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When Rowan Hale stumbles upon an ancient, worn-out book, he expects nothing more than useless pages filled with forgotten lore. But as he opens it, a blinding light pulls him into a world beyond his wildest imagination-a realm brimming with magic, peril, and mystery. Stranded in the strange town of Stagpeak, Bash quickly discovers that this world is not only unfamiliar but filled with hidden dangers lurking in the shadows. As he struggles to understand his newfound powers and the golden orb of light that has fused with his very being, Rowan embarks on a quest for answers. With whispers of monsters, orc armies, and dark forces gathering in the countryside, his journey leads him deeper into the heart of a magical world where nothing is as it seems. Along the way, he forms unexpected alliances and faces life-threatening dangers, all while trying to uncover the truth behind the powerful magic he now holds. Will Rowan find his way home, or is his destiny forever bound to this strange, otherworldly dimension? In A World Beyond the Pages, the line between reality and magic blurs, and one young man's adventure is only just beginning.

Leo Morningstar, a human born into a world infested with supernatural beings is recognized by the abyssal and blessed or cursed --- as many would say, with the inheritance of the sin of pride. Without prior notice, Leo is dragged into the battle of the heavens. Tasked subjugating world's, defending against other sins and of course, hunting down the soldiers of the heavens. From a fifteen year old, fighting to protect humanity from the creatures of the night to the first prince of hell, leading his demonic army into a way against the heavens. Join Us ---------- Extra Tags: #Disrespectful, #First prince of hell, #Prideful #Cruel #Pro-human #Supernatural #7 sins. This is my entry for WSA 2025, I'll be thanking you for your support in advance. Enjoy.

Will the creator of the apocalypse survive? Liu Peijin has spent the last decade writing a trashy LitRPG web novel. Too bad no one likes it, leaving poor Peijin bitter and far more interested in challenging negative reviews. Until one day, after arguing with a commenter, she receives an ominous message: “Tomorrow, 1p.m. I have a surprise for you.” Without fail, the Azure Dragon from her novel appears on the freeway before her—and slaughters dozens of humans in a flash. Blue screens flash all around. Murderous goblins flood the streets. Gods invest in humans to fight for their entertainment. Peijin's book has infected her world. Technically, she has the knowledge and skills she needs to survive; it’s all those readers she blocked, who are now gods passing cosmic judgement on her, that she's worried about. Or that one god who Peijin is certain never existed in her novel. And somehow, it knows more than the author herself

Samul is a novel author. He enjoys writing novels and even reading other's works as well. But that's just it. Reading and writing novels. Those are the only things Samuel enjoyed in his whole life. His parents were well-off and he didn't need to find a job to feed himself. Everything going well for him until he died, his health was worsening as the day went by. Before he died he tried to write a thank you letter to his parents but he couldn't do that too. The next thing he knows he wakes up in the world that he created, [Blade Of Destiny]. However, instead of transmigrating into the body of the main character or even a side character, the boy became an extra called Lucas Darkheart. Who is Lucas Darkheat? No Idea! He's just an Extra in the novel! ...Or is he just an Extra? ______ Note: The cover is mine and also this cover is made by Author A4KL. &-- Support me one Pateron patreon.com/InkWaver_122

Tirnath is the youngest son of the Chieftain of the Zitharan Tribe. On their way home from Thurvagar Village, their group was ambushed by enemies. As the sole survivor, Tirnath holds a great grudge, but is badly injured. At the end of his breath, he found a totem spirit named Vyras. In order to achieve his goal of taking revenge not only on his enemies, but on the world itself, he will take the Trials of Custodian, a test so that he can become the Custodian of the totem. Will he succeed in leading his village from ruin to greatness in these turbulent times?

The newly rebirthed Nora does not want the love of the man she had given her life. What she wants is to reach a position where she could look down at others and take her revenge from those who had hurt her and killed her. Even in her death, they have proved that she was a fake. “I will return everything tenfold!” this time she did not run behind her hero, her sister can have him. She would be wealthy instead. Alric Mccoy had never looked down from where he was, for him life only meant perfection. Yet, he found himself attracted to a woman who made mistakes like breathing. He took a fancy to her but she avoided him. “I am teaching you romance!” he frowned when she did not cooperate with his first kiss. “Ha, i need you to teach me how to take over your business.” her chest heaved with anger but she was sure she felt something strange there too. “Ah, that. It is very simple. Marry me, and be the owner of it.” “.........”

