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Charon, a universe where cliches, chaos and questionable settings, timelines, geography and many more weird things happening inside the universe, time travelers messing with time, some eldritch gods starting cults, dinosaurs somehow survive and still living in the modern age, this was the Charonverse, a Novel that Theo read and made him questioned the author's sanity "Well, time to enjoy my time here and get wives" Now then some things that needs confirmation Mc will have a harem Mc will not always be ruthless, cold and a crazy killer that will kill someone just because they breath in his general direction but can be serious when the situation demands it The Novel will definitely have many ass pulls and bullshit, cause Charonverse is full of asspulls and bullshits I'm willing to hear any constructive criticism to better myself and give you guys an enjoyable reading experience

Born blind and causing his mother’s death in the process, Adam did not have an easy childhood. Due to the circumstances of his birth, he was labeled a cursed child, enduring a harsh upbringing as he suffered mistreatment at the hands of his own family. Everything changed when, at the age of five, he was subjected to a talent test alongside other children. However, he failed spectacularly, becoming one of the rare cases in history of someone born without talent. His family immediately exiled him, abandoning him to his fate in a forest teeming with spiritual beasts. But by a twist of fate, a higher existence took notice of him—Selene Ashwyn, the princess of an immortal empire, who wandered in search of something that could help her escape her own destiny. Sensing something special within him, Selene chose to take him in as her disciple, determined to help him escape the deep darkness that had engulfed him since birth. Follow Adam’s journey and his inevitable rise to the top. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ This is my first novel, so I appreciate any comments and/or constructive criticism. Objectives for readers: 100 Power Stones ---> 1 extra chapters 25 golden tickets ---> 1 extra chapter Updated cover (Selene)

Transmigrate into a different world, start as a criminal soldier, master the deconstruction core system, and embark on a peculiar journey as a wizard.

A couple weeks before Lake's Martial Course Entrance Exam, While he was taking a nap during a class he is awoken by a strange beeping sound. Opening his sleepy eyes, he could sees a strange holographic screen in front of him. [Roleplay System has successfully bonded to host. Do you wish to begin roleplaying?] [Yes?] or [No?] At first Lake thought he was still half asleep and half-heartedly chose [Yes]. Immediately After he saw a new prompt appear before his eyes. [Please select the main role the host wishes to play from the following options.] After reading that message, A series of options appeared before him. The options were so numerous that they covered the entirety of his vision. From the numerous options Lake could spot a few interesting sounding roles, [Martial Saint], [Heavenly Sage], [Harem King], [Slaughterer]… The options were too much and they made Lake dizzy. Without much thinking Lake scanned through the list of roles and choose the role whose name caught his attention the most. [Master of Fate] *** Disclaimer 1. Cover art is not mine. It belongs to kaslla. I took the image and edited my title onto it. Their twitter handle is ksb_x4 if you wish to check out their work. 2. This is my first novel that I decided to write to fill up my free time, so don't expect constant updates or any amazing writing quality. 3. I am willing to take criticism as I am still looking to improve my writing skills. For those who may post constructive criticism, thanks in advance. 4. Finally, thank you for taking the time to read my novel.

This is my own personal project, it's a story about a young man seeking revenge for the loss of his friend. This is simply the rough draft but ai hope those who read it do enjoy it, even with all the grammatical mistakes and issues in the story. I'll accept any constructive criticism so I can improve my novel and hopefully publish it someday.

The beings who created our planet are angry with humanity. To punish us for depleting the Earth's resources and for causing so much pollution they paused the planet. No longer does it circle the sun. Half the world is under the sun. Half the world under the moon. A shifter will be chosen to help change everything. This brave shifter finds another with the same goals and together they will take on the biggest factory in what was the U.S. It is a factory so big it has a city built within it. This factory produces the dark side of the world's UV lighting and manufactures artificial food since crops don't grow as fast with UV lighting. They clone and grow meat. This city is the center of all trade and industry within the darkness. It also poisons the air, land, and water by dumping waste. The shifters have to figure out how to take down the CEO and clean up the mess all while dodging those who would seek to harm them. This is a work in progress and will keep evolving as new ideas pop into my brain. I also have been going back and editing previous chapters as I try to improve my writing skills please stick around for the ride with me and make sure to leave a review. :) Ideas from people who are reading my story as well as constructive criticism are both greatly appreciated. ***graphic language, sexual situations, murder, and drug use are all mentioned in my story***

Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

Yun Lintian, a man from Earth, found himself in a clichéd transmigrated situation and ended up in the Azure World, a magical cultivation-oriented world. Unlike the protagonists in the novels he had read, Yun Lintian lacks any cheating devices to assist him on his journey. Did the God of Transmission forget about it? However, as a crisis unfolds, an ancient power dormant within him suddenly awakens, entangling him in a mysterious destiny... Watch the journey of Yun Lintian in a foreign world as he rises in power ranking alongside his precious all-female sect! ————————————— DISCLAIMER: The protagonist of this novel is exceptionally powerful, resourceful, and mature. If you don't enjoy stories with an overpowered protagonist who frequently use logic from novels he has read to solve the problems he encounters, this novel may not be to your liking. Besides the cultivation adventure, this novel also focuses on romance, comedy, and the bonds between the protagonist and his fellow disciples in the sect. The author is not a native English speaker, so you can expect some grammatical errors in the novel. Please bear with me, and trust me, I am trying to improve it. Everything in this novel is pure fantasy based on the author's imagination. It does not reflect the real world. Hence, readers should not attempt to apply their common sense and logic to this novel. Constructive criticism is always welcome. ————————————— All rights to the cover belong to the original artist.

Cesare Caruso, a renowned actor and a global superstar, appeared to have it all—fame, fortune, and an impeccable reputation. Yet, hidden beneath the surface was a secret he had guarded for years—he was an Omega. That carefully guarded secret came crashing down in one fateful night, during a glamorous masquerade ball aboard a luxurious cruise ship. Overwhelmed by an unexpected heat cycle, Cesare loses control of himself, devoured by his own desires and falling into the arms of a mysterious Alpha—a reckless moment that changed everything. [Zahir al-Tamid. That’s my name.] To his shock, the Alpha was Zahir—a proud prince from an oil-rich kingdom and an unwelcome figure from Cesare’s past. Worse, that night left Cesare unexpectedly pregnant! Before Cesare could make sense of it all, Zahir made a grand entrance at Cesare’s mansion by helicopter, uninvited, catching the attention of major media outlets around the world, demanding a settlement claiming that Cesare shall be responsible for ‘imprinting’ a royal family like him! “...Seriously, it’s not as if I have a ludicrous $2 billion just lying around, you know.” “Thus, marry me, Cesare.” Pregnancy, imprinting, and a royal marriage proposal—showered by a series of unwanted events, Cesare is desperate to find a way to cut ties with Zahir. But Zahir, stubborn and relentless, has no plans to let go. Can Cesare outrun the tempest, or will it pull him under? #BL #Omegaverse #Obsessive #Crybaby #One-sideLove #Prince #Superior Text copyright ⓒ 2024 by Kim Sol Da All right reserved. The Korean edition was originally written by 김솔다, Korea Translated and Published by We’ve Lab.

It was the day of my death. As everything came to an end, I heard a voice, a voice that would ultimately decide both my suffering and my rise. [If you had enough time to play one more game, what would it be?] Naturally, I answered the one game that had been on my mind even before I found myself withering away on my deathbed. The War of Demons and Heroes. An adult game of epic proportions. **** Disclaimer 1. This is my second novel, so don't expect amazing quality; I'm still learning. 2. "Is this a harem?" A common question from my previous novel, so I'll address it upfront: Yesn't. 3. If you decide to give my novel a try, first, thank you! 4. There is no smut in my book. I repeat, there is NO SMUT in my book. I know the title and r18 tag can be misleading, but I put the tag there due to the darker nature of this story, not because of smut. Finally, feel free to leave any thoughts or opinions in the comment sections and paragraph comments. The constructive criticism or inspiration I get from them is always welcome.

A lone figure stood amid the wreckage of where once reigned a pantheon, his broad back radiating an unfathomable aura of power as his golden irises swept over the debris that once housed some of the most powerful existences in this universe. "oh.. you survived that ?" Loki asked with a hint of surprise as his eyes fell on the bloodied blue-haired God barely clinging to life a few meters away Poseidon couldn't even muster the strength to respond as his eyes stared at Loki in pure terror. His mind couldn't help but think, 'What did my brother do to offend such an existence?!' Suddenly, Poseidon felt a cold chill run down his spine as a gust of wind flew passed him, before he could muster the strength to turn and face what could possibly make him feel more dreadful than the green-haired demon before him, the demon uttered three words that made his blood run cold "Fenrir.. eat him." ========= This story is strictly fictional. It revolves around a down-and-out Loki who rises to the pinnacle of existence. It will have some similarities to what is already known in the myths; however, due to my lack of knowledge on the matter, most of the story is entirely original, with only a few elements added as I learn more through my research along the way. As I said, it's strictly fictional. ========= NOTE: I am not a professional writer and have zero experience. This is honestly just to gain experience as well as a hobby but constructive criticism is always welcomed. I will try to upload 2-4 chapters a week with each chapter having at least 1200 words

