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Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

Yun Lintian, a man from Earth, found himself in a clichéd transmigrated situation and ended up in the Azure World, a magical cultivation-oriented world. Unlike the protagonists in the novels he had read, Yun Lintian lacks any cheating devices to assist him on his journey. Did the God of Transmission forget about it? However, as a crisis unfolds, an ancient power dormant within him suddenly awakens, entangling him in a mysterious destiny... Watch the journey of Yun Lintian in a foreign world as he rises in power ranking alongside his precious all-female sect! ————————————— DISCLAIMER: The protagonist of this novel is exceptionally powerful, resourceful, and mature. If you don't enjoy stories with an overpowered protagonist who frequently use logic from novels he has read to solve the problems he encounters, this novel may not be to your liking. Besides the cultivation adventure, this novel also focuses on romance, comedy, and the bonds between the protagonist and his fellow disciples in the sect. The author is not a native English speaker, so you can expect some grammatical errors in the novel. Please bear with me, and trust me, I am trying to improve it. Everything in this novel is pure fantasy based on the author's imagination. It does not reflect the real world. Hence, readers should not attempt to apply their common sense and logic to this novel. Constructive criticism is always welcome. ————————————— All rights to the cover belong to the original artist.

In this story, our protagonist finds himself transmigrated into his favorite game, a world filled with magic and demonic beasts. To secure a peaceful life in this new world—where strength equates to power—he must leverage his knowledge of the game to grow stronger and overcome the challenges that come his way. I appreciate any constructive criticism you may have. You can expect to see improvements as the story unfolds if you think it is. Release schedule: 5 chapters per week.

Let there be light, and there was light; this marked the beginning of the universe and led to the emergence of the first humans and the first murder. Join Cain as he navigates supernatural threats that seek immortality by consuming his heart—an event that will unfold in Volume 2. If you’re interested in the supernatural genre, this story is for you. I’ll be posting two chapters a week, although the schedule may change. I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions!

When people about R.R Jackson the first thing comes to mind The Living Legend.... He is a man who brought storm in the worlds entertainment... Idol of all aspiring idols... Music , Film , Drama , Books not a place he left untouched They say he is a man with Midas touch or is he ...... Open to constructive criticism... Hope everyone like my story.... Disclaimer : I don't own anything other than my main character. All things written is nothing more than a fiction. Now you can support me on my patreon Link- patreon.com/An_13_FavouriteAuthor Important notice:------ This the rewritten version of my previous book. I had a writers block. So, to bring myself back in the grove I decided to rewrite the story. I could have edited the old one but you know something is better to be kept as a memory... But it doesn't mean I will stop updating the old one... Fun fact: Due to rewriting there will be deviation between the two. It will not seen initially but as the story progress it will. A fun little challenge to my dear readers who can spot the difference.

If you could gain power, wealth, or prestige, but at the price of your soul, would you accept the deal? Humanity continues on to day-to-day life, oblivious of the supernatural creatures that lurk in the dark. Being attacked by one of these creatures, Jayce Price was given a choice, sell his soul or die as a human, picking one of the options, multiple messages appeared in front of him. [ You have acquired the System ] [ Current Demonic Synchronization 0.00% ] [ Increasing Demonic Synchronization ] --- Author here, As this is my first ever novel I would appreciate constructive criticism to help improve the quality of the novel. Hoping to improve the quality as I write more so please feel free to state your opinions on the matter. It would be most appreciated if you could support my novel in any way you can, every contribution toward a goal is valuable, regardless of how small it may be. Also, special thanks to J.G. for the artwork! Contact me through Discord or Email for any questions: Ribblood#3222 Ribblood2@gmail.com

In a high-stakes contract marriage, Serena and Alexander navigate unexpected love, dark secrets, and dangerous enemies, where every choice could seal their fate—or shatter their carefully constructed lives.

Tags: Power Couple, Action, Adventure, Romance, R-18, Virtual Reality, Comedy, Secret Identity, Overpowered MC, Male Protagonist and Female Lead. The most feared Assassin in the world died because of vengeance. What he didn't expect was instead of being sent to the nether world, he instead woke up on his younger self all before the time he became an Assassin. Instead of going back to the life of living in the shadows. He instead decided to lead a new normal life this time and play the newly released Virtual Game, Fate Online! Let's watch as he change the things that isn't supposed to happen while changing his fate along with it and watch him, on the road to becoming a top professional player. Note: The Female Lead would have its own narration along in the story. [Artwork: ptitvinc] Release Update: 7 Chapters /week Want to add an addition to the story? Then check out my Patreon! https://www.patreon.com/apocalypseII P.S - If you're gonna leave a low end review. Make sure its a constructive criticism, because I would certainly get it deleted, if it doesn't help me in improving my story. I don't except hate reviews just to lower its rating because the story is premium. Discord - https://discord.gg/XPeAkE