For five years, Émile Silver has been imprisoned in a basement, blind and amputated. His sister, Alexandra, claims the outside world has become a nightmare. But when strange noises and an unexpected light disrupt his daily life, Émile finds the courage to make a desperate escape. After reaching the outside and rediscovering his childhood garden, Émile encounters a mysterious voice offering him an impossible choice: to regain his sight and legs in exchange for a service. When the deal is struck, Émile awakens with a new vision and intact legs, but he is thrust into an even more troubling reality.

In the power meat grinder that is Washington, D.C., the Blackstone Group controls political scavenger Emily Watson through barcode tattoos. When avenger Victor Stone scorches her skin with an electromagnetic pulse, a dying Emily scans the barcode on her collarbone, accidentally activating a nerve gas canister buried in an underground pipeline on Capitol Hill.Within 72 hours, a toxic fog containing genetically-targeted technology envelops Washington, specializing in killing politicians registered in the DNA bank. Victor discovers that the biochip under his burn scar is counting down, and a jailed and reborn Adam Crawford holds the key that will shut off all the gas valves-but that will permanently lock tens of billions of the Blackstone Group's dirty money into a blockchain tomb. The trio must choose from the ruins of power: destroy all evidence and be reborn, or save their arch-enemy in exchange for a filthy immortality.

Reincarnated in the land of Murim, Jin Taeho awakens in the body of the youngest son of the Moon Sect's leader, a weak and discarded soul who once took his own life. But Taeho is no ordinary man—he is the reincarnation of the sect's first and most feared leader, a ruler who forged the cult’s dark legacy with blood and power. With the ultimate demonic techniques and the legendary sword that only the founder can wield, Taeho rises from the ashes of his former self. His past life’s memories flood him, and with them, a thirst for power and a burning desire to reclaim what was lost. The girl who once rejected the previous owner of his body for his weakness, and his elder brother who now holds the title of heir—none of them matter to Taeho. His true goal is to ascend to the throne of the Moon Sect and reshape its future in his image. With no one aware of his true identity, Taeho begins to rise through the ranks in silence. He will play the weak son, bide his time, and wait for the moment when his dark power will be fully unleashed. The Moon Sect has no idea that the first cult leader has returned to claim his legacy.

"Between Pages and Memories" is an introspective fantasy narrative set in a magical library, an ethereal space that acts as a bridge between the world of the living and the world of the dead. The plot follows Yuuki, a young man trapped in a purgatory of memories, who, accompanied by an enigmatic librarian and other key characters like Minho, must confront loss, the corruption of his memories, and the enigma of a destiny that threatens to crumble. the stability of time and space. As Yuuki explores her diary, which records every moment of her life, a larger conflict is revealed that endangers not only her existence but that of the library itself.

“Youth is the hope of the future,” a resonant quote among Filipinos, attributed to national hero Jose Rizal. How accurate are these words for generations gone by? Senior High, the last stage for high school. It differs from other grade levels, which aim to prepare students like Adrian Cabanas for the future. With only two years remaining in high school, how will Adrian navigate challenges during his Senior High days? Teacher, classmate, or family–amidst looming problems, Adrian's only thing he can do is to review and improve for his future.

WARNING WARNING!! THIS BOOK CONTAINS MATURE CONTENT. {WSA ENTRY..} Orpheus was once a young vampire, born into a family of vampires who turned him into a werewolf through the use of black magic. This transformation created a battle within him as vampires and werewolves because of a deep-seated enmity towards each other. Orpheus struggled with this duality for thousands of years and eventually learned to live with his newfound self. However, this transformation left him ruthless and cold, instilling fear in people who worked for him. Despite his fearsome reputation, there was one exception - Camilla Grande. Camilla was a young woman in her twenties who lost her parents in a devastating car accident when she was just eighteen. She had to give up her dreams of pursuing a degree and a career in dancing to start working. However, her lack of a degree made it difficult for her to find a job in a regular office. One day, while wandering the streets, she overheard someone talking about a luxurious mansion on the other side of town that needed a housekeeper. The previous staff who worked there either got fired or left on their own accord, and no one could tell a complete story about the mysteries of that house. Camilla was about to dismiss the thought, but when she heard the amount they were offering to pay, she decided to apply. Little did she know that her decision to work at that mansion would change her life forever.

