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Thirteen words. "The Author has decided to discontinue this story. We apologize for the inconvenience." That's all it takes to shatter the world of "Aetheric Chronicles"—the year's most acclaimed fantasy webnovel. For thousands of readers, it's heartbreak. For the mysterious masked figure in the final chapter, it's an unfinished destiny. But for Alex, the story's most passionate fan, it's nothing short of betrayal. Then comes the message: "If you truly wish to know the rest of the story..." One mysterious message. And one simple reply. That's all it takes for Alex's world to turn upside down. Now, he's about to discover that some stories refuse to end, even when their authors abandon them. And sometimes, the most passionate readers must become part of the tale they love. In a world where prophecies fail, characters rebel, and plotlines unravel, being the "strongest reader" might not be enough. After all, what happens when an unfinished story decides to write itself? "Some stories choose their readers. Others consume them." _____ ____ _ Warning: This story contains descriptions of violence, gore, and the depiction of intense emotional trauma. Reader discretion is advised. All events and characters are products of the author’s imagination. _____ ____ _ Discord Link -> https://discord.gg/ezVBxwCEPN

As a transmigrator turned extraordinary creature of the human race, he found the world to be more colorful than he had imagined. To more easily access everything this new realm had to offer, he first needed a special resume. Then, he had to find the right place in a city perennially shrouded in fog to fill out an application, and the last and most critical step... — was to kill a chicken or catch a mouse.

The Dayan Empire had enjoyed a reign of over thirteen hundred years. The Emperor was critically ill, the Crown Prince was regent, local immortal sects were entrenched, and central authorities were vying for power in the chaotic court. Upon waking, Xu Yuan saw a dilapidated temple in the mountain rain at night, saw the eerie, broken-armed stone Buddha, and, the mysterious woman by the fire, her face veiled by thin gauze. ... ... He had become the ultimate villain's third son, of pure heritage and legitimate lineage. The fake villain, dressed in fine garments and enjoying luxurious feasts, simply waited to be humiliated, while the real villain was caught by the Big Ice Lump and dragged across the world in flight from the start. Golden finger? Only a fake villain relied on a golden finger to get rich, a true villain dared to confront a bleak life! "If Heaven had not birthed me, Xu Changtian, villains would be as eternal as the never-ending night." "........" "Father, save me!"

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How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. As he travels through dangerous lands and faces formidable challenges, he uncovers the hidden truths of his past and the mysterious forces shaping his destiny. Surrounded by powerful rivals, enigmatic figures, and the watchful eyes, Rui must navigate a world where strength is everything and the path to supremacy is filled with both allies and enemies. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

In the Blue Star, which once had only one continent inhabited by humans, everything changed ten thousand years ago. With the expansion of the world, supernatural continents emerged, inhabited by unknown races. Along with this mysterious event, the awakening of random abilities occurred. These abilities have no fixed levels, and the strongest people tend to classify them based on their usefulness. On the Human Continent, in the Pendragon Dynasty, Valt Agons awakened the most insane ability the world has ever seen: 100x Cultivation Critical Hits Return. This ability allowed that, whenever he offered his cultivation to his beasts, he would receive 100 times the amount given. [You gave 1 hour of cultivation to your chicken and received 100 hours of cultivation (4 days and 4 hours).] From that day on, a legendary beast master was born in the Blue Star. He was not only strong; his beasts, even the most common ones, became incredibly powerful.

In a world where extraordinary beings reign supreme, the hard-working Eric finds himself struggling, feeling that his efforts yield no rewards. However, he awakens the ability for tenfold critical hits. As long as he puts in the effort, he will reap the rewards, and he will surely trigger a tenfold critical hit! From that moment on: "Ding! You practiced magic once, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" "Ding! You practiced swordsmanship once, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" "Ding! You forged a weapon, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" Gradually, the once ridiculed and underestimated Eric transforms into the versatile Eric! Through sheer hard work and determination, with no innate talent whatsoever, he stands above all the prodigies! And so, he ascends step by step to the pinnacle of the world!

