Revising Your First Draft

Eight hundred years ago, Xie Lian was the Crown Prince of the Xian Le kingdom. He was loved by his citizens and was considered the darling of the world. He ascended to the Heavens at a young age; however, due to unfortunate circumstances, was quickly banished back to the mortal realm. Years later, he ascends again–only to be banished again a few minutes after his ascension. Now, eight hundred years later, Xie Lian ascends to the Heavens for the third time as the laughingstock among all three realms. On his first task as a god thrice ascended, he meets a mysterious demon who rules the ghosts and terrifies the Heavens, yet, unbeknownst to Xie Lian, this demon king has been paying attention to him for a very, very long time. This is the revised version and the translated one.

In a world bound by divine power and the unyielding rule of the Drakonhart empire, Dante Blackwell—an author—finds himself reincarnated into his own dark novel as Lucian Westwood the holy saint. Before he realizes he is trapped, it happens fourteen times over. doomed to regress forever, will Dante escape the prison written by his own pen? or will he, the creator, become a destroyer of his own creation. "I wouldn't be back here again, if there was no world left to get back to" Warning: This novel contains themes of parricide, filicide, deicide, nihilism, child abuse, suicide, and torture. note: this novel is tragic. Extra tags: #rebirth #highfantasy #graveborns #witches #nonhumans #summons #shadowmancers #bloodmages #royalfamily #wizards #mindcontrol #schemes #nobles #fantasyworld #curroption #manipulation #assassins #plottwists #waragainstggod #multipleleads

Being a high-school student, Agus' only goal was to get good grades and get into university. However, a teleportation accident brought him, his schoolmates, and his teachers to a different world. Transported into a dungeon in a magical world, he found himself in a cave dungeon, facing against monsters in a deadly battle of survival. What's worse, the people with him only seem to drag him down.

What happens when an android wakes up with a consciousness and a soul? What if he finds himself in a parallel universe of fantasy brimming with magical energy and guided by the voice of his dead creator? What happens when he meets the parallel version of his creator? Well. Let’s find out in this tale of an android trying to find his place in this new world as he unravels lost secrets, acquires new powers, and finds companions. Let the journey begin. ********************************************************* This is my first work. There might be some grammatical mistakes so go easy on me. Also, I would appreciate any suggestions to improve the story. There could be some inconsistency in the number of chapters released. But I'll make sure to give out new chapters every week. The cover image doesn't belong to me.

In a world where gods and demons exist, only disaster awaits. Watch as two boys from opposite situations deal with the obstacles of life

In a world without kindness, only the strong survive. Far from any known land, shrouded in fog, lies an ancient and isolated island—a place of breathtaking beauty and dark, hidden secrets. Towering, twisted trees reach toward the sky, their branches whispering with the wind. The shoreline glitters with light-blue waves, while eerie cries echo from the heart of the jungle. The island seems alive, a world unto itself, both alluring and dangerous.

As the title says, the story of the first mage who created necromancy, and other magics, during his long life.

Synopsis: Takeshi Mori, a aimless 40 year Japanese man having retired early in life with riches now wonders through the empty city streets at midnight as usual wondering what to do with his life, but that is all shattered as while looking up momentarily he sees an unfathomably big eye staring down at him, with one blink to check if he's too sleep deprived he is gone in an instant. And when his eyes open again, a forest greets him as searing pain jolts him wide awake as on the back of his right hand is a branded symbol of a shield. What happened? Where is he? What is the mark on his hand and what are the increasingly loud howls and growls he can hear coming his way? Story takes place in a fantasy world called Ender with high level magic, fantastical races such as Fae, demons, angels, Undead, merfolk, beast man and more. It'll also have some romance but it'll be a slow burn and i mean SLOW burn. Also i would recommend reading the prologue to get the whole picture and not just jumping into chapter 1. Person 1: Hey do you know where my dandelion is? Person 2: Um it's just over there. That's Your Dandelion right? Absolute Cinema: Those who know

"First Vampire God" is a tale of redemption, power, In a universe where worlds collide and ancient beings forgotten gods parallel universe destroyed gods like clash, Ajax first was human in earth and turned to a vampire and entered supernatural world because he turned into a vampire his desire which were suppressed to support his family burst out then he goes to other women to fulfill his desire and forgetting his wife who also turned into vampire same time as him his wife leave him saying he was weak indirectly, then he fell into a dimension hole came to outer universe where gods control where gods live as normal humans here he started a quest for redemption might just change his fate and outside universe—or perhaps even the multiverse itself. this is also my first time writing a novel leave comments below what your thoughts and what you guys want to add to this if I can i will add those things in it

Anthony Rose was just 14 Years old when his whole world was turned upside down by an invasion of aggressive flesh-eating aliens from an incoming planet called Nemesis. He and his mother were forcibly drafted into the military where his mother died during his first encounter. Now 17, and abandoned by the government and leaders, he and his team of teens must fight for the people of Brooklyn and do what is necessary to better the chances of survival on planet Earth.

