Hello everyone
Today in college, instead of paying attention to the class, I was thinking about the chapter after the chapter I was writing today, which is the one after tomorrow... yes, that confusing.
Well, the point is that an idea was presented that would be pretty shoehorned at this point, but I kind of wanted to do it, but I also didn't want to hurt the story.
What went through my head is to rewrite the story from the beginning, although much of it would be exactly the same, referring to from when Red entered Hogwarts onwards.
I have received many comments about how bad the origin story was, how spoiled the Red was, how horrible the character was, the character's name change, the sexualization of 11-year-olds, and the outright personality change.
At that time (when I started writing it) I had no idea if I was still continuing with the story, it was only the comments of a few that prompted me to continue it, if not, possibly in a week I would have deleted the book
So now I ask you, especially those who have accompanied and supported me for a while like JhonWark, Yuishiro_Haru(Who owes the cover), sofia_robledo, shockfoxx, AbsoluteLoli_Lover, Maizuky_Nichan(I don't write anymore because there are hundreds and it doesn't end but also to everyone else)
Should I rewrite the book?
I clarify that if so, I would have:
*Red's wacky personality as we have it now.
*It's considered a porn with a story (The harem is going to ask from the beginning and not like now that it started at Hogwarts... only maybe there won't be many kinds of ******* scenes so soon, but maybe yes, I don't know)
*Many of the same scenes (such as the blackmailing of Pansy, Tenebrius, the prank on Hermione and Susan's joke [Although some people didn't like it])
*Powers that I was going to gain later, earlier, and powers that I already had, perhaps modified
I hope they reply.