In the dream, it took Wang Hao a while to process what had just been said!
Holy shit, does she mean she'll pay me fifteen for a thousand words? Damn, this person must be a big shot! No Shortage of Money!
"Honestly," Wang Hao promptly began to show off, "your writing actually isn't very good, fifteen for a thousand words is a bit low. You must know that your diction isn't very flowery, there aren't many adjectives, and to use web novel terminology, it's quite dry."
In the dream: "Cut the crap, I know that already, what else?"
Wang Hao: "But actually, you shouldn't be too hard on yourself. Not being flowery doesn't mean you can't write a good novel. I see some strengths in your writing."
In the dream: "What strengths?"
Wang Hao: "'Saucy as hell!'"