After his village was destroyed by an E-Ranked demon horde, Augustus was titled the failed lord and mocked by other noble lords. Until, he died. Augustus regressed with the knowledge of the future and his SSS-Ranked skill “Talent Evolution,” fighting to change the D-Ranked village of Iona into an S-Ranked Empire. Need resources? His villager's 10x Resource Multiplier Talent was evolved into 100x! Enemies coming? His champion's Two-Hit Critical Attack was evolved into a One-Hit Critical Attack! Gods? He reared a couple in his courtyard. While other lords slept on their villagers’ talents, Augustus’s villagers transcended gods. While they mocked him for picking a dead village, he would transform it into an oasis. — What to Expect: OP MC FROM THE START NO NTR/YURI/INCEST NOT FAST-PACED MORALLY WEAK MC What NOT to Expect: Caricature MC/Characters Pokemon Harem Forced Romance MC is touchy with killing Kind, Loving, and Clueless MC — Power Stone Goals: 200 PS: Weekly 1 Bonus Chapters (on Sundays)

{Brainless, Cool Article, Power Fantasy, Stupidly Overpowered,...} [In order to balance the quality, quantity, rarity, and frequency of critical strikes, the system has taken the initiative to categorize them. Monthly critical strikes range from 100 trillion times quality with 1 unit of item to 1 trillion times quality with 100 units of items. Weekly critical strikes range from 100 billion times quality with 1,000 units to 1 billion times quality with 100,000 units. Daily critical strikes range from 100 million times quality with 1 million units to 1 million times quality with 100 million units. Hourly critical strikes range from 100,000 times quality with 1 billion units to 1,000 times quality with 100 billion units. Then there is the most basic rate with no restrictions whatsoever between 100 to 999 times quality with 1 trillion units.]

A Russian economics expert had been making money through long-short strategies during the Russia-Ukraine war. Despite his economic success, he felt deep regret about Russia's historical mistakes. He wrote on his blog that "Russia has been on the wrong path since the 19th century," critically analyzing Russia's history. Then, remarkably, he traveled back in time to 1891 and found himself in the body of Russian Crown Prince Nicholas II during his visit to Japan.

Trapped in a strange magical cave our Protagonist must make his way in order to discover who he is, where he is, and why he's there. Join our MC on a journey of self discovery and exploration as we uncover a whole new magical world one step at a time. This is my first novel; Please comment what you enjoyed and what you didn't. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Let's help each other create a wonderful story.

The MC finds himself possessing the body of Leo. Upon his arrival in a fantasy world, he is quickly branded as a dangerous criminal, forcing him to abandon any hopes of a peaceful life. The story follows Leo as he navigates the challenges of this deadly fantasy realm, where he must face fierce pirates and the royal navy while in search of hidden treasures, and ultimately growing his pirate crew. Constructive criticism is accepted.

Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

Bumping into a stranger while looking for shelter while raining, Avery was about to scold the stranger but got tongue tied in seeing the handsome face . Follow the story of Avery and the millionaire playboy Alex Gibson who is also a mafia lord #Forced marriage # Betrayal # Funny # Bloody Note We're here to read not to criticize, also mature content and bloody

In this story, our protagonist finds himself transmigrated into his favorite game, a world filled with magic and demonic beasts. To secure a peaceful life in this new world—where strength equates to power—he must leverage his knowledge of the game to grow stronger and overcome the challenges that come his way. I appreciate any constructive criticism you may have. You can expect to see improvements as the story unfolds if you think it is. Release schedule: 5 chapters per week.

