Dear reader,
As we come to a significant juncture in this tale, I want to take a moment to reach out directly to you. If you have been following the journey of Javier, the Raven, Isabella, and all those entwined in this grand story, I truly hope that you are enjoying every twist and turn. But as with all stories, there are always areas for improvement, and your opinion, your thoughts, are invaluable to me as the author.
This chapter—and indeed, all that has come before it—has been crafted with the intention of drawing you into a world of gods, destiny, and the complexity of human emotions. But I am not just here to tell you the story; I want to grow with you as we continue this journey together.
So, if you have enjoyed the ride so far, or if there are aspects you feel could be better, I encourage you to share your thoughts. Your honest feedback, whether it's about the pacing, character development, the emotional depth of the story, or anything else that comes to mind, will be incredibly helpful.
Is Javier's character coming across as I envisioned him? Are you feeling the weight of his power, the softness of his moments of vulnerability? What about Isabella—has her growth from a simple, strong woman to a mother of destiny resonated with you? What do you think about the Raven as a guiding force? And, how are the relationships evolving—do they feel authentic, meaningful, and deep?
I'd also love to hear about your thoughts on the world-building. Are the church, the prophecies, and the ancient forces of the Raven as vivid to you as I hoped? Are you feeling immersed in the world or do you wish to see more from different perspectives?
Your comments are not just a source of validation—they are essential to shaping the direction of the story. Whether you loved it or think there are areas for improvement, your feedback will guide me in refining this journey for you.
So, if you've enjoyed what you've read up until now—or if you think there's room to grow—please take a moment to leave your thoughts below. Be honest, be specific, and help me create a story that truly connects with you.
Thank you for being part of this adventure. Together, we can make this story even better.
With gratitude,
[Your's favorite Raven]