Eren Kain was an ordinary engineer and inventor until the day the Tower of Trials appeared. A massive, otherworldly spire reaching into the heavens, the tower beckoned humanity with promises of power, wealth, and immortality—but also death. Unlike the others, Eren was forcibly bound to the Tower. No one else could enter until he began his climb, and he couldn’t leave unless he reached the top. Stripped of magic, aura, or any supernatural ability, Eren’s only advantage is his engineering genius and the technology he can smuggle in. From basic firearms to drones and exoskeletons, he uses every tool at his disposal to survive the monsters, traps, and bizarre ecosystems within the Tower. Yet even technology has its limits in a world governed by magic. As Eren climbs, he discovers the Tower isn’t just a trial but a puzzle. Its magic isn’t arbitrary—it’s systematic, a science he slowly learns to decode. However, one wrong calculation could kill him instantly, forcing him to balance experimentation with survival. He scavenges magic crystals, artifacts, and spell books, using them in crude, improvised ways to bolster his arsenal. Over time, he begins merging technology and magic, creating unique hybrid tools to overcome the increasingly insurmountable challenges. But why was Eren chosen? What secret does the Tower hold? With no escape and the weight of humanity’s fate on his shoulders, Eren must climb—not just to survive, but to unravel the truth of the Tower itself. every 50 collections I’ll give a chapter and every 20 powerstones I’ll give a chapter every 10 reviews I’ll give a chapter

Meet Mark Fenton, a boy who always seemed down on his luck, doing his best to get by day to day... well that was before this new game roared through the world, what people didn't know, nor did he, was things are going to change. Now I don't wanna add spoilers so I'm keeping them out, expect an unstable posting schedule as I try to read any comments and fix the storyline off some I find interesting but keeping it as I planned. I don't plan for shut, but it might happen? don't know. really trying on this one so I hope you enjoy it.

As the title says, the story of the first mage who created necromancy, and other magics, during his long life.

In the world of Avalon, there is a small kingdom northern most of continent Ava, The youngest prince was born in the turmoil world, the war with Demon, the expansionist of the Empire and rival dominant economy of the Republic of Kaz, how will the youngest prince write a legend in this world...... Warning!!!! Early Chapters will be heavily written on slice of life genre and childhood of MC

After being tried for trespassing, a teenage writer has to work together with a Narrator to get back home. She navigates her life as she watches the characters she has written come alive and attempts to befriend them just to go back home. Stuck in a world where main characters are worshipped, supporting characters are respected and extras are mistreated, watch her as she attempts to go back home. She will meet foe and friend alike on her journey.

Neil, a young man in his 20s, had just bailed out of jail due to the betrayal of his ex-girlfriend, who took everything from him. All he was left with was an old apartment and a tiny bit of money—no clothes for winter, no job—but still, he had a direction to go in life. But the same day he got bailed, he found a mysterious book that wrote his actions and feelings in it automatically. What is this mysterious book? Will it help him progress in his life, or will it create more difficulties? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Meanwhile, Anika, a young, strong, and independent lady, was fighting her chronic illness. The company's succession had already started, and she had to make sure she made no mistakes and swiftly attained the position of CEO. But her family had something else in mind, her uncle—the vice-president; her brother; and her mother believed that a man should be the head of the company, not a woman. → Seemingly, one day, when she was admitted to the hospital, she found a strange book that wrote her thoughts and actions automatically. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ → But one day, both of their books started to talk to them (by writing). Was it the book answering their questions, or was it someone else? --"Anika came running towards Neil. She seemed in a hurry, yet passed by him as if he wasn't there." "Neil, lost in gazing at the skyscrapers, slowly approached Anika, yet he moved around her as if he didn't see her."-- → Why can't they ever seem to meet each other? Why, every time they walk towards each other, do they pass by as if they don't see each other? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ "I've reached here. Where are you?" he asked, looking at the book. "I am already here, but I can't see you. Where are you?" she replied. --"Neil looked at Anika in confusion, as if there was nothing in front of him, just air." "Anika moved forward, just a step away from Neil, her breath crossed his."-- "What are you saying? There is no one in front of me." Neil said in confusion, looking at what the book was writing. → Why, when they are standing this close to each other, can't they feel the other's presence or see them? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ || Need A romance with a unique twist and supernatural element…here it for you in a delicious palette… By-waddle-silence_of_scribes. || ------------------------------------------------------------------------