Draco had risen to the top of the world through his exploits in the legendary FIVR game, Boundless. After years of intense conflicts between his guild, Hellscape, and the guild of his former infidel lover, Darkrow, things came to a head when Draco conquered all. Now, nothing stood in his way of total conquest within the highly acclaimed second world of mankind, as he intended to fortify his new empire. Unfortunately, a timely assassination sent him back into the wheel of time for reincarnation, but not even the Gods gave him peace of death. Thrust into the past, Draco realized he'd been given a second chance at life to start from scratch, with all the knowledge of over fifteen years of almost absolute power in Boundless. Now, his path to glory will be far shorter and filled with more bloodshed than Hades could handle. ___________________________________________________________________________ WARNING: If you're the type to be triggered easily, please do not read.

The story of a witch with a heart full of venom getting the chance to redo her life and seize strength for herself. MC only cares about herself and her own gains don't expect any romance or deep relationships. power system is a mix of Xianxia cultivation and and isekai magic fantasy. trying to make an aesthetic similar to the dark souls series with a hint of reverend insanity and a bit of age of adepts. Constructive criticism is welcome. Reading comments makes me happy so please don't be afraid to share any of your thoughts

After criticizing a game, William, a game critic, is punished by the Goddess of Eternity, Aurora, and transforms into the young Princess Ayla within this universe. Waking up kidnapped by 7 Demon Lords, Ayla must endure their lust, but also uncover the dark secrets that inhabit the castle. Immortal and trapped in a cycle of desire and manipulation, each revelation takes her deeper into a maze of mysteries where the line between ally and enemy becomes increasingly blurred. What she discovers may be the key to her liberation—or her eternal damnation.

Léonard Dumont, a 16-year-old French teenager and geek of the SCP Foundation's myths, one day receives a notification on his computer from the SCP Foundation Management System. His duty is to build the SCP Foundation has The Administrator of the Foundation. This story is a mix of several canons of the Foundation. Mix everything with our own real world to add a weight of realism to all this. This is my very first story, I hope you will enjoy it and I am open to all criticism and comments.

Cesare Caruso, a renowned actor and a global superstar, appeared to have it all—fame, fortune, and an impeccable reputation. Yet, hidden beneath the surface was a secret he had guarded for years—he was an Omega. That carefully guarded secret came crashing down in one fateful night, during a glamorous masquerade ball aboard a luxurious cruise ship. Overwhelmed by an unexpected heat cycle, Cesare loses control of himself, devoured by his own desires and falling into the arms of a mysterious Alpha—a reckless moment that changed everything. [Zahir al-Tamid. That’s my name.] To his shock, the Alpha was Zahir—a proud prince from an oil-rich kingdom and an unwelcome figure from Cesare’s past. Worse, that night left Cesare unexpectedly pregnant! Before Cesare could make sense of it all, Zahir made a grand entrance at Cesare’s mansion by helicopter, uninvited, catching the attention of major media outlets around the world, demanding a settlement claiming that Cesare shall be responsible for ‘imprinting’ a royal family like him! “...Seriously, it’s not as if I have a ludicrous $2 billion just lying around, you know.” “Thus, marry me, Cesare.” Pregnancy, imprinting, and a royal marriage proposal—showered by a series of unwanted events, Cesare is desperate to find a way to cut ties with Zahir. But Zahir, stubborn and relentless, has no plans to let go. Can Cesare outrun the tempest, or will it pull him under? #BL #Omegaverse #Obsessive #Crybaby #One-sideLove #Prince #Superior Text copyright ⓒ 2024 by Kim Sol Da All right reserved. The Korean edition was originally written by 김솔다, Korea Translated and Published by We’ve Lab.

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

I plan on writing what ever comes to mind, I will try writing quality but I may not be consistent. I am also looking for criticism so pls if u find anything strange or wrong about my writing style or things I could improve on pls tell me as I will always take them into consideration.

Arthur is a mercenary on a quest to learn magic. Once a blacksmith’s apprentice, he left his comfortable life behind at fourteen to chase his dream of crafting enchanted weapons. With no noble blood or wealth, he turned to mercenary work, earning coin for the chance to study magic and uncover ancient relics. This is my first story. so sorry for any mistakes. I do plan to add romance later in the story when I feel more confident writing it. Constructive criticism please.

