Page 1
Panel 1: Scene: A crowded school bus, students are chatting, and the atmosphere is lively.
Narration (Caption): Chapter 2: Luya's Operation
Peter: (looking anxious, searching for a seat) "Where do I sit?"
Panel 2: Scene: Peter looks downcast, sitting alone, glancing over at Luya, who is confidently chatting with some classmates.
Narration (Caption): Peter, withdrawn and lonely, speaks only to his brother, Luya.
Peter (thought bubble): "I wish I could be like Luya."
Page 2
Panel 1: Scene: Luya is portrayed as a strong and handsome figure, effortlessly fending off three gangsters.
Narration (Caption): Luya, a force to be reckoned with, has a reputation that commands respect.
SFX: WHAM!
Panel 2: Scene: Peter spots MJ, his crush, nestled in Thompson's arms, sharing a laugh.
Peter (thought bubble): "MJ... why is she with him?"
SFX: Sigh...
Page 3
Panel 1: Scene: Thompson smirks, wrapping his arm tighter around MJ.
Thompson: "What a puny Peter!"
SFX: Laughter erupts in the background.
Panel 2: Scene: Peter's expression darkens, feeling isolated and hurt.
Peter (thought bubble): "Why do they have to laugh at me?"
Page 4
Panel 1: Scene: A shadow looms over Thompson, revealing Luya standing tall.
Luya: "I said... you better watch your mouth."
Narration (Caption): The protector steps in.
Panel 2: Scene: Thompson looks up, surprised and furious.
Thompson: "Who do you think you are, kid?"
SFX: Grrrr...
Page 5
Panel 1: Scene: Tension builds as the bus falls silent, students holding their breath.
Narration (Caption): The atmosphere thickens; a confrontation looms.
Panel 2: Scene: Luya grips Thompson's wrist with a fierce look.
Luya: "You might not be able to speak next time."
SFX: Creeeak!
Page 6
Panel 1: Scene: Thompson's face contorts in pain as Luya squeezes his wrist.
Thompson: "Damn you!"
SFX: Thud!
Panel 2: Scene: A close-up of MJ's terrified face as she watches the impending fight.
MJ: "No! Please, don't!"
Page 7
Panel 1: Scene: A sickening crack echoes through the bus.
SFX: CRACK!
Panel 2: Scene: Students stare wide-eyed as Thompson staggers back, holding his wrist.
Narration (Caption): The tables have turned.
Thompson: "What just happened?!"
Page 8
Panel 1: Scene: Luya stands tall, looking down at Thompson.
Luya: "Next time, keep your mouth shut."
SFX: Release...
Panel 2: Scene: Thompson slumps back into his seat, defeated.
Narration (Caption): Whispers ripple through the bus.
Student 1: "How did he do that?"
Student 2: "That's Lightning Thompson!"
Page 9
Panel 1: Scene: Peter looks at Luya with admiration, eyes wide.
Peter: "Wow! How did you do that?"
Panel 2: Scene: Luya rolls his eyes, trying to sound wise.
Luya: "There's an old saying..."
Page 10
Panel 1: Scene: Peter excitedly interrupts Luya, misunderstanding the proverb.
Peter: "Oh! I know! 'Tell Xixi to cover Junjie!'"
Panel 2: Scene: Luya shakes his head, smirking.
Luya: "Idiot. It's: 'When someone changes, view them with new eyes.'"
Page 11
Panel 1: Scene: Peter stares at Luya, confused, as he walks away.
Narration (Caption): Peter couldn't help but admire his brother's strength.
Panel 2: Scene: Peter glances at MJ, lost in thought.
Peter (thought bubble): "If I had a physique like that... maybe they'd notice me too."
Page 12
Panel 1: Scene: MJ looks at Luya, admiration in her eyes.
Narration (Caption): She wished for a brother like Luya, a protector.
Panel 2: Scene: A close-up of MJ's wistful expression, her insecurities surfacing.
MJ (thought bubble): "Then no one would dare bully me again..."
End of Chapter 2
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