I realized a lot of stuff during the two weeks and few days that I've been gone. Looking back and rereading my work too many times made the mistakes become more magnified and come to the surface.
Not only that but the book was somewhat decent. It was just my brain overthinking again and being all fussy about stuff.
Am I satisfied with this work? Nope.
Not at all. It's mediocre but I have high standards.
After breaking down. Resting and letting my mind wander free of any burden. I learned a lot by reading and listening to real writing advice.
Show not tell. And to take things slowly to let the novel grow on itself.
Yeah I kinda failed in the whole show not tell part. Too much exposition on this novel.
And too little explanation too, on how things worked. Ironic isn't it? All the infodumps so far did nothing more than scratch the surface of this world I fleshed out within the annals of my chaotic mind.
So long story short.
I'm re writing this story. But it would take a little while for me before I can publish the re written version.
So in the meantime. I'll be writing character sheets. Repurposing plot. Thinking hard how to execute stuff because execution is everything. And learning how to draw properly.
Once the fixed version of this book has it's first chapter come out. I'll tell you guys.
It's been a pleasure. And will always be.
Goodbye.