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"May the blinded see" The Window to the Soul. Gods system of which all who are born are attached to. Bestowed the destiny they are divined to fulfill. Each person is born with a "Class" that determines their future. Beginning at level 0 at birth until the age of 10 where they become level 1 and are allowed to begin earning experience by fulfilling their class quests and using their skills. The vast majority of people on the Grand Continent are born into simple classes. Tailor, Trader, Cook, Scholar, Farmer. Among others. All of which whose leveling will likely stagnate once they reach level 5. Unable to progress because their Class quests needed to level up become increasingly more unfeasible to fulfill. And by then, most will be in their old age. With the exception of those who rule over the peasant classes. Those who were born with combat classes who level considerably faster with the abundance of monsters that plague the Grand. None more powerful than the Holy Order of Paladins that aids in governing the continent. Liore is a peasant of a distant village, born to Farmer and a Chef. Born with the Farmer class like her mother. She was destined to be in the shadow of her older brother who was born with the "Holy Swordsman" Class. After her brother is sent off to train with the Holy Order, leaving her with his old training sword as a keepsake, Liore attempts to follow her brothers training with futility. Leading her into grave danger that almost takes her life until she stumbles upon an ancient artifact that gifts her abilities beyond her god given class. Emboldening her pursuit for her own destiny and sending her spiraling towards great power. With all of the strife that comes along with it...

Cold blooded killers scattered all over the planet, a legacy too strong to give up, but he never wanted to be part of it, he just wanted to live with his mom.......untill fate decided another path for him. Will Bright cope with his new destiny.......or succumb to the darkness most do.

Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him unconscious he wakes up in the body of a young dragon in an entirely new world. Armed with a system to assist him and two beautiful wives to support him, Carter vows never to live his life hiding in the dark again as he seeks the title of dragon king. - Additional tag : Yuri Discord link is : https://discord.gg/q68P5JPnNz

Twelve years ago, a kidnapped girl risked her life to save a wounded cub, never knowing he was a werewolf—and her destined mate. Now grown, Aira returns to her late parents' hometown, haunted by broken memories and a bloodstained shirt no one can explain. When a golden-eyed wolf appears at her doorstep, injured and strangely familiar, the pieces of her past begin to resurface. What she doesn't know is that the cub she once saved never forgot her. And now, he's returned as a powerful werewolf heir—marked by fate, bound by a vow to protect her at all costs. But danger stirs in the shadows. Rogue wolves are hunting. Secrets claw their way out. And as the bond between them deepens, so does a truth Aira never expected— She was never meant to be just human. She was always meant to be his.

In a world where power dictates destiny, Noah Grace is considered weak—just another nobody in a society ruled by strength. But when he unexpectedly awakens a mysterious system, his life takes a drastic turn. Given the chance to rise above those who once looked down on him, Noah embarks on a relentless journey to gain power, uncover hidden truths, and defy the very gods who control fate. As he battles through deadly trials, forms unexpected alliances, and faces those who seek to use or destroy him, Noah must decide—will he be a pawn in someone else's game, or will he become the one who reshapes the world itself?

Gabriel was just an ordinary young man dreaming of a peaceful life with his family. But that life was torn away when demons from the underworld invaded the surface, leaving cities in ruins and his loved ones dead. With no powers, no chosen destiny, and nothing left to lose, Gabriel picks up a blade and begins his journey of revenge. Driven by rage and grief, he travels across the continent, hunting demons one by one. Through broken towns, dark forests, and blood-soaked battlefields, Gabriel becomes a symbol of resistance—an unrelenting force fueled by pain and purpose. He’s not a hero. He’s not a legend. He’s just a man with a Purpose Kill every last demon. Post every Saturday.... woooo

A girl spending her time in the pages of her lost beloved books.

Her silky hair covered her eyes and I only saw her lips. That was so soft and smooth. She applied light peach coloured lipstick. That made her lips perfect...

