I'll be honest, there's so much plot holes in this fanfic and there's so many things that makes no sense. I'm starting a rewrite for some chapters. I already start re writing chapter 1.
Since you guys want a long chapter, here you go.
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3rd POV
Akito woke up feeling refreshed. It was the best nap he had ever gotten. He wish that he can sleep more but once he's awake, he can't sleep back for some reason.
He walks towards kitchen, finding any food to eat. He grabs a water bottle and some ration bars that he found. He ate the ration bars and gulp down the water. Finishing the water, he walks inside his room back and turns on his laptop.
Time: 06 : 23: am
D: M: Y:
04 : 01 : xxxx
Akito stare at the time and then went to some websites. Soon, he's done wasting time, he look at the time widget to know what time it is.
He sat there, stunned when he watch the time doesn't change. He thought that it was some kind of error but he was wrong.
He tried to get out of his house but everytime he does, he ended up getting into his room all over again. It was like maze. He tried many ways to get out but fails.
(that kinda rhymed Lmao)
Akito decides to give up. He went into his room and lay on his bed. Suddenly, a notification sound goes off and Akito tries to search where it came from. He found his phone on the bed. Akito thought that it's weird, the phone isn't there before.
The whole situation is weird. First, he woke up in his room, in his house and just had a breakdown for no reason. Second, he's stuck in his house and every time he tries to go out, he always end up in his room. Third, the time is not moving. Fourth, things keep getting more creepier than before. Is his house haunted? Is he in a genjutsu? What's happening?
Pushing away his thoughts, he grabs his phone and open the notification.
[ Open File#5872 ]
[Yes / No ]
Akito press 'yes'. Suddenly, the phone blacked out, glitching.
The phone screen lit up, displaying a happy birthday Text with a picture of Akito wearing a school formal uniform with his hair messy and an unknown person. The person is a male with brown-ish hair and jet black eyes. He wears round glasses and school formal uniform, his side bangs is tucked behind his ear.
Akito's eye widens as his eyes stuck on staring at the familiar guy in the picture. He clutches his phone tighter. Akito hold back the urge to cry. He unconsciously held his breath.His chest feels tight, his heart hurts, his head is a mess and his eyes stings. He puts his phone near his chest, hugging the phone tightly as if it's fragile.
( it is lmao, I dropped my phone and that shit cracked half of my screen ಥ_ಥ sorry for ruining the mood, gotta crack the angst somehow.)
Akito tries to stay composed, he lay down and sort things out. He feels tired. Tired with everything. Questions lingers in his mind, when did he download a file and he didn't have that picture before so how?
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He wants to sleep with all of his problem going away
But whoever planned this shit doesn't let him. He's suffering. He's hurting. He just wants to rest until he's good. Is it so hard?
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It is confirmed, whoever planned this shit for Akito is hating him. Akito finally had calm himself down. He was over with that shit. Now all he have to do is find out where the actual fuck is he and why is he stuck in here?
He looks at his phone to watch what time is it... ah, the time is still frozen. Akito facepalms, how the fuck did he forget it? Ah right, he had a breakdown. Akito sigh and tries to get out one last time. He puts his phone inside the pocket hoodie and and go through the door.
When Akito steps out, He absolutely did not expect to fall. His eyes widens, Akito's heart skips a beat as he screams out of fear.
All he wants to know right now is what's actually happening to him and why must it be him?
Suddenly, he crashed on a hard object, he can feel his ribs breaking and pain shot through his body. He coughed up some blood and his body is all tattered. Everything he sees is blurry and his strength is all drained. Then, everything goes black.
Ah, he fainted again.
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Akito wakes up with the biggest headache, bigger than Uchiha's egos and the fire nation's guilt. A groan escapes from his mouth as he gets up. He opens his eyes and blink slowly. His vision is completely blurry and everything is messed up.
His eyebrows furrows as he grits his teeth, trying to stay conscious.The metallic taste in his mouth makes him sick. He rest at the spot for a while...
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Akito definitely hate his life. He wakes up in an unknown place, the walls and ceiling seems familiar and he feels fuzzy.
"ah, you're finally awake" an unknown voice exclaimed. Akito hiss in pain, his muscles tense; he can hear ringing noises when the voice had speak to him.
" tone it down.. It's noisy" Akito slurred. He looks where the voice came from but his vision is blurry, he can see a blonde,green and black greyish color but he couldn't point out who it is. "ah, sorry. You should rest for now. We'll come to check you up later. " The unknown person tells him with a hushed voice. The voice sounds so reassuring and he can sense a familiarity to it.
