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The Drunkard

"This is a fantastic supernatural Western that oozes tension, grit, and mythic heft. Elias Thorne is a fascinating antihero; the curse is sinister, the villains are mundane and eldritch, and the unyielding pressure applies. This is more than another gunslinger story because of the balance of horror, fate, and moral choice; it’s about the will’s ability to fight against the inevitable." Character: Elias Thorne Charismatic, imperfect, and balancing on the line between survival and damnation. His arc is riveting, transforming from reckless gambler to self-sacrificing bearer of the burden. This will make readers root for him and fear for him. The Curse & Its Rules The idea of “borrowed luck” is pretty simple and yet horrifying. The gradual unraveling of Elias’s fortune provides natural suspense, and the Collector as its enforcer makes it all the more ominous. Malachai & The Collector Malachai himself is an intimate, humanistic danger, while the Collector is a more inexplicably dark and inescapable force that lends Elias’s fate a sense of claustrophobia. Their give-and-take maintains the tension. Moral Dilemma  The central question of sacrificing another or suffering the curse himself raises this above a mere survival story. That internal struggle is what will haunt readers. Cinematic Atmosphere: Dusty saloons, moonlit canyons, a town where curses are the currency—it drips with style. It’s a Western at its core but sprinkled with unsettling, supernatural dread. Areas for Enhancement: The Connection Currently, she mainly describes the curse and helps Elias on his journey. Make it personal; give her something to lose. Maybe she wants the amulet back, or she has her own desperate agenda. The Collector’s Voice It’s sinister, but how does it talk? If it had a sense of comedic absurdity, if it addressed him in riddles that pile onto Elias’s decisions, it would be much scarier. More Western-Infused Prose Your world seems increasingly Western, but you could drive the dialogue and narration deeper into the biting, poetic Western voice (Blood Meridian, The Sisters Brothers) and go a long way toward treating the reader to more immersion. [Book Wow Factor] That is a very powerful basis. With just a few tweaks to Selene and the Collector and a touch more Western style infusing the prose, this could be an instant classic. If this were on your shelf, you would snatch it up.
iandino_dinoian · 3.3K Views

The Osiris Protocol

Dr. Maya Chen, a dedicated archaeologist, makes a groundbreaking discovery beneath the Sphinx a mysterious artifact that seamlessly blends ancient hieroglyphics with futuristic technology. This enigmatic device becomes a portal, allowing Maya to experience lives from different eras. When she inadvertently activates it, she is thrust into the body of an Egyptian priest steeped in secrets of “sky visitors” and divine wisdom. As Maya grapples with these vivid time-shifted experiences, she uncovers that each historical persona is connected by a hidden legacy a secret society that has safeguarded a profound body of knowledge through the ages. But Maya’s journey is jeopardized when a powerful tech conglomerate, Novus Corp, steals the main artifact. Determined to reclaim it, she clings to a surviving fragment that grants her controlled access to other lives: a Roman scholar, a medieval alchemist, and a Victorian detective, among others. Each transition deepens her understanding of an intricate, centuries-old conspiracy. In modern times, Maya’s investigation reveals a startling truth: Novus Corp’s leadership, including a trusted acquaintance, has been using the artifact’s technology to manipulate world events for their own gain. The artifact is revealed to be part of “The Osiris Protocol” a sophisticated mechanism designed not by aliens but by an advanced ancient human civilization, intended to preserve human consciousness and wisdom across time. With time running out, Maya must harness the knowledge and skills gleaned from her historical journeys to confront Novus Corp and prevent the activation of a colossal device that could reshape humanity’s destiny. Her quest evolves into a race against time, a battle to protect the legacy of human history, and a profound exploration of identity, destiny, and the timeless struggle between the pursuit of knowledge and the forces of control. Ultimately, "The Osiris Protocol" is a cross-genre tale that blends historical mystery, science fiction, and modern conspiracy, challenging the boundaries of time while highlighting the enduring human quest for truth and understanding.
SamuelWilson · 2.5K Views

God of War - Legend of Li Jing 2

1300 years ago, Yang Jian, the founding emperor of the Sui Dynasty, had an affair with his former concubine and gave birth to a son. However, his empress, the Dugu Clan, who was jealous by nature, learns that the son is still alive and immediately sends countless experts to eliminate him at all costs. At the time of crisis, the young man Li Jing was forced to pick up the 3-year-old child and quietly fled at night to find a ray of hope. However, at this time, he does not know that the ups and downs of the life of a generation of military gods have already begun. Set in the heyday of the Sui and Tang dynasties, the story systematically depicts the growth and love story of the famous general Li Jing. The story involves military, history, dynasty, culture, adventure, business, martial arts, love and many other aspects, and its historical events and character conflicts have been restored to a large extent, recreating the picture of the Sui Dynasty and writing an epic of heroic growth. Thank you for your reading and suggestions. ------- "The Legend of Li Jing, the Military God" - This is not just a historical novel, it's a masterpiece that completely reshapes the legend of Li Jing, one of the four great generals in Chinese history. Set in the most splendid era of Sui and Tang dynasties, this novel skillfully reconstructs the dynamic era, allowing readers to deeply experience the political, cultural, military, and social landscapes of that time. Here, Li Jing's growth is not just a hero's journey, but also a profound exploration into Chinese traditional culture and national character. In this novel, elements of intrigue and romance are ingeniously integrated, creating a world that is both realistic and imaginative. The author extensively draws upon the pacing of Western novels and the narrative strengths of traditional Chinese chapter novels. This unique combination not only enhances the rhythm and tension of the story but also presents a rich and captivating narrative world to the readers.
NostalgicCaptain · 1.5K Views

Empire of Butuan

Alexis Francisco, a gifted young man from a wealthy and historic lineage in modern-day Butuan, Philippines, is betrayed and murdered by envious relatives. Yet, fate grants him a second chance. Reincarnated as Siagu Alexie, heir to the Empire of Butuan in an alternate universe, he must navigate a world of politics, warfare, and monarchy. Armed with his modern knowledge and unwavering resolve, Siagu embarks on a journey to unite a fragmented empire, uphold its sovereignty, and forge a legacy of prosperity amidst the tumultuous tides of history. A gripping tale of ambition, resilience, and the burden of destiny. Notice: This novel is not intended to insult or degrade any culture, race, ethnicity, or religion. If ever you are offended because of this novel, I would like to apologize in advance. Also, English isn't my first language so please bear with the repetitive words, grammatical error, and wrong usage of filler words, and many more. Hope you understand GENRES: Low-Fantasy, Alternate Universe, History, Racism, Kingdom Building, Romance, Wars, Low-History, Non-Harem, Monarchy, & Religion --------------------------------------------------------- Hi everyone. I am Holy_Slayer, a newbie writer based in the Philippines. This novel is inspired by my hometown’s history and my love for monarchy. I would like to apologize in advance as this novel might be offensive to some readers who are too nationalistic. If you ever wanted to read this, be open-minded and forget your lesson in our history as this novel will not be touching 100% in history despite having a ‘history’ as one of its genres, but I am trying to incorporate some historical events and people in my story. NOTE: The Rajahnate of Butuan is a real kingdom that existed in 988. For discord server: https://discord.com/invite/KMmszZ3Crv
Holy_Slayer · 476.1K Views
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