******* Discord: https://discord.com/invite/MXzXh7AW ******* In a world where magic and several fantasy races existed, a boy goes into hiding in a forbidden land but finds something he could never have imagined. He comes out reborn and with a new identity and sets out on a journey to conquer the world. Along the way, he faces numerous challenges and battles, as well as other factions. But fuelled by the knowledge and power gained from the forbidden ground, the young man soon becomes a force to be reckoned with. He gains allies of different races and starts to uncover the secrets of the universe. As he becomes more powerful more questions pop up. How did he come to be? Who gave him his powers? What price shall he pay for what he has gained? Follow Rene as he dives into the world to find out who ly is while conquering worlds and doing as pleasesase with his brain and brawn. ******* All constructive criticisms are welcome, and I will try my best to read them it. ******* Please note that there are several dark scenes in the novel including and not limited to rape, gore etc so read at your own risk. ******* Note the picture is not mine if the owner wants me to take it down message me.

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

Warning: [R-18] [Sexual content] The following story contains graphic sexual scenes and content that may be offensive or disturbing to some readers. Reader discretion is advised. The instant memories of a high schooler from the digital age settled in, Nero aspired to live his life in the magical fantasy world seeking greatness: power, wealth, and sex. He wanted it all.  Nero desired a day when he could roam freely, like a butterfly, unhindered by the restraints of humans, gods, and demons. However, all his dreams were shattered when his system revealed that his path was non-combat. Forced into a corner, awakening his Incubus bloodline seemed to be the only choice left. Sigh, His destiny to gift green hats to other men seems set in stone. Author note: Heed my warning Junior, if you haven’t suffered trials and tribulations for 18 years in this realm, I strongly advise you not to read this scripture. If you proceed, you shall suffer Qi deviation and awaken inner demons. Now, to all my Fellow Daoists, this scripture is my first attempt to pen down the years of insights I have gained on the Dao of degeneration from the divine web of wisdom. You can read it either for the thick plot or the THICC PLOT. The more support I receive, the more chapters I will try to push out. You can always let me know what place my writing needs to improve. Constructive criticism is always appreciated:) P.S: This scripture does not fall under the Xianxia sect, but is an inspired work.

In the quiet shadows of the Nara clan’s sacred forest, a strange infant is discovered—blind and abandoned, watched over by creatures of the dark. Hikaru Nara grows up with a power that defies understanding, forming a bond with shadows that stirs both curiosity and unease. As he trains alongside his peers, his abilities attract the attention of those who seek to harness—or eliminate—his unique gifts. Yet, some mysteries run deeper than they appear, and Hikaru’s path is woven with questions of fate, family, and a destiny hidden in darkness. What lies beyond the sightless gaze of the Blind Seer of Nara? Warning : 1_ The MC doesn't Know the plot 2_ He will be about the same age as Minato 3_ Some of the Characters and powers will be nerfed as i don't like the power scale at the end of the story 4_Conseder this a different timeline of Naruto world as i a lot will be changed 4_No Harem Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto or its characters (except the original characters I create) PS : It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome

"Catch me, Agent." the man said before jumping out of the window. She ran fast to catch up with the man who jumped from the window but no matter how fast she ran she didn't catch up with it and was even more annoyed when she saw the man smiling at her as he fell and landed smoothly on the ground. "Ughh, that fucking mafia boss." ___ "Wanna play with me, agent?" "Hide and seek?" "Sure. find me, agent."

Sora Arashi; a lonely and love-deprived teenager. Walks a tightrope between despair and hope. Orphaned at a young age, he lives with his uncle’s abusive family enduring constant neglect. Sora finds solace in books, particularly those containing “Yanderes”. He yearns for a connection so intense, that not even death could severe it. So, will Sora find what he intensely yearns for, or will he succumb to the overwhelming urge to just disappear? ----- This is my first ever novel, so please do go easy on me. I am not very confident in my writing, but hope you guys like it. English isn't my native language, so I sometimes have used AI to make it sound better, but be sure the idea or base isn't taken by AI, just some of the wording. So I hope you guys can excuse that. The novel concept won't be something revolutionary, just your average wish fulfilment novel you can say. It can be read as a good time pass. It will be cliche but I will try my best to upload quality content. The cover is AI-made. Credit to my friend Odayaka. Be sure to check his novels out (Much better than mine) https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4320077764 Constructive criticism is very welcome. I will try to release every 2 to 3 days. My discord: https://discord.gg/eDaKPehNf5

