Hey, people, I wrote this chapter is a note for all those who don't get why I build a story like this.
I really don't understand why some of you misunderstood the story mc is lolicon? The Mc is 17 years old and the girls are age 16 so you call 2 in high school teenagers having sex lolicon? really if you do that then it means you Will be disqualified over 60% of the good anime characters because most of them are teenagers around 16-17 who look like that.
Also, they are only the beginning of the harem don't judge fast.
And The Mc showed interest Avsette Vremya ( the vegetable shop owner in chapter 16) who is originally from plunder the anime who finished release last season. ( i took her but her background is little different I will tell you in the future).
Also if even though you don't agree with me and think Maria is a little girl ( which she is not, check fandom ) understand that she has much adultered and sexier form with huge breasts she changes at will.
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I didn't choose to save Ace and whitebread is because what is so interesting to save them yes I like them but I don't think it worth saving them in the price of what happens in the future I personally liked the change and development of the story and its effect on Luffy and much more in the world of one piece.
I read many fanfictions who The Mc saves them a d what happens next? It was truly garbage most of them doesn't logic with the story and others make an Mc always succeed to archive what he wants without real difficulty
Also, they are so limited in imaginary because Mc is always too strong and he makes the main characters we love so much killed or delete their role and Uniqueness.
Another thing the Mc always has 3 things he can do in one piece 1. He is a God, 2. He is pirate, 3. He is a marine.
Really that is all they can write about?
And the harems are always the same even if the fanfiction happens only In one piece or any other anime worlds, the authors always choose well-known girls from known animes like Rais, Akeno, Nami ...
They do not bother to check fandom for more beautiful characters like Carina(from One Piece movie: Gold) or Viola who play minor roles.
And for multi anime worlds fanfiction, the Author doesn't build the harems from less known animes like Shinami no Maou, date a live, gate, trinity seven who have beautiful girls. ( i searched in this website and I found a few fanfictions who used this animes ).
so I chose beautiful girls people normally don't notice or don't know.
And most stories start with mc die in some accident and old man who call himself God give him chance to reborn with wishes I had enough with this pattern so I wrote something different who isn't something so kind for the Mc.
The powers are always system with everything you wish to be in there or Sharingan or some almighty bloodline I didn't like it so I searched many animes and mangas and I finally choose powers who leave me with many options to develop the story Infinite Deception of Words and Fanalis physiology.
As for those who don't understand why he is training so much because he is lack of confidence think about it normal teenager from modern world who live his life regularly suddenly go to the world of one piece who is full of extremely strong people so he takes extra Caution to make sure he is strong enough so he wouldn't have to worry.
So in my Fanfiction, the Mc isn't too strong and with his powers who are limited, he still reaches the top of the world.
If you want a spoiler I plan for him to build his own country filled with modern technology or to be underworld ruler.