Akito let his guards down and hums as an answer. After that he fell unconscious again.
(damn, he fell unconscious a lot of time.. should I stop it? maybe I should lol )
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Inoich was surprised when he heard that Akito had committed suicide but he was lucky that he's still alive. He heard that the anbu saw that the wound had healed fully but once they cleaned up the blood, there was not a single scar on his skin.
Ibiki attempted to take away his pocket knife but after he did, Akito suddenly fell unconscious. They had put him under strict surveillance.
After a few hours he fell unconscious, suddenly a black shadow engulfed him and it dispersed itself, revealing Akito on the bed with his hair messed up and blood splatter covers his shirt. Akito then coughed up blood and fell unconscious again. Everybody panicked and search if there's something wrong with him.
There was nothing wrong with his body but his clothes is all tattered and bloodied, more blood dripped from his mouth. Ibiki had called the medics to check him up. Everybody was confused, Why did he committed suicide? what had happened to him? What was the shadow that engulfed him? Many questions spiraled in their minds but they ignore it and focus on Akito who's unconscious.
Shikaku, Inoichi and Ibiki discuss about what had happened to Akito for a while, then they heard a groan. They eyed where did the groan came from, it was from Akito. His eyes seemed distant.
Inoichi was the one who broke the silence first " Ah, you're finally awake" he said. Akito hissed and tensed his muscles. Inoichi realized that Akito is still injured.
" tone it down.. It's noisy" Akito told them with a slight slur. 'Ah, we should discuss it in another room' They all thought.
"ah, sorry. You should rest for now. We'll come to check you up later. " Inoichi informed in a hushed voice Akito. Akito hummed and fell unconscious again. They all sighed in relief and went into another room to discuss.
' how troublesome' they all thought simultaneously when they discuss and not getting any answer in the end.
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Akito wakes up again, he feels stuffy, warm, and antiseptic smell makes him clouds his smelling sense. Akito dislike- no, he hates the Hospital. He absolutely hate staying in there. He wanted to get out from the place, he wanted to escape from it but he couldn't. His body refuse to move. It's as if he's being tied down to the bed. He feels his throat dry. Kakashi who's in charge of guarding him, pours down a glass of water and helps Akito to drink. "thanks" Akito mutters. His voice is raspy and soft as if it was a whisper. Kakashi only nods and get back to position on guarding him.
Soon Ibiki, Shikaku and Inoichi came into the room. Akito took a glance at Ibiki, then he scowls and lets out a string of curses from his mouth, after a language to another languages.
The people in the room with him feel disturbed with whatever he's muttering. Correction, everybody but Shikaku. He feel interested because of the unknown language Akito muttered but he didn't question it. Naras and their crave for knowledge🙄
"So, do you mind telling us what happened?" Ibiki starts the interrogation.
Akito's scowl deepens, " how should I know what happened?! I don't even know what the fuck is happening." He says. They all sigh in defeat. Ibiki and Inoichi knows that Akito is not the type to lie and his expression says it all. It shows anger, confusion and other emotions.
"when can I go out?" Akito ask them irritated.
" You'll be discharged in few more days so be patient" Ibiki tells him. Akito clicked his tongue, glaring at the ceiling. "damn hospitals" he mutters but they all can hear him saying that.
"you really hate hospitals do you?" Inoichi says with a chuckle.
" no, I despise it. It clouds with my senses and it reeks with blood and death. I hate it" Akito said with hatred lingers in his voice.
Awkward silence fills in the room. Akito sighs and ask " what do you guys want from me now?"
" How can you heal so fast without leaving a single scar?" Shikaku asks Akito. Akito froze, his eye twitch and give Shikaku an annoyed glare. " next question" Akito said.
A glint of amusement appears in Shikaku's eyes. " What was the shadow that warped around you before?" He ask.
Akito shot him a confused look. " what shadow?"
"You don't remember huh?" Shikaku ask. "No, all I remember is stuck in a room for a few hours. I couldn't get out, it was as if it's a maze. The last time I try to get out of the room, I fell and crashed onto something. I swear I heard my ribs cracking and I died" Akito said
Everybody groan in frustration, now they have another problem in their hands. Shikaku scratches his head, clicked his tongue and mutters the famous Nara word, "troublesome"
They all nod in agreement. Seriously, why does things keeps happening?
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Done! got total 1855 words! take that! This is my limit. Bye everyone 〒▽〒 and Happy new year! Take this as an early gift for new year.