Hey guys, so, I went back and edited some parts of the story to add some sort of background to the world and that there would actually be some sort of development to characters. Developing characters was never my forte but I hope to get better as I write more.
As a side note, This is only my "Second work" o i'm sorry if the quality is bad. I just started writing things not too long ago and really need to polish my skills so I thought "Hey, I know, Let's write a novel without a basic outline or any story direction!" And so Demon Tyrant Emperor came about.
Hope you enjoy.