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I was born knowing the future of this world. How can I ever fail?

-Viktor Krum

Philippines

Great I truely enjoyed reading this ****.

I do not own  Harry Potter the character or anything. I'm just writing for my own satisfaction and enjoyment.


If you are reading this then bear with me as I am not a guru in HP lore.


This is actually a really good fanfic, I wasn’t so sure about reading it at first because it didn’t have a synopsis, but I’m glad I did. For anyone who doesn’t like an evil mc than this isn’t for you, however for anyone who likes a smart and evil mc then this should be a good read for you. At the time I am reading this, the updates seem stable, 1 every 2-3 days. The mc is pretty overpowered in this fanfic and gets strong early on, however, sadly this normally means that the fanfic will be short. I do think that if you have the time you should at least read a couple chapters.

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The mc uses house elf’s for more than just a cleaning service, which I have only seen in one or two other Harry Potter fanfics. (In this fanfic the mc uses the house elf’s as assassins to kill or capture criminals after robbing them.) The mc also goes to Durmstrang, and the author does a really nice job with how he made Durmstrang in this fanfic. 
In this fanfic the mc does experiment on humans and other species, such as veela and goblins.
( Sorry for any grammatical errors, and I honestly had no idea how to spell Durmstrang so I guessed; I didn’t want to look it up.)

The author here... I don't really give a **** but yeah read my work. Every kind of **** is welcome as there is no limit whatsoever to my patience.

JK.

Feel free to read and criticise. It's a free country.

Hahahahahahaha

To those who says the MC is a duche I don't know what to say. I personally think he just wants to enjoy himself without being restricted by the human moral hypocrisy.

Those who like him, well idk... Keep at it? I'll do my best to entertain myself in molding again his personality.

If you are reading my work then thank you.

Hate it.

Love it.

I don't give a **** just make comments on how I can improve it. 

Verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyygoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writing dont make it short...

I was quite fond of the story, then things just started to get weird. I want to read about the MC. Sending Harry on an adventure under the name freak and focusing on world events doesn't really do it for me. 

Another HP FanFiction where the Mc is a mega douche, hardly any magic at the start and Mc is acting like a lunatic.. It's in a different perspective from a side character which made me interested but I regret it now

A very interesting and good fan fiction. it starts of very well, however after chapter 30-35 the story changes and instead of being one large sequence story, it more feels that each chapter is a side story with little to no connection to the previous chapter. the story is still great, however there are many chapters that are added which seem to have no connection to the main story and after the one chapter that they were mentioned in, they are not seen or mentioned again. Example: viviene lockhart. This is a very minor aspect however i feel that it takes alot from the story as it just seems to jump around too much.

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basic fanfiction, op mc transmigration.
viktor oc can be interesting but it is useless to take an existing character if you destroy all of the character from the first chapter you remove all the background of the character created by J.K rowling.
It takes better an invented oc than a destroyed character.
ramping up too fast.


not bad but nothing interesting to read if you have time to lose.

sorry english is not my native language

So... This story is alright, but it's not very cohesive. The grammar for the most point is pretty spot on, but at times it feels like I'm reading several different stories because one event will be happening and then the story will switch to something else for a few chapters and then come back to it. Honestly if it had a cohesive storyline to it, if probably rate it at least 4.5. As for character design, Victor's whole character is that he's the greatest genius ever, and that he is ruthless. He doesn't really have any traits that make him 3 dimensional

Harry Potter: A Fan Fiction

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Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Disclaimer