author's note: this would be the star of a new story because I feel like the old story is shit.
with every breath I take, it hurts, it feel as if something heavy is above me right now, but I can't feel it, what is this? why is it all white? an image? is that me? wait, those memories... are my sorrow and despair... cruel, how cruel of you, making me look at a mirror of the past, why? is it because I'm sinful being?... it feel like I'm floating in the air now, it seems my sight is returning, and the pain as well, ah I remember now, the ceiling collapse, wait, it's all turning blank, am i dying? i can't, i must fight it, stay alive, i must stay alive, even if this is fate, i would fight it, what is this? my hand! is emitting light, no, that's my soul, leaving my body, this can't be, i would survive even if it means i would be a being with no soul, even if this is hypocrisy, i would fight on, i would prevail no matter what, sound? what is that rumbling sound?, it doesn't matter, i must push on and get this chunk of stone stone out of my way, i never knew i have this strength in me, this is it, I'm getting out of this, ALIVE... but as if all of those are a lie when i heard the crumbling sound ones again, the floor i was it, collapse and i fall to my death. is my hope, hopeless, are my dreams a lie too...
it's all blank now i can't see anything there are no color, not even white or black, what is this?
"this is the the dimensional gap, i pity all of you to die needlessly, sadly i can't revive all of you in that world, but i would revive all of you in a body nearest to your soul wavelength and granted a ability most suitable for you, good luck, may fate guide all of your string to a better place"
[ugh ahh uuugghhh]
[what is that sound? wait? I'm being birth]
[lady Anne you can do it just push]
[it hurt]
[it's a boy my Lord, it's your second son]
[get the appraiser, i want my son to be appraise now!]
with great joy the lord of the great merchant city ask for the appraiser to appraise his second child.
[magnificent as expected of your seed, the child has great future and...]
[what is it?]
[a skill that i never seen before, not even in the royal library]
[then my child is more magnificent]
[what are they talking about? skill?]
[appraiser what is the skill called and the others?]
[the other skill are {[supreme regeneration][auto fracture fix][great sage][magic talent][weaponry talent} and...]
before he finished speaking the lord of the merchant city laugh and said.
[i can't believe my child is that well blessed, ah sorry i forgot, pls continue]
[and other skill is {[*****]}, wait, sorry my lord]
[why, isn't it amazing, since you can't see it that only means that skill has higher rank than yours]
[no my Lord, his job is a [Craftsman]]
[hahaahhahah then i would train him to be the greatest craftsman in the world]
[then this is really another world, wait I'm sleepy]
as of then everything turn black and i fall asleep.
author's note: his talking sound like baby talk to them.