Melody memorized the newly added lyrics to the song. The tune and chorus were hers but the designated songwriter for the album had to correct some lines in the third stanza and the first bridge so the soul of the music could come alive.
♪...I say I'll leave but I get in trouble every time I look into your eyes,
You tell me lies
You break my heart
And the worst part is...
I'll do it all over again
under the quenching rain...♪
"Whoa..."
Melody took a second to glance at the lyric sheet and make sure she got all the new wordings on her second try. She did.
"The lyrics are so much better now. Not bad, not bad at all..."
Melody nodded as she noticed the few rhymes and repeated lines in the next paragraph.
♪Tears turn scarlet, blood runs cold
Even my heart feels the hold
Of the pain, I've been holding back and it's eating me from deep inside
I'm withering...
I'm withering...