The story follows the journey of a young man in a world thousands of years after a great calamity that left only 15% of the global population as survivors. In order to curve extinction, the survivors became Guardians: beings that use Soul Arms and Magic as tools to fight the Nycerii and Darkpawn that almost brought about their destruction. Follow his story as he meets new friends, faces incredible dangers, uncovers hidden truths and ultimately discovers the source of all that began this strife.

Aidan Smith was living a normal life after two years working at a high paying logistics company with his best friend Calvin Ford. Up until his first encounter with a creature from another world, that followed a chain of events that pushed the world into a new era where magical beast roam the earth. While Aidan still unsure how he will survive the events, he knows that he will need to protect those he loves if he wants to live in this new world by leveling up.

What happens when an android wakes up with a consciousness and a soul? What if he finds himself in a parallel universe of fantasy brimming with magical energy and guided by the voice of his dead creator? What happens when he meets the parallel version of his creator? Well. Let’s find out in this tale of an android trying to find his place in this new world as he unravels lost secrets, acquires new powers, and finds companions. Let the journey begin. ********************************************************* This is my first work. There might be some grammatical mistakes so go easy on me. Also, I would appreciate any suggestions to improve the story. There could be some inconsistency in the number of chapters released. But I'll make sure to give out new chapters every week. The cover image doesn't belong to me.

[ON HIATUS. Book will resume at some point.] "Princess?" A young man entered the dimly lit room. "I'm not a fucking princess! Get this in your fucking head, dumb bastard! And tell this to the rest of these crazy family members! Lemme get outta here!" She yelled while twisting around her wrist, trying to get off the ropes that were holding her back from throwing a punch at these people who kept visiting her one by one. Her so-called family. "But YOU ARE a princess." Yuden amplified the fact that she was indeed Princess Zahra. The young man smiled softly at her although the smile didn't reach his eyes. His eyes were just cold yet they had some sort of fire in them that might as well burn the person in front just by his gaze. "Should I untie you? You seem in pain," he walked closer to her. "Ha! Do you even know what pain is? Pain is you, your whole bullshit, this house, these people!" "I didn't allow you to be so rude, Princess Zahra," Yuden's eyebrows furrowed, his smile fading. Synopsis: Tiana's idyllic life as a nomad is shattered when she arrives at the capital, she is declared to be the missing princess of Averlyon! Thrown into the glamour and wealth of the royal palace, she soon realizes that something dark lurks underneath the pretty smiles and graceful curtsies. As she struggles to come to terms with her new identity, her old life seems to call her back. Years after Tiana’s disappearance, Crown Prince Yuden is still waiting for her. However, he can no longer ignore his duty. He finally agrees to marry her younger sister Layla to secure the alliance between Averlyon and Yurania. As he prepares to slip the ring on Layla's finger, a man appears and announces that the princess has been found! Although Yuden found his long lost fiancée, she was nothing like what he expected her to have become! [Webnovel Spirity Awards 2024 Entry] ONLY 18+: Violence, triggers, and disturbing scenes (No rape). A happy ending guaranteed! Don’t forget to support for more chapter release!

60-year old historian, Jung Gwinam. On the day of her retirement ceremony, she got into an accident while attempting to save her daughter, just to later wake up as the main character of a fantasy novel written by her daughter?! Of all things, she had to be reborn as an orphan peasant. But who cares? This is the start of Jung Gwinam's second life

"What Lengths would you go to have the power to shape your own path? What would you give up? How far would you go?" "I have gone far and given much to get where I am today. Maybe my story would help you to figure it out. Sit, Listen. This is the story of Cytar's First Lich."

