ThePpp_Pppp

None of the character belong to me except for the mc all of them are the creation of Koyoharu Gotouge

Michael was just your average kid, apart from being a pretty good cook he was normal in everything else until on day where he got ran over by a bus.

His story did not end there as he got another chance at life with three wishes and a brand new demon skater world with stronger demons.

With Rengoku as his ‘brother’ he will have more then enough positive influence on him to make sure he become a good person.

Just hope MC has this this power/ability.
Unrestricted Self Development
POWER/ABILITY TO: Develop without limit. The power to develop skills, traits, and abilities without limit.
Also Called
• Development/Growth Infinitum
• Unlimited Growth/Development Potential
• Boundless/Endless/Limitless Development

Capabilities: The user has the ability to endlessly develop in whatever field of expertise, meaning they can continue to develop themselves well and become stronger, faster, more durable, etc. without end. Through learning, training or otherwise, they can increase their abilities as much as they wish. Has the potential to develop themselves in every way, physically or metaphysically, mentally or bodily, etc. In time, they may have a power that surpasses all other living beings in their realities.
Emphasis: Users do this manually, not automatically, of their own will. They can develop themselves as much as they want. They can pause development if they want, and then start again if they want. The power is under their control, so they are less likely to encounter an undesirable outcome than the powers that operate automatically.

Applications

Base (General)

Potential Capability

• Absolute Potential: Has absolute potential, capacity for growth and learning, allowing to learn/master absolutely anything they want, regardless of their skills, personality, species, etc. Have no ceiling to what they can learn and no limitations on what they can develop, allowing them to develop endlessly in any and all areas, and can attain all powers naturally.

Control Capability

• Self Supremacy: Fully aware of everything that composes it and has full control over everything that composes it.
• Mindshifting: Direct and total control over their mental structure.
• Adaptive Mind: Can adapt mentally to any situation/condition/event/environment.
• Clear Mind: Mental boundaries are completely erased allowing their mental abilities to be completely unrestricted.
• Hyper Mind: Can process unlimited amounts of information, without any hindrances or backlashes of information.
• State of Mind: Can enter a special state of mind, where they understand who they are and what their true purpose is.
• Body Supremacy: Has complete and total control over one’s bodily capabilities.
• Adaptive Metabolism: Possesses a supernaturally adaptive metabolism.
• Hyper Self-Awareness: Has an increased self-awareness and conscious knowledge of oneself.
• Self-Manipulative Puppetry: Can control their own body like a marionette, allowing them to move freely.
• Supernatural Bodily Aspects: Possesses supernatural bodily aspects and enhanced attributes of their anatomy/biology/physiology.
• Thoughtless Activity: Can move normally without using thought at all or move and act even when their mind is not working properly.
• Self-Aura Manipulation: Able to see, change and manipulate their own aura.
• Aura Arts: Can utilize the Aura Arts, a specialized system of techniques based around aura.
• Expanded Presence: Can expand/spread their aura/consciousness/presence/soul.
• Area Domination: Can perceive and manipulate the area covered by the aura.

Signature (Details)

Ability Capability

• Adaptive Development: Possesses a rapid development rate, allowing them to permanently push back their limits.
• Action/Duration Empowerment: Becomes stronger, faster, smarter, more durable, etc. from activities and passing of time.
• Accelerated Development: Can improve their natural abilities far faster and to a greater beyond the limitations.
• Adaptive Appearance: Can change their appearance/form based on their adaptations.
• Accelerated Aging: Can reach adulthood faster by accelerating the growth of the body.
• Intuitive Aptitude: Can instantly analyze, learn and understand the workings and mechanics of anything, regardless of how simple or complex.
• Adaptive Learning: Can gather and instantly understand any form of knowledge and adapt the skills, powers, etc., to suit their needs.
• Ability Int

I literally understood nothing, thanks for the info

First Form: Unknowing Fire - The user charges towards their target at high speeds and unleashes a singular slash that aims to decapitate them.


Second Form: Rising Scorching Sun-The user releases an arching sword slash upwards.


Third Form: Blazing Universe- The user swings their blade downwards in an arc.


Fourth Form: Blooming Flame Undulation- The user swings their blade in a circular motion that is used to defend from incoming attacks or slash multiple targets in one swoop.


Fifth Form: Flame Tiger - The user performs a series of powerful sword slashes that seemingly takes the form of a flaming tiger.


Ninth Form: Rengoku- The most powerful Flame Breathing technique. The user takes a high stance with their sword before dashing forward at high speeds. The technique is powerful enough to completely carve out the ground in its wake. 


One of the reasons the mc is black more like light skin, the reasons is simple, ancestor, the sun that is all I'm willing to say or just wait till you arrive at chapter 33title name ancestor.


Also he will be overpowered just not at the start because of everything he will be jugling at the same time,I hope you guys understand


Would have preferred if he was just transferred with the Sharingan and taking on the last name of Uchiha instead of the demon slayer world having actually an Uchiha Clan. It would have atpeast made the story simple and have him more be creatice in concealing his power or trying to explain the sharingan. The wholw Hyuga and Uchica clan existing just feel forced.

