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Chapter 23 - Chapter 23: Light saber upgrade and Negotiation

"This is very nice, hope they will walk away when i try to negotiate with them. It's like getting free stuff then."

"Palpatine can you upgrade my lightsaber towards the the uncommen rank?" [Certainly host. This will cost 5000 system points. Does host want to proceed?]

"Yes"

[Ding host hast upgraded Count Dooku's Lightsaber towards the uncommen rank. Host has 6950 system points remaining.] "Palpatine can you show me the information from the lightsaber?" [Certainly Host.]

[Count Dooku's Lightsaber(uncommon): An lightsaber used by count Dooku. Because of the parts and materials used in this lightsaber it can't cut through metals above the rare grade.]

"Very... very nice. When i modify the lightsaber with the primal stones it will be even more powerfull. Thank you Palpatine." [You're welcome host.]

With that Callum changed into his nightingale armor and snuck out with his lightsaber clipped at his side. He walked down the road towards the village where Ellis lives.

After a while he saw light on the road. People with torches walking up the mountain with angry looks. They walked further until they saw Callum(Dooku) with is nightingale armor on.

"Who are you and why did you come down this mountain?" Shouted one of the angry people with armor on and torches in their hand.

I did an gentleman bow and answered them. "My name is Dooku. Right hand of prince Callum, prince of Katolis. I came down the mountain because i saw a moving light comming up the mountain. Thought it was a wildfire spreading. Now tell me why are all of you here?"

With many angry shouts going on, one person walked towards me with an angry look and a sunfire dagger in his hand. He was the one performer(adventurer) with the sunfire dagger, Tristan was his name.

"On the mountain there is an filthy elven mage. She made many illusions on this mountain that killed many humans over the years. People fell of a cliff because they saw scary illusions, people had their mind broken in fear and many more examples." Said Tristan in an angry voice.

The angry guy had a point. Lujanne and the mages before her that guarded the Moon Nexus were going pretty overboard with their illusions and actually this land was of the humans technically when they were banished to the west, but kept some land apparently themselves, like the Moon Nexus.

"This true, but this is the property of the elven mage Lujanne. For trespassers she can decide herself what she will do with them, while i do not agree with her actions she can decide that. No one else. Also because of the relationship between elves and humans this was probably necessary to protect this sacred land of the elves from humans, but it won't be anymore. She will open the land for everyone in the future again. It won't matter if you're a human, elf, dragon or something else."

The angry mob began to talk among themselves and voice their opinion. Seeing that the angry mob began to loose their anger, Tristan began to shout.

"Do you think that will make it okay after everything that happened? We will kill that filthy elf if it's the last thing we do. Now stand aside Dooku. We will kill that elf and claim that sacred land of the elves for the humans."

"Yes, you tell him Tristan!"

"Justice!"

"Death to the elves!"

With many more shouts and angry noises, but Dooku kept his calm and stood still in front of Tristan.

"No i will not move. Leave the mountain. I will give you the chance to turn around, otherwise i will see you as enemy and kill all of you."

Everyone of them began to laugh. "You kill all of us alone? Ha, don't make me laugh. Everyone let's kill this right hand man of the prince and after that we will go up the mountain to kill that filthy elf."

Tristan the took out his dagger and tried to cut Dooku with it. He dodged and kicked him in the balls. He dropped the dagger, before it fell to the ground, Dooku caught it and decapitated him with it.

The angry mob looked at Dooku with fear and anger. Dooku then threw the dagger at the side. "So this is why all of you were so confident? Haha all you're stupidity knows no bounds. Since all you choosen you're fate i will repeat that all of you will die."

With that Callum unclipped his lightsaber and turned it on. It showed a man with silver/grey armor on with yellow eyes and an sinister grin in the purple light.

Author note: So i will discuss the trailer.

First Comment: Kareem and Sol Regul will team up so his death will be in the volume of season 5. Some of the quests regarding the sunfire elves will be changed.

Second Comment: Viren will save Claudia, but in the novels case it will be Callum. In season 4 Claudia said elves hate them so in this novel she will use Terry but doesn't love him.

Third Comment: They will search for a way to kill a star touch elf. This will also change some of the earlier chapters or he will know this when he gets the information in that library in the sun fire elf place.

Fourth Comment: He will help the parents of Rayla and Runaan that are trapped in the cursed coins. Because they have problems doesn't mean he shouldn't save them. Also he can get payback for his father when Runaan is back. Beating him and smacking him around. Maybe also goes to prison for his crimes.

Fifth Comment: There will be a mission about the bloodmoon elf. Haven't decided how i will write it. Hope there also be some flashbacks about the two year time-skip.

Leave a comment about this and what i can do to improve my story.