I woke up in this world with a System and a sword. Without hesitation, I chose to complete the princess’ quest with my weapons: Arrogance. Cunning. Pride. I will lead guild Sol Invictus. Denizens of the 7 hells, respect me. Servants of the 11 heavens, know fear. Guild Invictus, know the suffering of training so you can wrest victory from the jaws of those who dare doubt you. This is a story about a snake named Tycondrius waking up in a fantasy world of swords and sorcery. There is action, violence, unapologetic murder, and arrogant displays of power. There is an emphasis on combat growth as well as psychological growth on more than a few members of Guild Invictus. There is camaraderie and also the inevitable comedic dialogue amongst manly men. There are even elements of romance and Tycon running away from terrifying, powerful women. (Did you know most female snakes eat their partners after mating?) Give this book a read. I hope some of these stories can inspire you to fight your battles with analytical intelligence, heroic courage, and ruthless lethality. Work is completed as of 9May2024. There's also a few side-stories written in Chapter 1151! The Author is working on a new story called 'I Wish You Were Never Reborn.' After four or so years of writing, my skills have much improved. Highly recommend. Here is my discord: https://discord.gg/NNbAj7N Constructive criticism and corrections welcome. Other Authors extra-welcome. You can find a list of characters at https://snek.fandom.com/wiki/Character_List Cover image credit: Johnabrash at Fiverr

A couple weeks before Lake's Martial Course Entrance Exam, While he was taking a nap during a class he is awoken by a strange beeping sound. Opening his sleepy eyes, he could sees a strange holographic screen in front of him. [Roleplay System has successfully bonded to host. Do you wish to begin roleplaying?] [Yes?] or [No?] At first Lake thought he was still half asleep and half-heartedly chose [Yes]. Immediately After he saw a new prompt appear before his eyes. [Please select the main role the host wishes to play from the following options.] After reading that message, A series of options appeared before him. The options were so numerous that they covered the entirety of his vision. From the numerous options Lake could spot a few interesting sounding roles, [Martial Saint], [Heavenly Sage], [Harem King], [Slaughterer]… The options were too much and they made Lake dizzy. Without much thinking Lake scanned through the list of roles and choose the role whose name caught his attention the most. [Master of Fate] *** Disclaimer 1. Cover art is not mine. It belongs to kaslla. I took the image and edited my title onto it. Their twitter handle is ksb_x4 if you wish to check out their work. 2. This is my first novel that I decided to write to fill up my free time, so don't expect constant updates or any amazing writing quality. 3. I am willing to take criticism as I am still looking to improve my writing skills. For those who may post constructive criticism, thanks in advance. 4. Finally, thank you for taking the time to read my novel.

Geraldina was an intersex whose life seemed to be only tied to her crazy love for her ex until the same guy dragged her into a whole new and insane journey. *** "He's always dragging me into strange things. My life is this messed up because of him!" Dina complained to her system Zero-one "Then let me take you away," A certain target said "Whaa???" All of a sudden, the mission took the weirdest turn with her targets now 'targeting' her with their crazy love. This wasn't right! Her heart was only for her Jack...Right? "Zero-baby, help me~ I don't know who's the target anymore!" Dina whimpered in confusion "Come into my arms then," Zero suddenly said with a strange seductive smile and the same crazy, infatuated look the targets had in their eyes! "EH?!" THIS TRANSMIGRATION SUDDENLY BECAME STRANGE! *This is my first novel so the beginning might not be the best but I promise it gets better as you move on. Constructive criticism is allowed but please don't be mean. *Read my review and its reply for important clues (optional but necessary) *I am on FB,Twitter and pininterest and I have a blog. Links in my review.

[Target in sight.] [Skill Critical Eye has been activated.] Being clumsy is quite common. But Luke Hunter’s clumsiness is on a different level. As the young man quite literally stumbles through life, he wonders if there’s something more he could be doing in the world. His dreams may come to be realized, as a freak accident causes Luke to wake up as Klum, in a completely different setting than his day-to-day life. His Dexterity, a skill that measures things such as flexibility and how well one holds themself, sits at the level it was in his past life; 1. And yet, he finds his skills to be suited for an extremely coordinated individual, especially after he meets the only other Sword Saint to have ever existed, an individual who is the strongest Swordsman among those both alive and passed on. It’s up to him to find his way in his new life, and strive to reach the path of the highest Swordsman — the Sword Saint. Will he be able to transform his 1 Dexterity into a 1000? Or will he be dragged into something much deeper — much darker? Credits to valeri_mirley on fiverr for the new cover! Updating 5-10 chapters a week, and now posting on RoyalRoad!

