I am relatively new to writing stories (With only messes that died somewhere in the beginning to show for it) Thus I will likely not be making a grand novel that keeps your attention at every second, and it will likely be very poorly written. But the only way to improve a craft is practice and for writing, I need opinions on how to improve. I don`t hope for people giving 5 stars, or saying its great, it`d be enough for people to stick through at least a few crashes and burns and that is all I can ask of readers, nothing more. I just a hope I can improve here, and that I can rewrite old chapters as I improve to mend those failures of progression into something half decent. Ill end up writing things like strength system tiers and thing the MC has throughout the story at some point (expect around Ch. 30)