"What if the very air you breathe was magic?" Bellator: Rising is more than just a fantasy novel—it's a journey into a world where mana fuels life, kingdoms clash, and ancient prophecies threaten to tip the balance between light and darkness. Follow Niklaus Dorscha, a rebellious young prince with a sharp wit and an even sharper sword, as he navigates rivalries, dangerous alliances, and a destiny he never asked for. Expect laugh-out-loud moments, heart-pounding battles, and characters so real you'll swear you’ve met them before. There's magic that feels like science, wolves with secrets, and a talking sword that’s just as sarcastic as your best friend. If you're into stories with deep world-building, moral dilemmas, and a hero’s journey packed with humor, adventure, and a touch of chaos—this is the book for you. Embark on the adventure. Discover the magic. And find out if Niklaus is destined to be a hero… or something far darker. Hi! This is my first time sharing this, and I would love to hear your thoughts. Additionally, I recommend checking out the Auxiliary first, just to provide you with a grounding in the world. Please feel free to offer any advice or constructive criticism; I am open to all feedback. I would like to clarify that this is my original work, and I am still in the process of finishing it. Please do not steal my work. If you enjoy what you see, I have much more to share, so please let me know what you think! Thank you! Ikaris

Two women,bounded by a forbidden love,navigate the treacherous terrain of secrets and societal expectations when one's constructed identity threatens to unravel,forcing them to confront the shadow of their past and the uncertain future of their love.

Raon someone with a great destiny yet also a tragic one. He has been alone since he was young boy and isolated from the outside world. His grandfather was the only thing he had. When his grandfathers dies and passes on his great wealth and also his expectations. Raon doesn’t know what to do. His destiny of bringing a great change all starts from this point. It all starts from a simple wish from grandfather to grandson. Read on to learn how he uncovers the past his grandfather wanted to keep hidden. Or the elaborate schemes and secrets inside the universe that may affect both the past and future. Read on to see if he ever fulfills his grandfathers wish or if he over did that wish. Read how his life becomes more dramatic and complicated than you he could have ever thought. * My new book for this WPC has just been launched! Check it out and see if you find it intriguing! The Owner of Dawn: The Store * * Beginning of the story might be rough, however it gets better in ever possible way later in the story. * * I am open to constructive criticism and also your involvement in the story. I want to hear your ideas and thoughts * * Levels of Advanced Chapters Sneak Preview: Able to unlock 2 chapters in advanced = 1 coin Human: Able to unlock 3 chapters in advanced = 5 coins Ancient Human: Able to unlock 8 chapters in advanced = 200 coins Elf: Able to unlock 14 chapters in advanced = 500 coins + 25% off * *Paused* * Copyright 2023 Oliie. All rights reserved. *

Fantasy story based on the world of Silent Veil; longer description in Chapter 1: prologue. * Criticism and advice is appreciated.

After a series of mystical and cataclysmic events scarred the world it took years for the planet to heal and become stronger. Many things changed as people discovered strange plants, altered animals, magical enhanced minerals and most important of all strange doors that from the history books only release dangerous beasts and monsters. Only those with a brave heart, fearlessness or just plan insanity to enter the doors and see what hidden secrets they have in their depths. Join Cyrus Ashford a bronze rank slayer as he rises through the ranks of the global slayer league, support his family, meet interesting people and most importantly explore everything this strange world he lives in has to offer!. A Urban fantasty LitRPG with a detailed progresson of seeing the mc train all his abilities while pushing them to the upmost limit. Please be aware this story contains intense violence and other potentially unsettling content. Tips, Advice & Constructive Criticism is always welcome!