Well to start the prologue is rubbish and unnecessary, the uchiha powers that he asks for were already in the world and the talent they give him is inferior to the yoriichi,
I might as well have given him this talent and he would be superior to the main character you have.
Despite the fact that with the sharingan he should have an advantage, he is always cornered and on the verge of losing, if you wanted to even fight, do not put the "dominated" tab.
You did a good job handling things outside of the canon timeline, the romance isn't bad, the protagonist's personality is quite fanatic at times, other than that it's okay and the characters' personalities feel quite natural to the cannon (good job). .
Well, if you decide to do another Demon Slayer fic after this one, here are some ideas: it doesn't include God, that creates a lot of holes in the script in the long run, it introduces another romantic interest, Shinobu and his sister are already over-exploited (and in Personally, I always like the rest of the girls more than her) for the ability to cheat, use the talent of yoriichi (that guy prolonged his mother's life without knowing medicine and was superior to a fencing master since he was little) another power that you can use is the hamon (JoJo's Bizarre Adventure) that would leave you super dominated and finally you would not make your protagonist so obsessed with the canon "that if I save someone, I keep things the same".

I may be shameless but I know this story is not a full 5star yet.I will  try to write better but I hope to anyone that read it to enjoy what my imagination was able to conjure.

3/5 The writing quality is better from the original but still bad. The story development and character develop to side by side and I don’t like how it’s going. It’s basicly an op reincarnation fanfic, nothing else. The mc has sharigan only upto three tomoe but can copy breathe types and movements, uzumaki body which allowed him to do like 300 push-ups at 9yrs no prior training, super healing, he magicly gets jutsu from his mindscape. It’s absurd how op the mc is, the author then included rengoku as a side character and had his strength massively increase from the cannon just to have a companion for the mc. The mc is making changes to cannon and yet doesn’t build the world to accommodate the butterfly effects. This writing isn’t anything special it’s decent but not good. There is nothing complex about it, very 2 dimensional.

Grammar is atrocious. Also, the author is trying to keep the mc from being OP as much as possible. Which is VERY disappointing since I came here specifically due to the #Overpowered tag.  I regret adding this into my library since I was excited to read it due to the overpowered tag. As you know, the greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment

⚠️ Grammer is horrible! main reason I left

Other then that, the novel isn't too bad, it's got its ups and down and the plot is intresting and engaging but the atrocious  grammar makes this novel impossible to read

So the grammar isn’t the best but that’s not something i really care about, the only problem I had with the story was that it was meant to be a overpowered main character story but he keeps getting nerfed by the author. What’s the point of adding an overpowered tag to the story when he’s really not powerful? He was getting beat by an uppermoon and even had to go all out and another thing was that he supposedly had the highest talent but it’s quite obvious that he doesn’t.

There are serious problems with the powers of the mc, the background of the powers, the stupidity of the god and the personality also requires improvement. Other than that, you did a good job building the story.

Great story worth reading👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Let me start by saying that the concept of an OC being reborn in the Demon Slayer universe as an Uchiha is quite intriguing. The author's ability to create a world that blends both universes seamlessly is admirable. The storyline is captivating and keeps you engaged throughout the entire story.

The character development of the OC is well done, as we see their growth and how they come to terms with their unique abilities. The interactions with the other characters from Demon Slayer add a nice touch, giving the reader a sense of familiarity while exploring a new concept.

The writing style is fluid and easy to follow, with a good balance of action, suspense, and emotions. Although there are some minor grammatical errors, they do not detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.

Overall, I would highly recommend this story to any fan of either the Demon Slayer or Naruto series. The combination of the two universes and the well-crafted OC make for an enjoyable and entertaining read.

Grammar is ehh 
                            

Empecé el ff hoy y por lo que estoy leyendo tiene un ritmo rápido, no me desagrada y la verdad le daré la oportunidad
Pddt. Agregó a la biblioteca 

umbis it just me or is the description for the novel saying it's demon skater????

i like this story so much , the story development was good .

nah. dropped. the concept is good, but the execution is pretty bad. need some improvement on grammar as well

the over all story is good though you may need to think about taking a editor due to the many spelling mistakes and the formation of sentences the story was fine thoug you should focus on making your dight scenes better and your romance was subpar at best though it was good for a short read

I guess I liked this novel, even if I didn't finished it yet. Well, the main problem is the grammar, but I trust the author will improve or at least keep at this level, because It still bothers me but not too much. So even if the mc is not that overpowered, he IS still pretty strong, so I would give it a 4/5

¿Hay NTR?                                                                                                                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                         
                                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                               

Lmy[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Quisiera darle mas estrellas pero los primeros capítulos, tiene demasiadas palabras sin sentido que a veces te hace perder el sentido de la historia pero lo peor es que con el poder y conocimiento que se supone tiene es tan malo para pelear con los demonios principales, aunque parece que esto va cambiar en los próximos capítulos, ya que casi no hay faltas de ortografía y se entiende mas la historia, además de que espero después de la ultima pelea donde casi lo matan ahora pelee en serio desde el inicio 

Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Info