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the immortal god

🇺🇸joey_asbury
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This story is about a young man who became a god of some sort but longed for death. He has lived over a thousand years and had to change his name several times to keep up with the centuries. He was an exceptional artisan and an amazing poet, but even though he had a good heart soo many unfortunate things happen to him I'm new to writing so plz give me feedback to help me get better
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Chapter 1 - chapter 1 The Execution

It was 700 BCE, there was a artisan who betrayed his priest in ancient Greece his priest, a regal man with long flowing black hair, baby blue eyes, and was missing his left arm, ordered the artisan to make a statue in his honor but the artisan refused. He said that when the priest deserved a statue only then will he make it but the priest was furious. The priest was part of three wars and he was at death's door. the artisan knew the priest had a malicious heart and was never kind to him. The priest judged every one put to trial in front of him to death without giving it a second thought or even listening to the convicts story almost as if the priest enjoys it. The artisans name was Suun Mitros he was always a good person he never did anyone wrong but yet no matter how good someone is they die at some point and the good people always die first. He was around 25 with a birth defect that made him have solid white hair almost as white as snow possibly whiter, he had a burn on his left arm and deep scars on his right, he was about 5'8'' and had a skinny build but was surprisingly tough for someone of his stature. The priest after hearing the artisan saying no got extremely furious and swore to suun he would have his vengeance. Suun was later convicted of murder one of the priests attendants was killed by an artisans sculpting knife it looked too suspicious for suun not to be the culprit but after suun was in prison and interrogated for days he maintained his innocence he knew he was framed but he wonder by who. He was later sentenced to death by the very priest that said he would have his revenge. the artisan unknowingly accepted his punishment but had the gut feeling he was being set up my the priest. but then as Suun was putting his head on the chopping block the priest walked by and said "I told you I would have my revenge" then the axe came down and the artisans life came to an end or so you'd think.