You ought to think that people are just... well, people. We tend to forget that every being in this world is just as sophisticated as the universe they live in. What if someone you knew was hiding that? hiding a world full of secrets… a literal world. I admit, I am kind of a spoiled brat—due to my big brother spoiling me with everything, like candies, books, phones, bags, and… magic? I’ve known this guy my whole life, but every time I look at him, I see a different person. I realized that he was just revealing himself… Slowly. * Hello reader! This is the author, and this is his first work. That’s right, I’m a newbie writer! And I would really appreciate some constructive criticism or some genuine critique. I will do my best to provide you with a quality read every chapter. And no, there’s no romance between them, don’t be weird. Thank you! ~jr_indisputable Artist’s Insta: @Xhyy_Illust Follow my twitter @jr_indisputable

If you could gain power, wealth, or prestige, but at the price of your soul, would you accept the deal? Humanity continues on to day-to-day life, oblivious of the supernatural creatures that lurk in the dark. Being attacked by one of these creatures, Jayce Price was given a choice, sell his soul or die as a human, picking one of the options, multiple messages appeared in front of him. [ You have acquired the System ] [ Current Demonic Synchronization 0.00% ] [ Increasing Demonic Synchronization ] --- Author here, As this is my first ever novel I would appreciate constructive criticism to help improve the quality of the novel. Hoping to improve the quality as I write more so please feel free to state your opinions on the matter. It would be most appreciated if you could support my novel in any way you can, every contribution toward a goal is valuable, regardless of how small it may be. Also, special thanks to J.G. for the artwork! Contact me through Discord or Email for any questions: Ribblood#3222 Ribblood2@gmail.com

When Aurther dies he meets the Goddess of Death and Destruction Lucaria who gives him a chance at a new life. But is the deal she offers worth it or is the deal more than she lets on. Follow Raizels story as he journey's through the multiverse to become the strongest. A/N: This is a fan fic nothing belongs to me except OC characters please support the original authors and release. Also I encourage constructive criticism as it will help me make a better story in the long run for my readers

Enter Wade Lawless a new human in the year 2530, in a year that feels like nothing has changed yet living in an era that has had to adapt to the next step in evolution as a species and explore the myriad changes that had once governed the laws of the universe, all while battling each other and the dangerous wildlife. Salvation came in the form of a technological infusion of science and magic, The curios and determined minds of researchers and inventors alike took nanotech and the lost but newly discovered magic of runes to create The guide system, this allowed the people to essentially have wireless access to the internet and communication along with all the accumulated knowledge of how to understand and use the system to craft your own path and accumulate records that affect your personal evolution potential. Join Wade as he struggles to afford a decent enough system in a world designed to keep the talented wealthy and powerful, and untalented weak and poor; watch as he unravels and uncovers secrets the universe didn't even know it had, as he meets the repercussion of owning said knowledge. Continue on to meet the assumed orphan Wade before He earned the name Lawless and gained more than he could ever know. A.N: "Cover is still in development. Also leave me comments about how i'm doing or some ideas if u want, I'm a first time writer and will welcome some constructive criticism".

In the continent of Solasta, the peace of the kingdoms is threatened by the invasion of demons. In this unstable era, the prophecy of a hero destined to save humanity resurfaces, unleashing political intrigues, conflicts, and skirmishes to determine who will wield such power. The Church sees the opportunity to finally consolidate its power and fulfill its ambitions. From Earth, Rory, a passionate video game enthusiast, finds himself transported to this world, inhabiting the avatar of his favorite game character. Now known as Draken, Rory embarks on a journey to grow stronger, seek answers, and learn if this world deserves his help. He questions whether the humans in this world are worthy of his sympathy or if they deserve his cruelty. Draken's struggle for survival intertwines with the destiny of the world. Along his path, he will face challenges, make crucial decisions, and discover the true nature of humanity. In a world full of dangers and mysteries, Draken's fate will determine the future of all. This is my first time writing, I do this for pleasure, so any constructive criticism will be welcome. English is not my first language This is all basically what I got from what's in my head, my character from a game, then mix it all up with redbull and self loathing

Everyone in the world has transmigrated to a world of lords, starting with a piece of land. From a single small wooden house and five barbarians, the journey begins. The protagonist, however, has obtained the world’s only unique talent—Master Builder. "Ding: Arrow tower construction time: 30 minutes. Speed-up by ten times: 3 minutes." "Ding: Barracks construction time: 3 hours. Speed-up by ten times: 18 minutes." "Ding: Upgrade time for the lord’s wooden house: 24 hours. Speed-up by ten times: 144 minutes." While other players are still struggling with basic survival—barely clothed, hungry, and suffering from slow construction times—Ludin has already become the prosperous lord of his manor. While others are constantly hunted by monsters, Ludin is out in the world, hunting them down instead. As Ludin's power grows, he eventually establishes the world's first empire.

