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One Piece Ace Brother Complex

Mindworld Complex!

Algo como una "Vida Cotidiana" no existe, y Riku lo aprenderá de una forma radical. Una tragedia azotará su vida, poniendo en peligro todo dentro de esta. Conocidos, amigos, familia, gracias a él comprenderá el significado de estas palabras, y gracias a su hermana, podrá ver su verdadero valor. Su verdadero destino. ¿Quién podrá perdonarlo, si no puede perdonarse él mismo? (Información sobre la novela: Si tuviera que describir cómo es la novela, diría que es un "Slice of Life" y un "Coming of Age", con cierto enfoque al apartado psicológico especialmente del protagonista. Yo diría que la novela no está enfocado a ningún sexo, cualquiera puede leerlo [Webnovel no me deja elegir ambos...]. Para quienes acaben leyendo la novela de manera extensiva, agradecería oír vuestra opinión sobre qué os ha parecido, y qué creéis que debería mejorar. Al final, ¡no sabré que está bien y qué no solo También quiero recalcar que, al ser un pasatiempo, seguramente haya varias faltas de ortografía. Por el momento las ignoraré [y pido que me disculpes por ello], pero si en algún futuro imposible esta novela gana popularidad, le daré más atención y cariño [¡Eso no significa que no se lo esté dando ya!]. DISCLAIMER EXTRA: La novela es algo "no sólido", lo que se escribe puede cambiar en cualquier momento si veo que es malo, da mucho cringe, o se me ha ocurrido algo mejor. Dudo que cambie puntos principales de la historia, solo aviso para aquellos cambios menores que, de una u otra forma, creo que mejorarán la calidad de lectura. (COMO PETICIÓN PERSONAL, AGRADECERÍA UNA OPINIÓN SOBRE EL INICIO DE LA NOVELA, YA QUE SOSPECHO QUE NADIE LA LEE PORQUE TIENE UN INICIO POCO INTERESANTE.)
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Chapter 1: The Boy in the Barrel A calm sea. A single barrel floated under the blazing sun. The silence of the sea shattered when a pirate ship cut through the waves, its crew rowdy and wild. Inside the barrel? A boy with a straw hat, sound asleep. Elsewhere on the ship, Alvida, a cruel pirate captain with a giant iron mace, roared orders at her trembling crew. Among them was a small boy named Coby, forced into servitude. He dreamed of joining the Navy but was trapped under Alvida's thumb. Suddenly, the crew found the barrel. Curious, they opened it—and Monkey D. Luffy popped out with a cheerful grin. “I’m hungry!” Chaos followed. Luffy didn’t fear the pirates. In fact, when Alvida confronted him with her mace, he stood firm. “I’m gonna be King of the Pirates!” he shouted. Alvida struck—but her weapon bounced off. Luffy stretched and punched her away, shocking everyone. He had eaten the Gomu Gomu no Mi, a Devil Fruit that made his body rubber. Coby couldn’t believe it. Luffy wasn’t scared of anything—not even Alvida. When Luffy learned Coby wanted to join the Navy, he encouraged him to follow his dream. As the sun set, Luffy set sail with Coby. He looked to the horizon, pointing forward. “I need to find a crew. My journey’s just beginning!” And so, the boy in the barrel sailed toward Sure! Writing each One Piece episode as a chapter is a massive project, as the anime has over 1,000 episodes. To get you started, I can help write the first few chapters, each based on one episode, in a story format. Here’s Chapter 1, based on Episode 1: “I’m Luffy! The Man Who’s Gonna Be King of the Pirates!” Chapter 1: The Boy in the Barrel A calm sea. A single barrel floated under the blazing sun. The silence of the sea shattered when a pirate ship cut through the waves, its crew rowdy and wild. Inside the barrel? A boy with a straw hat, sound asleep. Elsewhere on the ship, Alvida, a cruel pirate captain with a giant iron mace, roared orders at her trembling crew. Among them was a small boy named Coby, forced into servitude. He dreamed of joining the Navy but was trapped under Alvida's thumb. Suddenly, the crew found the barrel. Curious, they opened it—and Monkey D. Luffy popped out with a cheerful grin. “I’m hungry!” Chaos followed. Luffy didn’t fear the pirates. In fact, when Alvida confronted him with her mace, he stood firm. “I’m gonna be King of the Pirates!” he shouted. Alvida struck—but her weapon bounced off. Luffy stretched and punched her away, shocking everyone. He had eaten the Gomu Gomu no Mi, a Devil Fruit that made his body rubber. Coby couldn’t believe it. Luffy wasn’t scared of anything—not even Alvida. When Luffy learned Coby wanted to join the Navy, he encouraged him to follow his dream. As the sun set, Luffy set sail with Coby. He looked to the horizon, pointing forward. “I need to find a crew. My journey’s just beginning!” And so, the boy in the barrel sailed toward destiny. Would you like me to continue with Chapter 2
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