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The next morning Ning Fu watched with hooded eyes as the monarch seemed to be worse for the wear. His eyes somewhat sunken and light black circles underneath them.
Nobody would have been able to notice the minute changes in the monarch. Most people didn't dare to look directly at the face of the proud Son of Heaven. Yet, the gutsy man who commanded the largest army in the entire kingdom was an exception.
Meanwhile, Su Li felt as if someone was observing her in the audience hall. But when she looked around, she found that most ministers had their heads lowered like children who had been caught with their hands in the cookie jar.
So, she thought that she was being paranoid and didn't bother to look into the incident any further. Ning Fu heaved a sigh of relief as he watched the monarch's attention turn towards the minister who was making his report.
