Reviews Of Too Much Of Water Mystery

7/31/2024~ In the process of editing and updating my earlier chapters. I personally believe the story starts to improve and find it's way a bit more around chapter 50+. Hopefully can make some adjustments in earlier chapters when I have the time, but pacing slows down into a more measured rate as I start finding my groove. I give the content more time to breathe instead of going so fast. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the realm of Nexaria, where elemental spirits and divine beings shape the fate of the world as a land of mortals striving to become gods against the demons of the Abyssal universe, a young boy named Lassim Vanthar embarks on an extraordinary journey of advancement, adventure and becoming a bastion for those around him in their fight against the Dragal. Born into a noble family with a legacy of Fire elemental martial prowess, Lassim possesses an unparalleled gift on his 8th birthday—a connection to two differing elemental spirits, a feat unheard of in the history of his world. A gift and a tampering of the order until now that is an omen. It is a sign of the Gods influencing the future fate of Nexaria on a more serious level. Lassim must harness the power of his dual spirits to protect his loved ones and confront the looming threat of the Abyss' encroachment on his universe, but one step at a time as he grows from just a tool of the God's to a major power as the hero of not only Nexaria, but the entire universe. Lassim faces daunting challenges, battles fierce adversaries, and unlocks the mysteries of his own destiny that has been tampered with by the Gods of this universe. How will he react and adapt to his situations? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is my first ever novel. I’m a new author and still learning how to tell a story. Please understand that when reading. Thank you.

As Jane delves deeper into the secrets of the town, she uncovers a web of lies, betrayal, and dark magic that threatens to destroy everything she holds dear. With bravery and determination, she confronts the sinister forces at play, risking her own life to protect the town and its inhabitants. In a race against time, Jane must unravel the mystery before it's too late, navigating a dangerous path filled with deception and danger. As the sun rises once more, casting its warm light on the town, Jane emerges victorious, her courage shining bright in the face of adversity.

seorang detektif menyelidiki kasus pembunuhan adiknya yang ternyata dijadikan tumbal oleh sekte yang sangat brutal dan kejam

The Creation... Where all Existence exist along with Non-Existence as interconnection to Existence, providing a aspects for such lead to maintain the balance of The Creation. A Existence contains everything that we had been see: A Galaxy, Universe, a theory of Multiverse, and so beyond. Thus all undiscovered truth still remain mystery, even infinite celestials bodies are just mere-aspect of it. All celestial entities even a God don't know what truth beneath the Existence. A used of system made by human to traveling the cosmos but to find the truth of it, but they only found nothing, clueless, yet they gone... With a strange phenomenon making human race fall into abyss, they gave up... Not until a guy born with a curiosity about the truth of The Creation, he'd read so many books that were actually a journey of a people whose traveled the cosmos, creating a hint for human to regain their strongest era. And the guy named Jonathan, standing tall in front of a strange yet massive ancient doors, along with a unknown symbols within the curve of the doors, filled with immense power that cannot be calculated or measure it. Jonathan realize there's puzzle to open this door and reveal something within the door, and so Jonathan goes venture to find the missing symbols, in his adventures he met Mary Carter, a young woman with a obsession of books that contains a information about the Cosmos, soon enough they become a friend, a partner for their own yet same goal. Along with a hint that in one of Mary's book, now they know where they needed to go; Indonesia, specifically Candi Borobudur where there's a book filled with a information that let the user capable to transcends a dimensional. That is one of requirements to find a puzzle of the Ancient Doors, and so they goes venture to Indonesia... But is their journey gonna goes smoothly? Or they get involved into something dangerous? Who's knows, but we'll see it soon...

After being found by an elder amidst a massacre and named Oasis, a child of both a Phoenix and Dragons grows up in a foreign land. With the instincts of his powerful bloodline, he strives to become strong. Along his journey, he encounters the remnants of legacies left behind by his parents, which give him the advantage of strength in a world where he both gains and loses his loved ones. As he walks a path filled with blood and betrayal, he must endure the trials that await him.

