wrong kind of attention in a place like this. He shuddered as he thought of Danzo and the schemes that could unfold if such power was discovered. *Blending in* would be crucial to surviving here.

A knock at the door shook him from his thoughts. He quickly released his chakra, letting his Tenseigan deactivate as his vision returned to normal. For now, he would have to keep this power a secret, honing it in private until he had the skills to back it up.

He moved to the door, thoughts racing.

**Chapter 4: New Bonds**

Tomaru sat in his usual spot in the Academy classroom, watching as his classmates filtered in. Everything around him felt oddly new, yet he knew he had been here countless times before. The familiarity clashed with the awareness that he was living an entirely new life, and it was hard to reconcile his memories with the reality in front of him.

Before he could get too lost in his thoughts, Ino appeared at his side, her expression bright. "Hey, Tomaru!" she greeted cheerfully, her blue eyes shining. "Did you think yesterday's class was tough? I swear Iruka-sensei's training keeps getting harder!"

For a moment, he hesitated. Normally, the old Tomaru would have given a short response, barely enough to acknowledge her question. But this time, he found himself wanting to engage. Maybe it was his own way of grounding himself in this world or maybe, unconsciously, he didn't want her to feel ignored.

"Yeah, it was a bit challenging," he replied, nodding. "But I think it's just Iruka-sensei pushing us to get stronger. We'll probably need it soon."

Ino's eyes widened in surprise—and then, to his surprise, she actually blushed. "You think so? Well, that makes sense!" She let out a soft laugh, clearly thrilled. *He actually replied,* she thought. *And he said more than just a word or two!*

Feeling encouraged, she continued, "Tomaru, have you thought about what team you want to be on? I bet you'd be an amazing teammate!"

Tomaru shrugged, managing a small smile. "I guess it'd be nice to have a good team." He paused, glancing over at Sasuke, who sat a few rows over, completely ignoring Sakura as she fawned over him. *Sasuke really does his own thing,* he thought, noting the way Sasuke barely seemed to register anyone around him.

Ino picked up on his glance and grinned. "You're way better to talk to than some people," she said, shooting a look in Sasuke's direction. "At least you actually answer when I talk to you. Sasuke… well, he doesn't even seem to notice people most of the time."

Tomaru chuckled, surprised at how easy it felt to talk to her. "Guess I'm not that bad to have around, then."

Ino's face lit up, and she looked positively elated. She'd tried so hard over the years to get closer to him, despite his usual aloofness. Today, he seemed different—warmer, more open. She felt as though she was finally breaking through, and that made her heart race with excitement. She was so used to having to initiate every conversation, to pulling him out of his shell just a little bit at a time. But now, he was meeting her halfway, and she loved it.

Meanwhile, Tomaru couldn't help but feel a sense of relief. Ino's friendliness felt refreshing, a reminder that he wasn't entirely alone in this strange new life. He didn't have friends yet, and he hadn't ever been one to actively seek them out, but for the first time, he considered the possibility of letting himself relax around someone.

As the class continued, he noticed Shikamaru casting a few glances in his direction, a mild curiosity in his eyes. Tomaru's behavior wasn't exactly out of character, but for Shikamaru, who noticed subtle shifts in people's personalities, it was a bit odd. Tomaru ignored it for now, determined to blend in as much as he could. He wasn't sure how long he could keep up the facade, but at least with Ino, talking felt natural enough.

Ino leaned over, whispering to him, "You know, Tomaru, if we end up on the same team, I promise I'll make sure we're the best in the village!"

Tomaru smiled. "With that enthusiasm, I'm sure we would be." He caught her delighted grin out of the corner of his eye, and for a brief moment, he felt as though he'd finally found some grounding in this world.

Certainly! Here's an enhanced version of **Chapter 4**, incorporating your latest details and ensuring that Tomaru's interactions align with his established character traits. The chapter emphasizes his evolving relationship with Ino, contrasts with Sasuke's aloofness towards Sakura, and includes subtle comedic elements to lighten the mood.

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### **Chapter 4: Shifting Dynamics**

The Academy classroom buzzed with the usual energy, filled with young shinobi-in-training eager to prove themselves. Tomaru walked in quietly, his straight brown hair neatly styled in a unique manner reminiscent of his appearance in *Boruto*. His bright blue eyes scanned the room, observing the familiar faces of Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru, and Ino—all classmates he had known for years.

Despite being part of the same class, Tomaru had always kept to himself, treating everyone as mere acquaintances. He wasn't particularly smart or talented, just an average student who blended into the background. His symmetrical, diamond-shaped face and attractive appearance made him popular among the girls, but he never paid much attention to it. This natural charm often kept him protected from unnecessary trouble, as other boys were too envious or intimidated to bother him.

Today, however, something felt different. As the teacher began the lesson, Tomaru found himself unusually restless, a subtle shift in his demeanor that hadn't been there before. He shook it off, focusing on the blackboard, but the change lingered.

**Ino's Attempt**

During a break, Ino approached his desk with her usual bright smile, eyes twinkling with curiosity. "Hey, Tomaru! How did you find today's training? I thought that last exercise was pretty intense."

Tomaru looked up, meeting her gaze. For the first time in a long while, he felt compelled to respond more than just the usual brief answers. "It was alright. The new drills are getting tougher, but manageable."

Ino's smile widened, genuinely happy to hear him engage more. "That's great to hear! I was worried you might be struggling with the new techniques."

Tomaru nodded, feeling a warmth spread through him. "I'm handling it. Thanks for checking in."