{Brainless, Cool Article, Power Fantasy, Stupidly Overpowered,...} [In order to balance the quality, quantity, rarity, and frequency of critical strikes, the system has taken the initiative to categorize them. Monthly critical strikes range from 100 trillion times quality with 1 unit of item to 1 trillion times quality with 100 units of items. Weekly critical strikes range from 100 billion times quality with 1,000 units to 1 billion times quality with 100,000 units. Daily critical strikes range from 100 million times quality with 1 million units to 1 million times quality with 100 million units. Hourly critical strikes range from 100,000 times quality with 1 billion units to 1,000 times quality with 100 billion units. Then there is the most basic rate with no restrictions whatsoever between 100 to 999 times quality with 1 trillion units.]

Rein was walking home after finishing his part-time job, his thoughts drifting as he strolled through the quiet streets. Unbeknownst to him, he passed through an invisible gate—one that neither the eye could see nor the senses could detect. Was this an accidental misstep, or was it something beyond his control? To find out, you’ll need to read the novel and uncover the truth. Please note that the cover image is not my own; I found it on Google, where it was labeled as free to use. If you are the original creator and wish for me to remove it, please contact me. Additionally, English is not my first language, so there may be some grammatical errors in the text. Lastly, this is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I’m still learning the craft. I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism or feedback you can offer. Please feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions!

[Target in sight.] [Skill Critical Eye has been activated.] Being clumsy is quite common. But Luke Hunter’s clumsiness is on a different level. As the young man quite literally stumbles through life, he wonders if there’s something more he could be doing in the world. His dreams may come to be realized, as a freak accident causes Luke to wake up as Klum, in a completely different setting than his day-to-day life. His Dexterity, a skill that measures things such as flexibility and how well one holds themself, sits at the level it was in his past life; 1. And yet, he finds his skills to be suited for an extremely coordinated individual, especially after he meets the only other Sword Saint to have ever existed, an individual who is the strongest Swordsman among those both alive and passed on. It’s up to him to find his way in his new life, and strive to reach the path of the highest Swordsman — the Sword Saint. Will he be able to transform his 1 Dexterity into a 1000? Or will he be dragged into something much deeper — much darker? Credits to valeri_mirley on fiverr for the new cover! Updating 5-10 chapters a week, and now posting on RoyalRoad!

First Time Writing A Story So Constructive Criticism Is Welcomed ------------------------------------------------------------- Worlds He Will Go To: Fear and Hunger Danganronpa Initial d My Hero Academia Naruto One Piece Bleach Persona 5 Royal Stardew Valley Demon Slayer Cyberpunk 2077 + Cyberpunk: Egderunners Skyrim Undertale/Underverse HxH SCP G.O.W 2018 + The new God of War game Elden Ring Subnautica Dark souls The Forest Far cry Bioshock Fallout: New Vegas + Fallout 4 Project: Zomboid Minecraft Monster hunter Neon genesis evangelion I'm a spider, So what Tensura or That time I got reincarnated as a slime Hallow Knight The Witcher 3 GTA Yakuza 0 Toyko ghoul Toyko revengers Parry Jackson(know jackshit about this) NFS: Unbound Adventure time(Got inspired) Marvel A second life rankers return Record of Ragnarok Over Geared Jujutsu kaisen Took Some Inspiration From Grandpa Universe, Great Story Check It Out If You Haven't Already I Won't Drop This Adding More If I Feel Like It Updating When I want to (art is not mine) Holy shit that's a lot of fandoms that I'll will have to write

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

A 15 Year old Guy Helps turning a Newly Constructed Kingdom into something to be reckoned with by making friends enemies and advancing his love life

One day, out of nowhere, I woke up to an unfamiliar ceiling. I thought I was kidnapped but turns out I had transmigrated into early medieval Britain during the era of Arthurian Legends? Wait, but why is Merlin a real mage, and Excalibur a real magic sword? King Arthur was actually real? No, wait, before that, what is this colosseum like place? Why am I being sent into the Middle Earth to steal a cup of gold from Smaug the Greedy? W-why is there a giant Red Dragon here?! How could I have known the Welsh dragon was real! Someone save me!!! --- This is my first time venturing into the Infinity genre as a writer, and one major inspiration behind this is, indeed, Cuttlefish's 'The Sage Who Transcended Samsara'. Please leave constructive criticism, and help improve my writing. Native English speaker, so hopefully grammar won't be a problem. I will never be accepting a contract, so this will forever be free. If you like my writing and would like to support me, and later on get some advanced chapters, the link below may be of use: https://www.patreon.com/MeAlive