Rishabh_sharma_RIS

India

Hey you guys are looking at me.....

I think I am ahead so I am the elemento or you can call me the supreme lap of nature

I know you people must be thinking how did this happen, so wait a bit, have some patience and don't get into a fight

Hey I didn't tell you my name sorry my name is Eklavya or you can call me Shravan also So this is the story of that world wait wait wait listen to the whole story, I will tell you everything from my birth date till now so hold your problems and stay with me

This is from April 10, 2007, at 12:00 in the night.

I'm sorry we couldn't save your son.But we can try, tell me we can try, why should I lose my wife, she had taken great care of me, tell your children, doctor, say something, I cannot let my children die!

Suddenly there is a thunder and lightning flashes and then the dead child starts screaming and crying loudly. His mother lying beside him was unconscious so she did not know anything but his entire doctor group and his father who used to work in a formal medical for a pittance were completely shocked because till now he had not even breathed for full 2 minutes but what happened suddenly?

But Eklavya's father i.e. Ram did not have any problem with this, he was just relieved that his son is alive and both mother and son can now live happily, but things do not happen so easily, this world is made up of illusions.

He had lost his life as a child but hell was no exception. When he was 1 year old, he got a disease called 'Bansan' but even then he survived. When he was 2 years old, he got another disease at home but he survived. This continued till he turned 16. And when he turned 16, strange things happened and the surprising thing was that every time on his birthday, everything happened to him and all this happened because of his karma, neither Ram nor his mother Nature could know this till today.

As Eklavya turned 16, he started becoming completely healthy, his fat body started coming into shape, the skinny asthma patient started feeling sorry and the most surprising thing was his height which was 5:4 in the first 15 years and by the time he turned 16, it had become 5:11.

This was the story of my childhood but what happened to me after I turned 16, that from being so healthy, strong and weak I became a supreme God. Know the story but keep it, understand and think. We will discuss further in chapter 2, until then Jai Prakritik

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wonder and nice novel. The description is just the right way to nail down the real job. I look forward to more chapters ☺️

Wonderful writing, an absolute masterpiece waiting to be read. 
First chapter is so exciting that people just have to continue reading. There is nothing much I can say without spoiling the amazing plot, you all have to give it a try.

This is book is literally storytelling, the narrations feels like I'm reading a diary, it's on a first point of view. Though some paragraphs are really long, it's kinda exhausting to read without breaks and some missing punctuations only. Author should keep updating too^^

Alright, first the carrot.
This is a rather interesting working work in the prospective of the author, in taking their experiences and turning into a unique adaptation of fantasy.
(As there are only 2 chapter's I can't really comment to much on the fantasy aspect as we are still in the introductory faze of the novel)
This Novel offers personality and help bring a new experience to it's readers.


Now the Stick.
This novel as quiet a few issues with grammar and punctuation and can be hard to read for some individuals.


My Honest Opinion:
I believe this story can be a interesting read if you can push past some of it's current issues.


Genuinely the only issue i have the run on sentences. other than that it's rather easy to read that could easily be a very good book to read.
keep up the work.

The book has several grammatical errors that confuse you a lot on who's exactly speaking or whether it's the author commentating. The myth concept is intriguing, but if you could fix these errors, the quality would heighten substantially.

Well, where should I begin?
While I would like to sugar-coat the author's writing, the way they develop the story, and the information the reader swallows, I would like to give an accurate review of the story thus far. However, with the story being only two chapters long as of me writing this review, this should be taken with a grain of salt as the author will inevitably improve, and they have asked me to write this review very early.

Let's start off with the writing quality. There may be grammatical errors, but these don't deter you from the plot, so they're not a big deal. The only problem I have is the lack of quotation marks or knowing who is talking to who, and if the character is actually talking or not.

The story develops at a normal rate, with the first chapter being significantly shorter than the second, although in the first one it does seem like the author is writing the story in such a way that it feels like they're trying to push the reader on with the story, seeking to "get on with it" already.

The character design is solid, but the main character suddenly becoming a gigachad within the first chapter out of nowhere makes it feel a little like they're rushed.

I cannot write on the updating stability as of now with only two chapters, so I am average on it.

The world background is fairly well described, with the reader knowing their surroundings.

All in all, I believe the writer is using their raw talent to write. While talent is excellent to have, I believe talent alone cannot suffice without experience.

It is a fascinating novel. Expecting more chapter, author!

The writing style has a lot of personality, but it does seem a bit awkward and random at times. The writing is more casual and less formal, leading the reader to a deeper understanding of the main character. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the story is pretty good overall. There is only one chapter, but I'm sure the author will come out with more chapters soon.

This book isn't generally what I'd read, especially since there's no synopsis to explain the sorry. From what I've read alone, it's about the author's past and you can tell that there are a ton of references from his country, culture and past. Pretty solid, wish it had better grammar tho cos there's a ton of errors. I'd suggest using Google translate and asking someone who knows English to edit for you since English isn't your home language. Good book tho

the story writing is amazing the author has put a lot of effort writing this is a must try for me

This is a challenging work, the author is embedded in the narrative and it feels more like someone telling you a story than reading one, it's definitely rather unique. The grammar could use some work, as well as the narrative cohesion, but it's a good read for those who enjoy self-referential works.

I don't know much about myth or anything like that, but reading this book make me want to read more about myth. But there were several name that I heard of which make me glad I wasn't that late. The writing style was very unique and story was interesting me.

But sometime reading it make me confused about who's telling who, but with more reading I can somewhat guess. Keep it up, author. Good work!

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ELEMENTO : THE SUPREME GOD OF THE NATURE

Table of contents

Volume 1 :KNOWING ME

Chapter 1 - OH HELLO I AM __