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The Drunkard

"This is a fantastic supernatural Western that oozes tension, grit, and mythic heft. Elias Thorne is a fascinating antihero; the curse is sinister, the villains are mundane and eldritch, and the unyielding pressure applies. This is more than another gunslinger story because of the balance of horror, fate, and moral choice; it’s about the will’s ability to fight against the inevitable." Character: Elias Thorne Charismatic, imperfect, and balancing on the line between survival and damnation. His arc is riveting, transforming from reckless gambler to self-sacrificing bearer of the burden. This will make readers root for him and fear for him. The Curse & Its Rules The idea of “borrowed luck” is pretty simple and yet horrifying. The gradual unraveling of Elias’s fortune provides natural suspense, and the Collector as its enforcer makes it all the more ominous. Malachai & The Collector Malachai himself is an intimate, humanistic danger, while the Collector is a more inexplicably dark and inescapable force that lends Elias’s fate a sense of claustrophobia. Their give-and-take maintains the tension. Moral Dilemma  The central question of sacrificing another or suffering the curse himself raises this above a mere survival story. That internal struggle is what will haunt readers. Cinematic Atmosphere: Dusty saloons, moonlit canyons, a town where curses are the currency—it drips with style. It’s a Western at its core but sprinkled with unsettling, supernatural dread. Areas for Enhancement: The Connection Currently, she mainly describes the curse and helps Elias on his journey. Make it personal; give her something to lose. Maybe she wants the amulet back, or she has her own desperate agenda. The Collector’s Voice It’s sinister, but how does it talk? If it had a sense of comedic absurdity, if it addressed him in riddles that pile onto Elias’s decisions, it would be much scarier. More Western-Infused Prose Your world seems increasingly Western, but you could drive the dialogue and narration deeper into the biting, poetic Western voice (Blood Meridian, The Sisters Brothers) and go a long way toward treating the reader to more immersion. [Book Wow Factor] That is a very powerful basis. With just a few tweaks to Selene and the Collector and a touch more Western style infusing the prose, this could be an instant classic. If this were on your shelf, you would snatch it up.
iandino_dinoian · 2.5K Views

The Darkness Island

The Darkness Island Prolog: "Cepat katakan! Dimana para bawahanmu dan alasan kenapa kau menghancurkan terowongan itu!" sorak seorang polisi dengan sangat kuat sambil mencambuk seseorang yang kedua tangannya di ikat dengan rantai. "Su-sudah kubilang, aku sama sekali tidak tau apa yang kau bicarakan," jawab orang itu dengan nada lelah dan suara yang pelan. "Kau masih saja mengelak sialan!" Polisi tadi langsung mengambil pistol di pinggangnya. Dorr!! Ia tanpa ragu menembak paha kiri laki-laki itu. "Aaahh!!!" pekiknya dengan sangat kesakitan. "Cepat katakan!!" Laki-laki itu tidak merespon dan hanya menunduk kebawah dengan putus asa. Tubuhnya tampak seperti sudah tidak sanggup menerima rasa sakit lagi. "Bukankah sudah kubilang dari beberapa hari sebelumnya, saat proses interogasi dan kau berani tidur, maka kau akan merasakan ini!" teriak polisi itu masih dengan nada kuat dan sangat kesal. Ia kemudian mengambil cambuknya tadi. Lalu membakar cambuk tersebut dengan sebuah korek api. Rupanya cambuk itu dari tadi sudah terlumuri dengan minyak tanah. Begitu pula dengan seluruh bagian dada laki-laki itu yang hari ini sudah tercambuk puluhan kali. Hanya dengan sekali pukulan. Dan wuzzz!! Seluruh bagian dada laki-laki yang diikat di rantai itu langsung terbakar. "Aaackkk!!!" teriaknya dengan kesakitan dan langsung mendapatkan kembali kesadarannya. Sebelum api itu merambat sampai ke kepalanya. Ia langsung di guyur air yang berasal dari atas. Laki-laki itu menatap polisi tersebut dengan mata penuh dendam. "Bukankah aku sudah bilang! Aku tidak tau apa-apa kau Bangs*t!" ucapnya dengan sangat kesal. "Sialan! Bagaimana ini terjadi, aku hanya ingin liburan dengan keluargaku, namun semuanya hancur saat kami memasuki sebuah terowongan yang tiba-tiba saja meledak. Gara-gara kalian! Gara-gara kalian adikku dan ayahku mati di dalam terowongan itu! Aku dengan ini bersumpah. Bahwa aku akan menemukan dalang atas semua ini! Dan membalas dendam akan keluargaku!!" teriaknya di dalam hati yang langsung meronta dengan sangat kuat. Dari arah dinding sebelah kiri, tiba-tiba saja sebuah peluru bius di tembakan. Peluru itu langsung mengenai tangan kanan laki-laki itu. Yang secara perlahan membuatnya pingsan. Coming soon~ ~Higashi.
Kazehiro · 5.7K Views

