Zhang_Awei

Indonesia

After I thought carefully, I thought I would stop uploading this novel.


Once again, I apologize to all who have read and followed this story until now. Thank you for the support so far.


If there is a chance next time, I will upload it again in another media application. Also, if you have any suggestions or comments, you can reply here.


Amazing world building, a unique premise and interesting characters. This is definitely a story to follow along. I'm sure the author will only continue to improve.

I don’t lots of first pov but novel is interesting.
You already get a feel of the world and some mystery. I like MC so far and am interested to know how and where author takes this novel.
Besides some writing errors, Come try it! You may end up liking it ☺️

Interesting story. I read a few chapters which were enough o know that you have a good sense of grammar and language but it certainly needs to be improved. Don't mind me saying, but of course you'll improve along the way. Anyways, the plot's pretty good. Keep it up!

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is this a huge harem?

It is a good and well-meaning story. Along the way, I'm sure the author will develop her writing technique & style. The more you write the more you will improve. I added this in my lib to see the progress of both author and Lucferre Caelum. 
For the future readers that will write a review, bear in mind this wise words, "Criticism, like rain, should be gentle enough to nourish growth, without destroying their roots." -Frank Clark 
For the author, keep writing! & keep improving! You can do it! The five stars is for the effort of putting your ideas into words.

Very vivid imagination, and very good explanation, the description of every scene is perfect to be honest, i hope you release more chapters...

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Ok, first, I do have to say that the grammar isn't perfect, but even then, I did not have a problem understanding what was going on. Grammar is always something that can be improved. The story itself is what is important. 
I can see a lot of thought went into world-building and that the plot is fresh and interesting. I'm sure it will only get better from here on; I'm looking forward to more!

This book is really very amazing. I would recommend one and all to read this book.

Best wishes, author..........................................................

Interesting story and I like how well the author write the plot, keep it up, can't wait to read more + the character seems good and I totally like the male lead

A very good story. The characters are interesting, Especially the main lead. The Plot are unpredictable. I love it ! Looking forwards for next chapter [img=update]

First of all the detail specifications of the Main character made me to imagine MC more perfectly including the mindset of his. So in the story it made a lot easier to understand the MC's point of view. There are only few chapters I can't say much about the plot. But the story has great potential!!!

This is brilliant!! What an amazing story. At first I thought it was like the other reincarnation novel... But it turns out to be pretty good. I'm interested and looking forward to the next chapter!! 
Cheers author!! XD

Interesting story, recomended for read...strong male main lead character, the journey of male lead character so amazing..and many unpredictable  experiences of the main lead character 
found at his journey 😀👍

I don't mean to sound harsh or rude. I am also trying to improve my writing. But I think this story could sell more if you could improve your writing skills a lot. Especially for the first chapter. After all, the first chapter is where you can hook people from following and reading more.

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Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Notice!