Ino laughed softly, clearly pleased with his response. "Anytime! If you need help, just let me know. I'd be happy to train together sometime."

Tomaru felt a sense of relief and slight amusement. "Sure, I might take you up on that."

**Naruto's Commentary**

Meanwhile, Naruto couldn't help but overhear their conversation. With his usual bluntness, he stomped over, arms crossed and a scowl on his face. "What's up with you two? You're talking like old friends or something. What's so special about Tomaru anyway?"

Several girls nearby rolled their eyes, while Ino stood her ground. "Oh, come on, Naruto. Just because Tomaru's starting to open up doesn't mean he's suddenly your best buddy."

Naruto huffed, clearly annoyed. "I'm just saying, he used to be all quiet and now he's acting like he's part of the team. What's so great about him?"

Tomaru, feeling a bit self-conscious under Naruto's scrutiny, shrugged lightly. "Nothing special. Just trying to keep up with the class."

Naruto shot him a suspicious look but didn't press further, though he muttered under his breath, "We'll see about that."

**Shikamaru's Observation**

As the tension dissipated, Shikamaru, who had been lounging in his seat, gave Tomaru a thoughtful glance. He leaned forward, lazily resting his chin on his hand. "Something's different about him today," Shikamaru mused quietly to himself. He wasn't one to overtly express his thoughts, but the subtle changes in Tomaru's behavior had caught his attention. Shikamaru's sharp mind couldn't help but notice the slight increase in Tomaru's interactions, especially with Ino.

He sighed, shaking his head. "Troublesome," he muttered, deciding it wasn't worth investigating further—for now. But the seed of curiosity had been planted, and he made a mental note to keep an eye on Tomaru's progress.

**Memory Fragments**

As the day progressed, Tomaru found himself reflecting on the recent changes. Every interaction seemed to trigger faint flashes of memories—scenes from his past life at the orphanage, his quiet existence before the Academy, and the sudden awakening of the Tenseigan. These fragments were becoming clearer, helping him piece together his new reality.

During lunch, as he sat alone, Ino approached again, this time with a plate of food. "I thought you might be hungry. Here, have some of this."

Tomaru accepted the plate, feeling a surge of gratitude. "Thanks, Ino. That's really kind of you."

Ino beamed, clearly pleased with his acceptance. "No problem! We're classmates, right? It's only natural to help each other out."

As they ate, Tomaru realized how much more comfortable he felt around Ino when he engaged more. Her genuine kindness and persistence in reaching out were different from the usual interactions he had with others. Unlike Sasuke, who dismissed Sakura as a nuisance and maintained a cold distance, Ino had always taken the initiative to connect with him, making Tomaru feel less isolated.

**A Different Approach**

Later that evening, as Tomaru practiced controlling his chakra in his apartment, he couldn't shake the feeling of Ino's happiness from earlier. He decided to experiment with his Tenseigan further, cautiously activating it to observe his surroundings with enhanced perception. The statues of the Hokage were even more detailed through his advanced vision, reaffirming his place in this world.

*This power… it's incredible, but I need to use it wisely,* he thought, mindful of the dangers that came with such abilities. The memories from his past life were becoming more accessible, and he could sense that understanding them would be key to mastering his new life.

As he closed his eyes to rest, Tomaru felt a deep sense of resolve. He might not have friends or close relationships yet, but with Ino's growing interest and his own newfound powers, he was slowly beginning to carve out his place in the world of Naruto. The journey ahead was uncertain, but for the first time since his awakening, he felt a glimmer of hope.

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### **Enhancements and Key Points:**

**Character Interactions:**

 - **Ino's Engagement:** Ino approaches Tomaru more actively, showing her efforts to get closer. This highlights Tomaru's shift in behavior and Ino's happiness with his increased interactions.

 - **Naruto's Bluntness:** Naruto remains true to his character by making blunt comments about Tomaru, adding both tension and a touch of humor.

 - **Sasuke's Indifference:** Sasuke continues to ignore Sakura, maintaining his established dynamic, contrasting with Tomaru's new interactions with Ino.

 - **Shikamaru's Observations:** Shikamaru notices subtle changes in Tomaru but remains nonchalant, staying true to his lazy yet perceptive nature.

**Internal Monologue and Memory Fragments:**

 - Tomaru's internal reflections provide depth to his character, showing his struggle to adapt and his cautious optimism.

 - The memory fragments hint at his past life, providing a bridge between his old and new selves without overwhelming the reader.

**Comedic Elements:**

 - Tomaru's quiet demeanor contrasted with Naruto's loud personality creates natural comedic tension.

 - The exaggerated comparison to Spider-Man adds a humorous touch to his excitement about his abilities.

**Consistency with Previous Chapters:**

 - Maintains continuity with Tomaru's discovery of the Tenseigan and his cautious approach to using his powers.

 - Aligns with his background of being an average, unassuming ninja with a significant power reserve.

**Character Development:**

 - Tomaru starts to open up more, especially with Ino, indicating his gradual transformation.

 - Ino's role as the proactive character trying to connect adds a dynamic layer to their relationship.

This revised Chapter 4 should provide a richer, more engaging narrative that aligns with your vision for Tomaru's character and his interactions within the Academy.

Let me know if you'd like to add more details or further refine any part of this chapter!

Certainly! Let's continue to **Chapter 5**, focusing on Tomaru's continued adjustments to his new life, deeper interactions with Ino, and his ongoing struggle to remember and master his powers. Here, we can bring out more of his internal challenges and social dynamics in the class while keeping the story engaging and consistent with the tone we've built.

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