The title and the abbreviation.
Path of the Demons - KOD
I wonder what KOD stands for. D is probably for Demon?
I never really understood what is the deal with having a title and a title abbreviation be completely different from one another.
P1:
- Starting the synopsis off with some needless shouting, I see.
P2:
- Run-on sentence much?
- Don't need the "Oh" at start of sentence. Unless this is an author's note.
- Smart man in college could be anywhere between the ages 12 and 99.
-- Mainly because child geniuses could enter college early in some countries.
-- But since it says "man," I will assume 16+ considering this is the age of consent in most countries.
- Drops out to find excitement in life: play a video game.
-- I've been there, done that, and got nowhere. Trust me, I don't recommend dropping out of college to find excitement in a video game.
- Is it exciting to follow a different path than others?
Rewrite of the synopsis in my own words: This novel is about a young man who plays a virtual reality game in order to find excitement in his dull life.
At least compared to the author's first novel which didn't even have a synopsis, this is an improvement. The first novel had two chapters and never continued updating since its last update in October 2018. I hope the author doesn't drop this novel too.