The above passage is a section written in the third person point of view (3rd pov) and looks to be from an explicit adult romance narrative. Translations from English to German can sometimes be a challenge, particularly when nuances and connotations are to be carried over from one language to another. The German adaptation must be respectful of the source material and sensitive to the emotional tone of the passage while adhering to grammatical correctness. Below, I will optimize the German translation to make it more natural while retaining the essence of the narrative:
3. Person Erzählperspektive