A child hated for what they are, a thief loved by all in their kingdom, a knight without a lord and many more stories in the world of Diitriva. If stories or characters are liked, then they might reappear I'm new to writing and any criticism is appreciated. ^^

You were the most beautiful under the heavens, a peerless beauty that could topple cities and nations, acclaimed as the most beautiful woman of the age. Did you think no man was worthy of you? You were wealthy enough to rival nations, with power that soared to the heavens, second only to none and above tens of thousands, standing at the very pinnacle of the world's order, where no one dared to meet your gaze? My name is Chen Dong. I could save your lives or take them just as easily.

Kenji Takahara, a 17-year-old professional procrastinator and avid gamer, had one mission that fateful evening: finish a dungeon raid on his phone before bedtime. What he didn’t plan on was getting "critically hit" by a speeding truck. When Kenji wakes up, he finds himself in a glowing white room face-to-face with the Creator of All Things... who seems more like a forgetful office worker than an almighty deity. God: “Kenji! You’ve been selected for the ultimate adventure!” Kenji: “…Adventure? You mean, like DLC or…?” God: “No, no, no. I’m sending you to another world to save it from unspeakable evil!” Kenji: “...Do I get cheat codes?” God: “We’ll see.” With a snap of divine fingers, Kenji is yeeted into his new reality… only to materialize in the Demon Lord’s throne room. Oops. No hero welcome, no starter weapons, and definitely no tutorial. Just him, a glitchy system window, and a room full of very confused—and very angry—demons. Now Kenji must navigate a world that feels more like a broken beta test than a grand adventure. With a mix of gamer wit, dumb luck, and the occasional divine intervention (read: God's half-hearted apologies), Kenji is determined to survive, level up, and figure out what exactly he’s supposed to be saving. Step one: Not die in the first five minutes. Step two: Maybe take over the Demon Castle? Hey, a guy can dream.

A story about our mc, Arin, join his journey in reaching to the top of the world. he makes the world shake at his might with his dragon lineage. the stories pace will change as this is my first novel and am still learning. I would appreciate any constructive criticism. New writer, synopsis will later be updated

After the introduction of the Apacolypse Marcus finds himself in a shitty situation and he’s gonna need all the luck and power he can get to survive the SSS level domain Follow Marcus’s path to power as he climbs the levels and kills monsters, bosses, kings, emporors, Gods and Goddesses, and everything he can to increase his power. P.S. this is my first time writing so be free to leave criticism and any help would be welcome, thank you.

There's nothing greater than death, at least that's what I believed in..... But then, I fell into a new world with a new identity, and this was not a dream. This was reality. I had the blood of Yama and I had the blessing of his lord. And with that I can say, I have no fear, after all....Death should never fear others. ----- Once upon a time, existed a highly intelligent young man, who suffered harshly due to a rare disease that founded a tumor in his brain. The young man, who was already lost with his life, didn't want to go away without doing anything to recover the money spent by his wealthy parents. And that's when he wrote a highly acclaimed novel, [The Extra's Demise], he wrote this for fun but even he didn't figure that it would receive such appreciation. Then, when the time of the final chapter came, his heart beat slowed and his eyes closed. He was no more.... ----- Until he awakens in a new world, no not a new world, it was the same world he had spent so many years creating. The world of his novel. Now he was stuck in a war, between the villain, the hero and the extra.... Wait why are they all females?! Read the chapters, to find out, what happens next!

Born into the royal family, Clove is the sole heir to the Aelaoria Empire. However, his frail nature makes him an unlikely candidate in the eyes of the nobles to become the next ruler. Under the watchful eyes of his uncle and the critical nobility, Clove is determined to overcome his weaknesses and transform into a respected, honorable king, like his father once was.