In the 15th century, Maximilian "Max" O'Doherty, an adventurous and independent anthropomorphic rabbit, stumbles upon an ancient, forbidden map hidden in his town’s library. The map hints at the existence of mysterious, undiscovered islands beyond the horizon—places thought to be mere myths. Driven by an insatiable curiosity, Max sells everything he owns to purchase a ship and sets sail into the unknown. His journey takes him across vast and treacherous seas, where each island holds secrets, wonders, and dangers beyond imagination. From lost civilizations to creatures of legend, Max faces challenges that test his courage, intelligence, and survival instincts. But as his adventure unfolds, he begins to realize there is a deeper mystery behind the map and his journey—one that could change everything he knows about the world. With no way of turning back, Max must navigate the perils of the unknown, uncover the truth behind the islands, and ultimately discover the purpose of his own destiny.

A story that I’m making on my free time. This is my first time writing a story so please expect boring stuff and cringe stuff but if you do like it please share with friends I really wanna enjoy making work people enjoy make sure to criticize and tell me where to work on :)

a boy who is mentally unstable due to past experience and afraid to get into any relationship and a boy who is cursed to loose his love ones eventually falling for one another in a mysterious school where students often commit sucide without any reason...

Falsely accused of treason and awaiting execution, Athena Cloverfield, the former young heiress to the fallen House Cloverfield, reflects on her life to pinpoint where it all went wrong. Athena blames Iris, her stepsister, for all the bad things that happened to her, but her perspective is utterly shattered when Iris visits her in the dungeons and confesses her love for her, going so far as to declare that she would try to rescue her. The time of the execution inevitably came, and Athena was about to be executed. Just then, Iris appears and fights desperately to get to Athena, but before she can get anywhere close, Iris is defeated and is made to watch the execution from where she fell. Seeing her desperation and finally believing the genuine tears, Athena prayed to God, for the very first time in her life, for a second chance to make amends. As if God himself had answered the prayer, Athena miraculously finds herself back in time on the same day Iris arrives at her home in the Cloverfield mansion. Seizing the chance, Athena resolves herself to be the best stepsister she could imagine herself to be, but the memories from the past timelines haunt her constantly, causing her to react negatively and straying down the same path as before. When eventually cornered into the fateful tea party, Athena, in a moment of vulnerability, confessed her inner fears of how Iris could once again ruin her life despite her trying her best to make amends. Perhaps due to an accidental but fortunate choice of words, Iris misunderstood Athena and was completely charmed by her. To Athena’s amazement, Iris swore to Athena on the spot that she would be her loyal and loving sister who would protect her from the world. And in the days after, Athena and Iris enjoyed a loving and caring relationship, just as Athena hoped to have. But fate had it out for Athena, and to her horror, the events that led to her execution started occurring once more when she got enrolled into the kingdom’s royal academy alongside Iris in this timeline. Thanks to the first of those dreadful events, she got involved with the crown prince, the same man who ordered her execution in the previous timeline, and somehow attracted his attention. To make things worse, as the days passed and Athena, for some reason, started to gain popularity amongst her peers, Iris became more obsessive and overprotective towards Athena, causing various scandalous rumours to rise and leading to both troublesome and amusing incidents. But unbeknownst to Athena and Iris, a sinister figure seeks to tear their relationship apart and eventually lead Athena down the path of doom…

It was the 10th year of the Mizu Calendar. Humanity was walking towards its doom with the oceans swallowing up the terrestrial and tongue being the criminal organisations like the Yakuzas, funded by the business icons, putting common people's lives at stake. Kai a 17-year-old jolly young lad working as N-Hydra, a sailor-fighter group, founds something unprecedented, as his bloodline has something to do with all these.

Josette Andrews wakes up every morning haunted by the same dream. Trapped in an isolated manor and sustained by an anonymous benefactor’s wealth, she has little left to cling to except unanswered questions. The curse that caused her to kill her fiancé, Lawrence du Martel, still lingers, and had caused her to kill more before him, unraveling her grip on reality. When a series of strange events draws her closer to uncovering the truth about her parents and the origins of her curse, Josette realizes she’s not the only one hunting for answers. Each revelation forces her deeper into a connection of betrayal, forgotten histories, and forces intent on keeping her past buried. To reclaim her life and her soul from the curse that destroyed everything, Josette must make terrible choices and she realizes that some secrets are more dangerous than she ever imagined.

Jade, A girl living in a magical world, who hasn't found her powers though others have is determined to find out who the killer was of her parents for revenge. Her best friends; Naven, Euna, Kai, Miranda, Soren, June and Rein supporting her all the way until she has finished the mission. Will she get through this or will she lose her life going on adventures while doing the mission?

