Hi there reader this is my first novel ever and I would love to hear feedback. Even something the reader might like to see in the novel. This first page is just to give some info about the world of Eden. Power levels and the like. Enjoy!

In this world there are three large continents. 

Indra ( where the beginning of the story is placed) : is home to many races but is dominated by two major factions. The Dragon and the Vampires. Both of these races are considered to be in the top ten leading strengths in the world. Dragons being number 2 and the Vampire at number 3

Seiga: A dark, smokey, and he'll fire filled place with nothing but demons who wish to conquer the world of Eden. The demon race does not mean devil or even incubus and succubi. They will be part of the demihuman race. That is a very key part to the story and will be expanding apon later. The demons are monsters that are made of mana. They are giant in size the smallest still reaching a two story building. They are the strongest race on Eden.

Har: A place of ice and snow. Always cold but still home to many as the races very. However the the land is under the rule of one king. It's the most peaceful land in Eden as the king rules with a strict iron fist to keep it that way. Demons are incapable of going there due to the anti mana field that borders the whole land. How long that persist, nobody knows. 

Top ten strongest races bases on the strength of their king.

1 Demons

2 Dragons

3 Vampire and other undead 

4 Werewolf ( separate from beast kin)

5 Beast kin

6 Human

7 fairy 

8 shadow kin. ( live in the darkness never to see the sun these people never come to the surface thanks to the Dragons deadly assault on there people killing their last king.)

9 Goblin

10 Witches( Queen was killed by Alucard and the rest went into hiding knocking them from #5 to # 10

I will try to update every day other than Monday. And 2 chapters for Sunday to make up the difference.