So, hi.
1. I started the Afterlife as an attempt to overcome my social anxiety, I thought that it wasn't that hard as there is a f*bleep*ton of fanfiction, quality and not. And then came my only(for now) review from LittleRedsWolf. I read it, and my mind shutdown. When reboot commenced, the only thought i had was - I suck. 3 month time skip, i couldn't forget this work. I wanted to at least try to, i don't know, continue to write, then i reread my work. I barely understood it. Right now I feel like I woke up, and afraid of falling asleep again. So LittleRedsWolf - thank you for. . . bringing me outside, i guess.
2. I edited chapters 1-4, so i hope they are more clear now
3. The main concept was describing mc thoughts. I want to create a character that will inner monologue almost every single moment.
4. System. I have a concept ready, just finishing touches are required. I don't think there will be a lot of status checks, but we'll see.
And so i'm finishing my rambling. I won't abandon the Afterlife, but schedule is a no for now. So, be well with your life. Serenity_Blades, going to sheath.