“Youth is the hope of the future,” a resonant quote among Filipinos, attributed to national hero Jose Rizal. How accurate are these words for generations gone by? Senior High, the last stage for high school. It differs from other grade levels, which aim to prepare students like Adrian Cabanas for the future. With only two years remaining in high school, how will Adrian navigate challenges during his Senior High days? Teacher, classmate, or family–amidst looming problems, Adrian's only thing he can do is to review and improve for his future.

The reason I am looking at death with my eyes... I want to escape a meaningless life, certainly a fake one. Also, what good is it to be born cursed if you can't pursue your curses fully?

Jun-ho is an ordinary student, living a typical life filled with college classes and hanging out with his friends. His days are usually uneventful, following the same routine. However, one day, something unexpected happens that turns his world upside down. While on his way to a familiar place, a group of strangers forcefully abducts him. Before he even has time to understand what's happening, Jun-ho finds himself at a wedding altar, where he's made to marry a girl who is just as confused and unwilling as he is. Both of them are forced into this marriage against their will, and now they must navigate the strange circumstances that brought them together, uncovering the truth behind this mysterious event

When the curtains rise and the band takes the stage, Bonnie steals the spotlight—not just for his magnetic presence and bass guitar riffs, but for the secrets he hides beneath his human-like exterior. Far from the mindless machines many believe, the animatronics of Freddy Fazbear's Pizza are something more—humanlike beings wrapped in synthetic skin, their metallic cores concealed within. One night, the crew stumbles upon a frightened yet fearless little girl named Ariana, hiding in the shadows of the pizzeria. With nowhere to go and secrets of her own, she finds herself thrust into the animatronic world, discovering they are more alive than she ever imagined. Among them, Bonnie is the first to truly connect with Ariana. He becomes her protector, drawn to her innocence and tenacity. But as their bond deepens, a forbidden romance begins to bloom—one between the bassist who hides a metallic core and the human girl who sees the soul within. As danger looms and secrets unravel, Bonnie and Ariana must navigate a world where neither fully belongs, and where love between flesh and steel is as mysterious as it is perilous.

Um grupo bem exótico e divertido se aventurando para conseguir uma maneira de ajudar a Princesa e a derrotar um vilão que sabe bem como manipular e deixar qualquer um arrepiado. Essa história foi criada por fãs de RPG, cenas foram criadas de acordo com a personalidade de cada membro dessa aventura, teve rolagem de dado e muita diversão. Espero que gostem assim como gostamos de fazer cada página dessa jornada.

Hailey’s power became too much and out of control as she steps in at the age of nineteen. Her parents were worried when an oracle predicted that it could eventually destroy her if not handled greatly. So, her aunt come up with the idea of sending her to a friend of hers who once had the same problem— the mistress of air. Hailey flew across the world, away from her luxurious life. She already expected the worst—a small house and a lady who do not tolerate her spoiled personality. But what she did not expect was to meet her mate in the most unexpected way. A dominant Alpha who wants nothing to do with her untamed personality. How would Hailey be able to change the mind of her mate before he eventually rejects her…or was it the other way around? She didn’t want a mate in the first place, after all.

All is arranged and set. Just for the Blue Moon to take place whereby the chosen princess decides the fate of her people. What happens when an arrangement made thousands of years ago put Alicia in a position where she has to choose between her present loving but fictional world and her real family of weird ancient beings? Will she succumb to the pressure of marrying Denon, a mystic creature who is the only hope of saving her real world and enduring all or will she prefer to live the life which she had known since her childhood as hers?..... "I will never marry a beast for the sake of people I don't even know", I screamed at the Ilurians who were sent to take me.

Ruth was confused on what was happening around her until she made a shocking discovery about the girl Sara Elizabeth mysteriously died 25 years ago...

"What I am protagonist's brother." This was my first thought when I transmigrated to a fantasy world. Not only that, this world has many such protagonist, he is just a friendly neighborhood protagonist. I always felt fear of death from my brother until I got a Life simulator, which changed my life. After one life simulation ends I gets the cultivation, talent, resources and.... many things basically. What will I do after I get everything? This was a question in his mind.

Welcome to the Labyrinth of Mystery where you will be in the 1st perspective and live to tell the tale. Prepare to embark on a thrilling adventure. With its twists and turns, you will experience every moment in the first person, immersing yourself in the excitement and mystery of this journey. But fear not, for with your wits and determination, you will emerge victorious and have an unforgettable tale to share with others. So take a deep breath, gather your courage, and step confidently into the Labyrinth of Mystery.