David Gayle, (aka Brian_JWilliams, David_Lebron, DavidxAnonamon, David_Drake) the misunderstood reviewer...
After all the bullsh*t he spouts, David actually thinks his comments are coming from a good place and are actually there to help the author. Now I know that comments are there to give you a platform to voice your opinion, and I myself have given negative comments on stories that I disagree with. But I back up what I say and respond to any questions to clarify why I dislike something.
David Gayle, on the other hand, thinks himself a professional reviewer and that he is god's gift to Authors. This chapter is dedicated to a review that David gave a novel and then deleted once he was called out on his bullsh*t. Now, don't worry, there will be a propper chapter later tonight. This is just a response to another one of David's marvellous comments on chap 29...
"So do it, you coward. I dare you to ruin your own fic because of me. It'll only show everyone the amount of control I have over you :)"
David Gayle, professional SJW.
And yes, I am petty enough to get involved in a meaningless argument with a random teenage Emo troll on the internet. It brings me great joy to slap a little keyboard warrior b*tch back into his box, I am only human after all and quite a flawed one at that.
Anyway, without further ado, David being called out by Einlion for being a troll. He was so embarrassed that he had to delete it, further proving he is not trying to help anyone other than his own low self-esteem because his Daddy either gave him too much love... or not enough.
Einlion
So you're mad because he isn't as jaded as you want him to be? Instead of writing a review, you went on a diatribe about your personal preferences. Explaining details in an original world is, in your mind, a bad thing? Which of the provided metrics does that apply to? I'm looking but I don't see a 'too much information' metric. Does your browser show something completely different than what everyone else sees? Are you incapable of saying anything constructive? Why did other people find the 'joke' to be funny? Why isn't anyone else complaining about the background information? Does all comedy revolve around you? Is the pacing wholly determined by you? Please, feel free to justify yourself. I would hate to assume you're just throwing a tantrum because you got upset by freely provided content and, instead of doing anything more productive with your time, you were simply compelled to express your sense of entitlement on a novel you likely already dropped.
David_Gayle
I wonder if it is a coincidence that nearly everything you say in your profile is negative and confrontational? I bet its also a coincidence that you have to upvote your own comments and reviews, you know, in lieu of anyone else doing so. I imagine it will also be a coincidence when you throw a fit later about people being 'upset' about you expressing your opinion when, in reality, you were upset over literally nothing and decided to cause drama as a result. You're like a spoiled little kid that throws rocks and people and then whines when they are reprimanded and people start throwing rocks back at them.
I read it and gave my honest opinion. I don't believe I've been always negative with my comments lol. Plus I never start anything and its people like you who come attack me personally for some reason??? Jeez my review wasn't that bad either kid.
Einlion
You gave an opinion, not an honest one. You literally made stuff up to make your bull**** sound more convincing. At no point in the story does the MC beat up a girl and then team up with her ten chapters later. You got butthurt because the MC didn't fucking turn into a psycho and fight a battle he wasn't guaranteed to win and then decide to complain about it in the review section. He has literally killed more female characters that have appeared than male characters on screen. You aren't fooling anyone, dude.
Go figure, the spoiled little kid with an entitlement complex blames everyone else for the **** he starts. It is everyone else that is the problem. The fact you have people calling you out for your bull**** literally has nothing to do with you, they are to blame~!
David_Gayle
Wow you caught me bro. You really did it. I totally did this on purpose for some weird reason. Right? Not like I tried giving some real help because I'm a douche apparently. But it does amaze me how everyone on web novel acts like you from a bit of criticism. I don't have this problem on AO3 or fanfiction with authors even when I get things wrong. Most of them are pretty chill and do listen. You know if you ask nicely I would've changed my review.... So?
Einlion
Nah, at this point, I'm certain that whining about things is your default state. I doubt you put any real thought into anything or you would be able to say something constructive rather than just spreading negativity. And, once again, I find it hilarious that is is always you against 'everyone' else. That victim complex will take you far in life, Karen.
The expectation that people have to be nice to you when you act like an ass just shows how entitled you are, man. If you were sensible, you would have laid out everything in a comprehensive and informative way if you wanted to critique something. Instead, you chose to complain about it while making snide and unnecessary remarks. You even went out of your way to just make something up. Despite that, you expect other people to pander to you and ask politely for you to change yourself? If it were that easy, you wouldn't be like this.
Don't get me wrong, I can be harsh in my responses to people but it is almost always as a result of their thoughtless behaviour. Were it up to me, everyone would get along and be able to discuss things in a civil manner but, unfortunately, we live in a world where people think they are entitled to just say whatever the **** they want without any sense of accountability. None of your complaints had any merit whatsoever, nor did you provide any meaningful feedback. Had you even made a pretence at being an agreeable person, none of this would have happened? Stop blaming other people for the **** you cause.
David_Gayle
You're the one cussing and replied in a savage manner. I agree we are better off with out you in future conversations. I'll just keep reviewing your chapters.
Einlion
Yeah, as you pointed out, I did so in 'response' to you. Do you know what that means, kiddo? It means you did something that directly resulted in the reaction you received. Amazing, isn't it? One day, you'll figure out the other half of the fucking equation and stop acting like an asshole.
David_Gayle
Thought we were done? Isn't it past your bedtime kiddo? Don't you hate it that you're the one getting salty lmao?
Chado_Sama
Well, this has been enlightening, looks remarkably similar to the situation you found yourself in on my fanfic.
"Not like I tried giving some real help because I'm a douche apparently."
You mean when I asked you to explain your 'opinion', and you kept misdirecting with insults?
"tried giving some real help" Like when I try to explain myself, and you still misdirect with insults or say you can't be bothered reading it, YOLO?
Seems like you are d*ck everywhere you go and the "never start anything and its people like you who come attack me personally for some reason?" Seems like your default 'oh f*ck, they are calling me out for my sh*t!' response.
How disappointing David, why did you delete your review if it was your honest opinion and you were just giving the author helpful criticism?
I thought you were only about constructive criticism like that time you said I was ranting about sexism and putting chicks up on a pedestal only to never show me where I did that.
Funny how that seems to also be the case here!
*No response to this reply from David other than "it was 3 days ago, lol!" once again not explaining anything or providing a reason for his 'opinions.'
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What a great insight into how David thinks, he really is just a champion for the people! For those that have read this far, I salute you, you are most likely the same as me and take great joy in seeing little b*tches being given a dose of reality. Unfortunately, David is 12 years old and thinks he is the best thing to happen to the internet. We will be no doubt hearing from him for the rest of my novel.
Feel free to call him out on his sh*t, or if you are of the same mindset as David, defend him so I can reason out why he feels the need to drop random unfactual or irrelevant comments and then never back them up.
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David Gayle's deleted "review" for all those interested in reading it.
Hey everyone. Guess I'm kinda a plague for our dear author. Just wanted to leave this review in hopes it doesn't get deleted.
Now a general summary -
You got a MC who is turns out to have no redeeming qualities. Slavery, imaginary rape, wipe wiping and just being a general douche is just a few things I found in this guy. The development is forced with the MC using a mudborn to finance his assassin elves/contract slavery empire. The plot is about the MC wanting to defeat dumbdoor because in this story this wizard guy is just as evil as our MC. And we can't have two evil villains in this story. Now onto the world building, there isn't much being done differently compared to other fics so its meh. Writing quality is subpar as I'm introduced as a character before getting a whole chapter about how bad of a person I am. So overall this story gets a one star due to the author not making any changes I wanted. Because opinions be damned when you don't give a reference inside the text.