Hey Guys!
Just a quick update. No I'm not stopping the book and I have no plans too. This is just to address some issues I felt like have popped up. There will be some editing of the story (Not much though) that I figured would be good to put in a small announcement.
#1: It was brought to my attention that I am not following the script with my character Drake. He is supposed to have a broken mind and I have strayed a bit from that in the early stages. So I will be going back and putting in more of Drake's thoughts to help build up his character. The story won't change really but we will be able to see what he really thinks. He won't be, "I'm gonna kill you" to every single person. He still has a mind and is thankful for the Tenebris for helping in a new world.
So look forward to a little more insight in his thought process
#2: I realized that making Grade S beasts so easy to defeat was a mistake on my part. I hyped him up too much for fighting a magical beast. So I'm going to drop it to Grade A Tier 1. Story won't change.
#3: To pick up off from #2 I will be releasing a power chart with different Grades so it will be easier to understand. Also even though I haven't gotten to different levels of mages and swordsmen I will also release their levels before we get into the explanations. (Describing in the story will make more sense but I will release it anyway)
#4: Last but not least I will be changing some appearances. Such as Tina having blonde hair with streaks of blue and 1 inch blue tips in her hair. And Princess Selena has 3 inch black hair tips to go along with her ice blue hair! (There will be some other appearance changes but I will put that up in a notice at the end of the next chapter.)
Thats about all I wanted to get off my chest.
I'm currently in school and had a test recently so I haven't had time to get down to writing. Especially when I am researching primitives ways of forging. Tomorrow I will be releasing some chapters so look forward to it!
Thanks for those who are patient with me as I'm still learning! I want to make each character fleshed out so they have more relevance in our hearts!
Thanks for reading! This notice will only be here for about a week before I delete it!
Hope you had/have a great day!
-KeyKraft