Jay: Well, that's not exactly how I expected to go!
drip-drop!
Jay: Laying on the hard, wet concrete floor.
"thinks Jay, listening to the rain sounds as he slowly bleeds out, unknown to anyone there." drip-drop!
Jay: Guess I wasn't strong enough, huh?
drip-drop!
Jay: The movie's got this weirdly right tho drip-drop!
Jay: The memories keep flashing by; my body feels weaker and weaker, colder and colder. I wish I had spent the money I had saved up. Well, that sucks!
Drip-drop!
Jay: wonder if I'll go to heaven, who I'm i kidding that wouldn't be fun Hahahaha
"How did he get here? You wonder. lying in his own blood, dying as time passes, losing his shit, laughing hypocritically? Well, let's just rewind to the start. "
Ring-ring!, Ring-ring!, ughhh!
Ring-ring!, Ring-ring! haaa
" Jay smacks the top counter, hoping to stop the alarm, only to hit the edge of"
(Writer: still trying to figure out my writing style lol, ignore if it's a lil messy)
Jay: fuckkk! Ugh, that hurts.
Ring-ring!, Ring-ring!
Jay: Yea-yea I'm up.
"Making a fist and hitting the top of the alarm, finally turning it off, Jay hops off the bed." "Swish!"
Jay: Let's get it started.
"Starting his day like any other day, Jay got down on the floor and began his morning routine; fifty push-ups, fifty sit-ups, fifty squats."
"Huff" "Huff"
Jay: 48, 49, 50! "Haaa", got to love that feeling.
"Why work out? To stay fit, you say? to be healthy and live a good life?. Well, I guess you're right. Jay wasn't a nice guy. He never was, and will probably never be. Growing up in Brooklyn, Jay was used to fighting on a daily basis. Not because the place is bad, not saying it isn't! You go walk down the wrong block and you'll figure that out for yourself. But because, really, why not? Don't get me wrong, he's not a bully either. Well! Not entirely. Why pick on the weak? Where's the excitement in that? Where's the thrill, the rush? Forget those trash. A fight is supposed to be for survival! Supremacy! Personal gain, but mainly the thrill! Otherwise, what's the point?
Finishing up his routine, Jay hops in the shower. "
Patter! Patter!
"Letting the hot water fall on to his body, they slid down his well proportioned and bulky brown skin."
Patter! Patter!
"What a wonderful picture this would be.
If it weren't for the sadistic smile on his face, as he enjoys the water washing over him, his eyes squinted sharply with a faint shimmer as he decides who his next pray will be."
"Jay leaves his house after putting on some comfortable workout clothes and his black Airforces."
Kevin: Yo Jay, you're finally up. Still up for the fun tonight.
Anthony: Yeah, Jay, what are you thinking? I heard they'll be stacked too lol
Jay: Hahaha, have I ever missed out?
Kevin: looks like it'll be a cloudy night
....Time skip.....
"Later that evening"
" bam! Shauuu crashh!"
Jay: Well, that's 9. is that it, huh?
Prey : uggg, huff, Huff fuck you Jay.
Jay: mmmmm? Nahh I'll have to pass on that offer
"crunch"
Prey : ahhhh!
Jay: that looks really painful
Kevin: yea it does! Guess that's 10 huh?
Jay: Hahaha I guess so
Kevin: I'm at 7, so guess lunch is on me later "sighs" Where's Anthony by the way?
Jay: who knows!
splash! splash!
Jay: ....
Kevin: .....
splah! splash!
Anthony: runnn! their coming, i got the stuff
Jay: who's coming?
Kevin: what stuff, what'd you do now
"In contrast to their words, their faces show completely different thoughts. Kevin being little worried, massaging his forehead while preparing to run, while Jay is standing still, one hand on his hip as he rubs his chin with a happy but yet thoughtful expression."
Anthony: Derrick and his goons
Kevin: "kisses his teeth" shit not that bitch
Jay: ... "sigh" what a joke
"Jays expression changes to one of scorn as he too gets ready to leave, as much as he would love to stay and have more fun. Derrick isn't one to have a mans fight. He's nothing more than filth, that turns to cheap tricks and guns."
Drip-drop! Drip-drop!
splash! splah!
Jay: we're did all this rain come from
Anthony: Hahahaha they're catching up
Kevin: "haaa" huff! huff! shit!
bangg! bang!
sluch!
Jay: arghhh, fuck!
Kevin/Anthony: Jayyy!
Jay: keep going, I'll double around and meet you at my spot
Drip-drop! Drip-drop!
Splash!
Jay: "huff" "huff" shit!
Splash!, splash!, splash!
Goon1: He went that way
Drip-drop! Drip-drop!
Ba-bump!, Ba-bump!
"Jay sharply turns a corner, scratching his shoulders."
Jay: "Ugh!" This is going to be a close one.
Goon2: Jay, wait until we catch you!
Derrick: I'm sure I got him. How the hell is he still so fast?
Jay: If only I could resist bullets, I'd beat that bitch ass.
" Jay continues running, and running until he sees a dumpster, an idea comes to mind"
Jay: I've only ever seen this worked in movies or animes let's pray for the best
"Swish" "crash"
"Clang"
"Jay jumps into the dumpster, accidentally closing the lid too hard"
Jay: Shit, let's hope those idiots didn't hear that.
"meow"
"suush"
Ba-bump! Ba-bump!
Splash! Splash! Splash!
Goon1: shit where'd he go
Drip-drop!
Goon2: I'm sure he turned this corner
Derrick: "huff" "huff" Let's keep going, he can't get too far with all the blood he's losing.
Goon1: it'd really be easier if it wasn't for the rain
"meow" "cling"
Ba-bump! Ba-bump!
Jay: just go already!, this place stinks
"huff" "huff"
splash! splash!
Derrick: "suush" u guys hear that?
"Derrick begins to walk closer to the dumpster"
Ba-bump! ba-bump!
"Derrick grinns smugly, looking at the 2 goons signaling them to flank the sides, getting ready to rush at the dumpsters"
Bang! bang!
"he shoots two bullets for reassurance before jumping onto the top, while the goons ran to the side looking inside and behind only to see a cat with a bullet wound"
"hiss"
Derrick: "kisses his teeth" it's just a dum cat, what a waste of bullets, let's keep going
goon1: "sigh" thought we had him
goon2: he's probably shitting himself hearing those shots though Hahahaha
Derrick/goon1: Hahaha
splash! splash! splash!
...
Jay: finally! haaaa
Jay gets out of the dumpster, holding onto his new wounded shoulders.
Jay: That'll leave a mark for sure.
"Jay slowly begins to leave the alleyway."
Jay: finally, that bitch just wait until I catch you without your gun
"Screeching sounds" screeechhhh!
Jay: huh?
Bam!
Npc: what the hell was that, just got my truck
cleaned. Hopefully i didn't hit a stray. "Haaa" fuck it the rain will clean it off.
Jay: .... ugghh! wonder if I'll go to heaven, who I'm i kidding that wouldn't be fun Hahahaha "hack! hack! Ahem!"
Jay: thinking back.... when did it start raining??
"those were the last words Jay ushered before everything went black".