In a world where nothing seemed to matter, Aisam once lived a dull life with no passion or dreams. But fate took a cruel turn when he perished in a tragic plane crash planned by terrorists. Suddenly reincarnated in a new world, he found himself in the body of a forgotten orphan from a long-forgotten novel he once read. Armed with a mysterious system, Aisam chooses to traverse the world pursuing the path he chose to accept... The Path of Terror. *** It's my first novel, and English isn't my first language so I kindly ask for your patience and support. Constructive criticism is greatly welcomed as I try to improve. That's why, the further chapters you go, the overall story may have improved.

In the glittering world of London's elite, the Whitmore family reigns supreme - until a mysterious stranger, Victor Mallory, arrives and upends everything. The Whitmores become entangled in Victor's web of secrets and lies, With a gripping blend of high-stakes thrills, simmering romance, and suspenseful twists, Can the Whitmores survive Victor's machinations unscathed? Victor’s Motto - “The ends justify the means when it comes to fulfilling my goals.” Warning: 1. There will be no set word limit, according to need some chapters can be large and some small. 2. Read at least 12 to 15 chapters before giving a review. 3. Some scenes can be detailed so be prepared. 4. Be attached to any characters at your own risk. 5. There will be many businesses, which means deals, and long negotiations, so be prepared. Disclaimer -All characters and settings are fictional, any similarity with reality is purely coincidence. PS: It's my first work, I'm hoping it turns out well. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully, I'll improve as this novel progresses forward.

Please leave a review and a comment. I always enjoy constructive criticism, or just someone saying they enjoy reading my book. However, I just want to let you all know that I do write this in my free time, so there isn't a consistent update schedule. Chapter 1 WHAT THE FUCK Crystal’s (Pov) ‘Ahh, there is nothing better than a hot shower after a monotonous day of school work’ I thought while washing my hair with pomegranate shampoo. Turning off the water I stepped out of the shower and reached for the towel, and just as I was about to grab it a bright light flashed in front of me. |Congratulations! You and 4 million other humans have been selected from Earth to participate in King/Queen building Games!| |Notice: You will be given a random Talent and Subjects to help you build your empire. It will depend on your leadership, intelligence, and Luck to survive this world of magical beasts, other Kings or Queens, and any other dangers you may face through your journey.| “WHAT THE FUCK!!!” I screamed in surprise as a screen popped up in front of me and a disembodied voice rang out around me. Looking around me I noticed that 1, I was standing outside what appeared to be a cave with a small house nearby and a forest in front of me with a river running through it, and 2, I was still completely naked. Authors Note: This will be one of the most op-bullshit stories I have ever written down, ill try to give it some actual plot but it's pretty much just something fun for me to write in my downtime. I will take any helpful criticisms, suggestions, or reviews. However, if you're just gonna spam smartass bullshit I’ll just delete it. #OP, #System, #Yuri, #Kingdom Building, #Nonhuman MC, #Female Protaganist, #Transmigration, #Etc.

Corvin is a boy who grew up with dreams of changing the world. By luck, he finds a chance to have lasting impact on the world after saving his family. As him and his new friends take positions at the forefront of a wave of industrialization, he peeks at an unnerving truth. Maybe, everything he lived wasn't simple luck but the will of something powerful? Will he be able to change the world in the way he wants during the industrial revolution of his country, or will he fail as he uncovers the truth about reality and his real identity? A.N: This is my first work, and just a simple hobby of mine but I do take it seriously. Some stuff may be more complicated than usual but please bear with it. I appreciate constructive criticism.

Billy is a Human from earth who is transmigration into the body of a 1 year old child in the fantasy Kingdom of Brittania. What can he do with a fistful of ambition and a whole lotta potential? IMPORTANT!!! I am a New writer and would like constructive criticism not hate. I know its generic for knew authors to say this and write the worst shit possible and if you see me making plot holes plz point them out. This is not a Harem not sure if it's a romance but there's a High chance for intersex relations between the MC and an alive willing maybe human woman. I am trying to stretch my creativity muscles by making this masterpiece of a story that even Tolkien would cry in sheer joy when reading. The MC will most likely be prone to ranting about things in his past life. There may be some subtle or overt influences from anime, mythology or legends because I'm a huge anime and mythology fan.