Drafts. This book here is to keep my drafts for my Destinies series.

may not write often because I’m still going to school and I do not have enough ideas sometimes to continue so hope you all understand the difficulties of writing a story.Thanks

Draft 1

Draft 2

Valarie Miller, the only child of her late mother remembers her death with anguish because she lost two things at the same time. First, she gave her heart to Brian Garfield, the future President of a leading cosmetics company that night to raise funds for her sick mother's hospital bill. Secondly, to her despair, she returned to the hospital in the morning with so much money from him only to discover that her mother was dead and she hated men and the will to live. Likewise, she went into hiding while carrying Brian's pregnancy. She delivered a set of twins - boy and girl afterward and named them, Brian and Valarie. To her chagrin, three years later, she could not stop thinking of him. Unknown to her, Brian hated women too especially her stepsister, Jane who lured her to him and could not think of another woman but her. She got tired of missing him and returned with his children that morning only to discover that he was getting married to her stepsister, Jane. Can she win her first love back?

A collection of my shitty work.

"I think it's my nature to fall for you again and again." 'Transmigration in the new world and the first thing I see is a warning sign.' The female lead seems to be unaware of the situation. End up with having tons of mission to accomplish. hope you enjoy ;) I have revised the story and edited the first chapter. I will continue the story. Thank you

He forced the knife into his heart, but he was not in pain. He gazed at the gray moonlit sky, and smiled. His eyes peeled open “Was it a dream? . . . A Guide?. . . A Prophecy???” He followed the events of his dream, and at the apex of a drug induced euphoria, the knife pierced his heart. Again, he awoke, tears flowed from his eyes. “I'm Crying?” Though he didn't know it, every time he died, time would rewind exactly 24 Hours. S.A.G.E (System of Advanced Genetic Engineering) Galaxies above the coveted CRISPR. Since its creation, the rules and lives of humanity had fundamentally changed. At first, its creation was intended to cure genetic disease, cancer, and illness, but it went much, much further. Transcending limits of physical and cognitive abilities, solving differential equations become no less than understanding 1+1=2. Soon enough, Quantum Mechanics, Information theory, string theory, it was all intuitive. But then, they saw… They FELT the God Particle. A fundamental force which imparts mass onto the universe. The humans were able to manipulate the god particle. E=MC^2. Simply put, mass is energy, and energy is mass. Manipulation of the God Particle generated energy, energy which could be catalyzed into atomic structures. Solid, Liquid Gas, and plasma. Otherwise, known as: Earth, Water, Air, and Fire. Magic, the stuff of Fantasy, become reality.

A 18 year old shut in who survived off of his parents money they left when they died. With his computer exploding he dies and gets reincarnated in another world.

Follow Frey, a typical nobody in our present world. As he experience his daily life blast away, never to return the same. Technology fades as magical skills claims its place. Being the first to ever come in contact with mana, and thereby obtain a skill, he will get a head start. To face the troubles awaiting in a changing world. He will journey to the far side of the earth, searching for his reason to live.

Zhou Ming, a researcher amd archeologist are retrieving an ancient relics in a mountain range where accidents happen. He then transmigrate to a world of magic. Will he survive there ? With the help of the relics , watch him travel the world of magic , solving the mysteries and dominating the world with unparalleled might brought by the relics

A mourning teenager finds a mysterious app on her phone that can cause massive chaos and destruction of all kinds. She soon discovers that she has to use the app in 3 days or she dies. Will curiosity turn into an obsession? Will she want to change her world or destroy it?

Demons attack, and the humanity are on the brink of extinction. A young man from a village mysteriously received a power to defeat the Demon Lord. But this was not like the typical power that other heroes received. ______ Warning: 18-Years old and above only!