"Sometimes the ones we fight hardest with... are the ones our hearts fight hardest for." In Pages of Us, Roxy, a fierce, stubborn, and a little too loud—spends her teenage years wrapped in rivalries, heartbreaks, and the kind of friendships that bruise and heal in equal measure. Now a grown woman and a writer, Roxy pens down her story before marrying the love of her life. She begins to tell the story of how it all began—of six broken kids, tangled hearts, and one unforgettable journey to find out what it really means to love someone. A coming-of-age story about love that grows in the unlikeliest places.

dia, sang putri pertama harus menikah dengan putra Kaisar yang membunuh ayahnya. dia bersumpah merebut apa yang menjadi HAK nya.

Omnius — The First Truth Beyond All Before the whisper of gods, before the spark of time, before the very concept of creation, there was Omnius. The First Truth. He is the boundless wellspring of True Boundless Love and absolute power, His pervasive will a low, resonant thrum beneath the very fabric of existence. More felt than seen, He manifests as a nexus of impossible darkness to lesser perceptions, His essence transcending all concepts of shape and beyond everything else, the words "I AM THE FIRST TRUTH" woven into His very being as pure, radiant light. From this primordial force, the Infinite Omniverses—realities beyond imagining—were effortlessly spun into existence. Within these vast realms, powerful beings rise and fall, yet none can truly fathom, much less surpass, the eternal essence of Omnius. future and past storytelling/Episodic

Aha! It is I, Ryx, your rival till your last breath! Don't tell me you've already forgotten about me. I mean, sure, the Shadow of Depth haunts us throughout the Solaris continent, but you should at least try to defy the unstoppable march of forgetfulness for someone as precious as me, eh? I just hope the Children of The Sun will hurry up and find all the remaining pages and bring back the light with the use of the Little Spark. I've heard that the curse has fully enveloped Solarae, and now its shadows are nearing Montumbra and.. Veldoria. Yeah, I'm quite literally SOBBING while writing this letter because of that fact. After all, the Beastman nation means a lot to me, and I don't want it to collapse just yet. Alright, enough about me. How's that sly fox doing these days? I bet he's still regenerating after the fight with that fiery guy. Damn, I never knew someone can be that annoying, can't he just.. stop with his mindless shenanigans? By the way, can we discuss the absurdness of the power the Elemental nation possesses? All we have in our arsenal, of course, is the Radiance and Umbra magic. They have that too, but it seems it wasn't enough for them! To be able to control THE elements of nature? Gosh, I envy them to a point that you can't!..Argh!.. Oh! Speaking of Radiance and Umbra, how's it going with your Equilibri training? You've always been known for Umbra practically leaking out of you, and I'm SO sorry that you didn't have the chance to see my reaction when I heard you began attending Radiance control lessons. I'm sure if not already, you're close to balancing out these two forces... Hmmm.. it seems that I went too much out of topic, giving TOO much needless context which you have already stated that you can't comprehend. Well then, I suppose the merciful old me shall grant you mercy by ending this letter... BUT! Before I'll do it, I'm giving you a heads up that I've trained day and night and strengthened my bond with my Protector, so be ready for a rematch soon! ̷H̷u̷g̷s̷ ̷a̷n̷d̷ ̷k̷ ̷ ̷ ̷ ̷f̷o̷r̷ ̷a̷ ̷b̷e̷t̷t̷e̷r̷ ̷t̷o̷m̷ Cheers, Your Rival.

Samul is a novel author. He enjoys writing novels and even reading other's works as well. But that's just it. Reading and writing novels. Those are the only things Samuel enjoyed in his whole life. His parents were well-off and he didn't need to find a job to feed himself. Everything going well for him until he died, his health was worsening as the day went by. Before he died he tried to write a thank you letter to his parents but he couldn't do that too. The next thing he knows he wakes up in the world that he created, [Blade Of Destiny]. However, instead of transmigrating into the body of the main character or even a side character, the boy became an extra called Lucas Darkheart. Who is Lucas Darkheat? No Idea! He's just an Extra in the novel! ...Or is he just an Extra? ______ Note: The cover is mine and also this cover is made by Author A4KL. &-- Support me one Pateron patreon.com/InkWaver_122