In a world on the brink of annihilation, Aarav Sharma is given a second chance—one month before Earth faces a disaster that will push humanity to its very limits. Reborn into a timeline where the countdown to extinction has already begun, Aarav carries the memories of his first life, where he witnessed the fall of cities, the deaths of countless comrades, and the collapse of everything he fought to protect. But this time, he’s not alone. A mysterious system has embedded itself within his mind, offering him blueprints of advanced technologies—spaceships, battleships, and human machines capable of defending Earth against the horrors that lurk beyond the stars. With these tools, Aarav embarks on a desperate journey to rewrite the fate of humanity. As he races against time, Aarav uncovers secret organizations that have operated in the shadows for centuries—Shadow Guardians, Space Guardians, and the Human Alliance, among others. Each holds a piece of the puzzle, but gathering them together will require more than just intellect; it will demand sacrifices, betrayals, and the courage to face the unknown. Aarav’s quest is fraught with danger as he encounters hostile alien races, political intrigue among Earth’s nations, and the ever-present shadow of his past failures. Alongside a growing band of allies—including a romantic harem of fierce and intelligent women—he must navigate the treacherous path to survival. But every victory comes at a cost, and the weight of his comrades’ deaths bears down on him with every step. With the clock ticking, Aarav must make impossible choices—choices that will either save humanity or doom it forever. For this is the part of no return, and the future of multiple galaxies hangs in the balance. Will Aarav succeed in forging a new destiny for humankind, or will the darkness consume them all? The journey has just begun, and the stakes have never been higher.

An ordinary college student named Jiro stumbles upon a mysterious scroll, unlocking a world of cultivation, ancient myths, and supernatural creatures. As foreign forces converge in search of legendary artifacts, Jiro’s newfound abilities and a growing connection with mythical beings, like a watchful Tikbalang, thrust him into the center of a dangerous web of secrets. Amid chilling ghost stories, curious transfer students, and his own growing powers, Jiro must navigate a world where folklore, myths and reality collide, discovering his true destiny along the way as he cultivates to become the strongest in the universe. DISCLAIMER!!! I used ai to enhance my grammar but the storyline,dialogues, and idea are mine and mine alone.

For the Love of Her follows the journey of a woman caught between the pull of a deep, soulful connection and her need to protect her heart. She’s always longed for a love that transcends the ordinary—a love that resonates with her soul, not just her body. But what happens when the desire for connection meets the necessity of boundaries? As she navigates the complexities of friendship and the blossoming of something more, she is forced to confront the most difficult question of all: Am I ready to give myself fully, without losing who I am in the process? Through moments of self-discovery, introspection, and emotional growth, she learns the importance of consent—not just in relationships, but in her relationship with herself. This is a story of self-love, of understanding that true intimacy starts with honoring one’s own boundaries and desires. It’s about learning that love isn’t just about surrendering to another—it’s about allowing oneself to be whole, before inviting someone else into your world. In this moving tale of emotional evolution, the protagonist’s journey becomes a meditation on the complexities of love, vulnerability, and the courage it takes to truly be ready to love. The question is not whether she will fall in love, but whether she will choose to do so in a way that honors her heart, her soul, and her boundaries. For the Love of Her is a heartfelt exploration of self-respect, personal growth, and the beauty of embracing love when you’re truly ready.

Ethan is the high school joke, a walking punchline for everyone in the cafeteria. Taunted and humiliated daily, his insecurities have reached a breaking point. Just when he's ready to give up on himself, he stumbles upon Loving.exe, a mysterious app that promises to create the perfect connection. Skeptical but desperate, Ethan clicks. Enter Mia: beautiful, kind, and eerily perfect. She knows Ethan’s pain, his secrets, even his enemies. But as she begins to "fix" his life, things take a dark turn. People start disappearing, strange accidents occur, and Mia's comforting words become increasingly sinister. Ethan is now trapped in a digital nightmare, unsure if Mia is his savior or the orchestrator of his doom. Will he find a way to break free from her grasp, or will her "love" consume him entirely?