This is my first ever time writing anything so I really would appreciate anything help or tips you guys can give me.English is not first language
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Hi, my name is Michael, and I died not too long ago. I got hit by a bus. It was a normal day after school when I decided to go buy some food like cereal and milk because we were running out. After I finished cleaning the dishes, I decided to go buy some groceries. I looked left and right, and since there were no cars and the traffic light was red, I decided to cross the road.
As I crossed, I got unexpectedly hit by a bus. I couldn't understand how it happened. I looked everywhere, but there was no bus. The street was empty.
Now I find myself floating in darkness with only my thoughts. It's a horrible experience to be stuck with your thoughts for so long that you start to hallucinate and see things that aren't there. To pass the time, I started counting, but I lost track after reaching the thousands. So I decided to delve into my memories and rewatch all the anime I had ever seen, over and over again.
"Hello there, my child," said a heavenly voice. "Huh, who are you?" Michael asked, freaking out.
"Don't worry, you're fine. I'm what you guys call a 'ROB.' I'm here to grant you three wishes for reincarnation because you died before your time," said the ROB.
"There are no strings attached to that, right?" Michael asked.
"No, you are a good kid, and I wanted to reward you for being such a good person in your short life," the ROB replied.
"Me, a good person? I just try to have a good mind and not be overly rude or aggressive. But first, are my parents okay?" Michael asked.
"They are fine, trust me. They mourned your death for a while, but after 6 years, they were able to recover and find happiness again. They miss you," the ROB assured him.
"Can I go back to them or at least help them in some way?" Michael asked.
"I'm sorry, my child. I can't grant that wish. However, I can tell you that they lived the rest of their lives happily," the ROB said.
"Okay," Michael said, sounding defeated. "What world am I going to?" he asked.
"You are going to the Demon Slayer world. I've seen too many people die at the hands of a demon who thinks he is a god. I've granted someone powerful talents to kill him, but they came close and failed because that coward decided to flee," the ROB explained (A/N: By 'coward,' he means Muzan, not Yoriichi).
"You're talking about Yoriichi. But how can I help? If I join the Demon Slayer corps, I'm afraid I'll die brutally. I'm not that strong," Michael expressed his concern.
"That's where the wishes come into play. You have three, but they cannot be too overpowered," the ROB clarified.
"For my first wish, I want to have the best physique in all of Demon Slayer history, preferably an Uzumaki physique. For my second wish, I want to possess great talent, one of the highest possible, along with great potential. And for my last wish, I want to have the abilities of an Uchiha without the curse of hatred," Michael stated his wishes.
"Your first wish is easy; I can grant that. Your second wish can also be fulfilled. However, for your
third wish, I have to remove the Mangekyou Sharingan because it would be too overpowered for the Demon Slayer world. At best, I can remove the demon's healing factor when your Sharingan is active," the ROB explained (A/N: This refers to the Mangekyou Sharingan ability).
"I'm fine with that. Can you let me know when I'll arrive in the Demon Slayer world? Also, how well will the Sharingan work considering I'll be the only one with chakra and the ability to use it?" I inquired.
"You will be four years older than the main character and will be dropped off at the Rengoku family house. You will be adopted by them since I know he's your favorite character. As for the Sharingan, you will see the life energy of others, and with your chakra, you will learn new Jutsu along with a unique skill that I will provide," Rob answered.
"So, if I train hard enough, can I save him?" I asked eagerly.
"That depends on you and your determination, my child,"Rob replied.
"Thank you very much. This is a wonderful opportunity for me," I expressed my gratitude.
"Goodbye, my child. May you have a fulfilling life," the spirit said, as I felt myself being engulfed by something and soon fell unconscious.
700-word for my first time, I'm saying I'm doing decent if you guys can help fix my mistake I will appreciate I will also appreciate it if you guys help me if I make a mistake about the time for demon slayer.