Power does not return with fanfare. It returns quietly - wearing another name. Eliza Caerwyn is the ghost of a noble house no one speaks of. A girl with no status, no fortune, and no place in the empire's war for succession. But when a feared duke bends the knee to her in the middle of a storm, the court begins to whisper. Whispers, after all, are how empires fall. And this time, someone is listening. A story of loyalty bought in blood, revenge buried in memory, and a crown that waits not for the strongest - but the one who remembers how it was stolen.

A CIA operative must transverse new reality as he has been plunged into a new unknown world in the midst of a rebellion.

This is a short story written with the hope that it will help heal you. Life is full of both good and bad. Sometimes it hurts so much that we cry, feel lost, and don’t know what to do. But after the pain, after you’ve let it out, I hope you can make the choice that’s right for you not for others, just for yourself. If 2025 gave you regrets or hurt you deeply, please remember: it’s okay. You can still start again. A new year means a new beginning. I hope you will learn to love yourself and everything around you. Then, you’ll see the beauty that was always there and find the good things that were quietly hiding all along.

When Alex and Emma, two childhood friends stumble upon a quirky, enchanted book at a local library, they have no clue it’s about to turn their lives upside down. One afternoon, while starting the new book , Emma gets magically pulled into the story, leaving Alex totally freaked out and desperate to get her back. Determined to rescue her, Alex jumps into the book and finds himself in a wild world where fairy tale characters have modern twists and crazy problems "The fuck, we’re inside that book?" Alex blinked, wide eyed. "Am I dreaming? Ugh, this is a nightmare!" Emma rubbed her temples. Before they could process, an old man appeared out of nowhere, waving a stick as if it explained everything. “You two are in deep trouble,” he said, grinning. “You’ll have to solve the mess in each world to make it out. Oh, and watch out for the immersion rate. Lose track, and you’ll become the characters forever.” "What, like a game?" Alex asked, half-joking. “Something like that,” the old man winked. “Good luck.. you’ll need it.” " What even was that?? He came and left just like that? " And so begins their wild journey, where they must navigate one bizarre setting after another, taking on different roles while trying not to forget who they really are... all while their memories slip away, bit by bit. As they navigates through the hilarious chaos, they realize the need to embrace the wild story and team up with the quirky characters they meets. Their love gets tested in all sorts of unexpected ways, leading to both laugh out loud moments and sweet reminders of what they mean to each other.

As the title says, the story of the first mage who created necromancy, and other magics, during his long life. I write it as a hobby, not to earn money so don't make your expectations too high.

The Story Of The Boy Who Couldn't Confess His Feelings Towards His First Crush Gets The Second Chance To Do That. An 18 Year 12th Pass Out Is Transported In To His 14 Year Old Body With The Experience Of 18 Years,Can He Confess This Time?Will His Crush Accept His Feelings?

After transmigrating into the interstellar age, Chen Sui became a star-wanderer. Seeking permanent residence, she joined the low-ranking Seventh Interstellar Academy and became their team analyst. During the Interstellar League, she stunned the entire arena with her extraordinary combat skills and keen battle insight. She proved wrong those who once looked down on her and forced the so-called elites to acknowledge her strength. Chen Sui forged a unique path as a powerful assault analyst, swept through hostile energy zones, and rose to become one of the strongest forces in the galaxy. Along the way, she formed deep bonds with like-minded teammates and fought together to protect their home.

> She draws in silence. He watches without words. On the rooftop where sky meets sea, their stories begin—one pencil stroke at a time. The First Whisper is a gentle love story between a quiet artist and the boy who watches her from afar.

"What Lengths would you go to have the power to shape your own path? What would you give up? How far would you go?" "I have gone far and given much to get where I am today. Maybe my story would help you to figure it out. Sit, Listen. This is the story of Cytar's First Lich."