Heyyy
I'll just be explaining a little bit of what I have in mind for this story.
Until now you had the entire "training arc" that took place and will still continue for a few chapters, after that we will have some exploration and history and all that to discover more about my beautifull world :p
I wont cut ties with Valhalla as I will make it into a little kingdom building that will progress along with the story, the history books that Matt found are the beginning of it.
I will probably make multiple girls interested in him but he certainly won't have more than four (and he won't neglect them).
I must also say that I have made some changes to my first few chapters, I simply upgraded a few spelling mistakes and upgaded my writing.
The one important thing that I changed however was the 'power' Matt received, instead of 'telekinesis' he now has 'fast travel', this is so that he doesn't become to OP and since I already find it hard to track and use all his abilities efficiently. (His 'monster' powers will be more than enough)
Don't worry as I will make 'fast travel' more than just a handy power.
Once again I ask of you for some feedback and please give me some powa stones, even though I don't know what their use is.
Have a nice day and see you soon :p