Set in a fantasy world. With its own unique races and power system. The story follows a sheltered teen, hidden from the terrors and ways of the world. One day he is faced with a fateful encounter, and soon after, a rude awakening to the truth that is his world. A world of deceit, manipulation, and calamities. Will he be carried by the storm of greed? Or will he change its course? DISCLAIMER This is my first ever piece of creative writing. While I'm bursting with ideas, I have very little experience and can only hope my writing is clear and enjoyable. I'm open to any, and all constructive criticism regarding your thoughts. But keep in mind directly stating that my work is trash for example is not constructive and does not aid me in improving the quality of my work. Thankyou readers, And I sincerely hope that you love my fantasy world. T. D. Yeoman :)

When she died all she thought was "How nice it would be if I have someone at my side!". She died all alone. Now given a chance in a whole new world, she finds herself with a marriage proposal. Travel with her as she tries to find love with the man she got married. It's my first novel, so pardon me if I make mistakes. Constructive criticisms are always welcomed. I really hope that you guys will enjoy this. This will be a slow romance, so please have some patience.

Ye Qiu transmigrated to a world of barren wastelands. He obtained the 10,000 Fold Return System. By teaching or giving his disciples something, he could obtain high critical chance returns. [Ding! You gave your disciple a Marrow Cleansing Pill. You activated a 1000 fold critical chance. You obtained a God Marrow Pill.] [Ding! You passed on ten years of cultivation to your disciple. You activated a 100 fold critical chance. You obtained 1,000 years of cultivation.] [Ding! You gave your disciple a superb grade treasure, the Zixia sword. You activated a 10,000 fold critical chance. You obtained a Deity Sword Cloud.] His disciples praised, “Master, you are so generous. You always give us everything you have.”

Some worlds have its fate to be worst than death itself, what's better than a little chaos to put things back together? Talia earned her reincarnation and system through her past life, she was giving a mission to change this new world's fate, will she be able to do so, starting from scratch and with all the obstacles in her way? A/N: Read the tags, leave a comment if you like it so far, constructive criticism is always welcome to help me improve, though don't be too harsh, this is the first novel I've ever written. Ps: The cover is temporary until I get something better.

Griswalden Silverth possesses Death's Route power and can predict the best ways to kill someone. He is a member of the Doomsday Committee, aiding monsters in world destruction. Aiden becomes furious upon discovering that Griswalden, his favorite villain, dies abruptly in the story. Dissatisfied with the ending, he expresses his irritation by cursing the author in the comments. The author responds calmly, "I'm willing to give you a chance if you think you can outperform Gris." Thus, Aiden mysteriously transmigrates as Griswalden Silverth in the web novel Rise of the Low-Class Hero. *** The storyline is slow. The MC goes to the villains' academy in chapter 40+. He had to go through many paths to join the doomsday committee. His life in the committee is still long but it will be the main plot until the end. English isn't my native tongue, so there might be some slip-ups in spelling, grammar, and clarity. However, I'm open to corrections if you point out any mistakes. I'm all about constructive criticism, so lay it on me (nicely). When you drop a review, it'd be great if you mentioned the latest chapter you read to help out new readers.

I'm discontinuing the publication of this version of the story on this website. I'll be working on it in a writing program which might a while, maybe years, but me stopping progress on this version isn't the end of the story I have in mind. If you were interested in this story so far, I apologize for the long hiatus that'll be. If I remember, I'll recommence publication on this website. Thank you for reading, -Blank Logan is a construction laborer for W.H.A.L.E. Services, a construction company. He tries his best to make an earnest living from hard work. Those plans of continuing a somewhat mediocre life are abruptly disrupted by the appearance of a girl in his small apartment.

I'm as normal as the word… Important=*** ***NEWBIE WRITER ONLY DOING IT FOR FUN*** ***DISCLAIMER*** This is my original story, created by me. It has no means to offend anyone. Any similarity to reality or other works is only a matter of coincidence. ***English is NOT my language of origin. So please excuse any errors in grammar and spelling. Using Google Translate and the free version of Grammarly. My understanding, spoken and written level is basic, only nearly useful for basic and limited conversation. Constructive criticism is welcomed. (But please be respectful and considerate) I don’t have a fixed schedule, I write when I feel like it. This is for helping me get the ideas out of my head and make something on the road. So don’t expect something too great since I’m doing this for experience and learning. [No soy autor professional ni nada ni similar, utilize Grammarly y google translate.] (I am not a professional author or anything similar, I use Grammarly and Google Translate.) [Entonces no esperen nada maravilloso y no me importa los errores gramaticales y si quieren me lo pueden mencionar y tal vez lo arregle.] (So don't expect anything wonderful and I don't mind grammatical errors and if you want you can mention it to me and maybe I'll fix it.)