Captured Hearts: A Tale of Love and Destiny

In the enchanting world of "Captured Hearts: A Tale of Love and Destiny," two souls destined for each other find their lives intertwined against the backdrop of a picturesque coastal town named Serendipity Cove. Set in the late 19th century, this epic romance takes us on a journey through the complexities of fate, love, and the choices that shape our destinies. At the heart of the story are Evelyn Ashcroft, a spirited young woman with a passion for painting, and Charles Sterling, a brooding yet brilliant writer who has retreated to Serendipity Cove to find solace from his troubled past. Their paths cross one fateful summer when Evelyn stumbles upon a hidden cove while exploring the coastline. Little does she know that this chance encounter will set in motion a series of events that will forever change the course of their lives. Evelyn and Charles are drawn to each other from the moment their eyes meet. As they spend time together, they discover a shared sense of longing and an unexplainable connection that transcends the boundaries of time and space. However, their budding romance is far from straightforward. Both harbor secrets and wounds from their past that threaten to tear them apart. As the story unfolds, the reader is taken on a rollercoaster of emotions as Evelyn and Charles navigate the challenges that come their way. From misunderstandings to outside pressures, their love is put to the test time and again. Yet, their bond only deepens, proving that true love is worth fighting for. Against the backdrop of Serendipity Cove, with its stunning landscapes and close-knit community, the characters are not merely passive observers but active participants in each other's lives. The supporting cast, including a wise old innkeeper, a mischievous young boy, and a free-spirited artist, contribute to the rich tapestry of the story, offering guidance, humor, and a sense of belonging. As the story reaches its climax, Evelyn and Charles are faced with a heart-wrenching choice that could either lead to their ultimate happiness or shatter their dreams forever. The lines between destiny and free will blur, prompting them to confront their fears and make decisions that will shape their future. "Captured Hearts: A Tale of Love and Destiny" is a sweeping saga that reminds us that love has the power to heal, transform, and transcend even the greatest of challenges. It explores the idea that our choices, no matter how small, can have profound ripple effects on our lives and the lives of those around us. With its evocative prose, vivid descriptions, and unforgettable characters, this timeless love story captivates the reader's heart and leaves them believing in the magic of true love.
ScarletSeraphim · 9.9K Views

Their Desired Ending

It wasn't on purpose. When Maria stole a peculiar book from one of her classmates, she thought nothing of it since her classmate didn't seem too fond of reading; Maria thought she could get away with it, however, she never expected the book to hold such secrets. Working as a barista in the city of Quezon, Maria discovers that not only was the book she had once read predicting the end of the world, but her old pocket watch was the key to figuring out its secrets. Before she knew it, chaos started to unfold, claiming the lives of thousands as deadly games began to appear all over the world, forcing humans to become players to survive. Maria never imagined that an old book series could lead to such catastrophes. Can a book with hundreds of pages stacked together— really be the sole reason for the end of humanity? Left with no other choice, Maria uses her knowledge from the books to navigate through the looming perils before her. With the desire to meet the beings that heralded the world's end and uncover the mysteries shrouding her books, Maria strove to survive and adapt to her new reality, even if it meant being tangled between life and death. In a world brimming with tales, akin to the multitude of stars gleaming in the nocturnal skies or the depths of the vast ocean yet to be explored, the story of searching for one's ending begins... * * * TL;DR: What to expect: -Slow Paced Story -Character Development  -A Fantasy, Post-Apocalyptic World -Mysteries! -Diverse Characters  -Family Conflict and Comradeship  -Sub-Plot Romance between Two Women -3.4k-3.8k Word Count per Chapter -Mistakes in grammar or prose since English is not my Native Language What NOT to expect: -Overpowered MC -Reverse Harem -LitRPG * * * Before reading this story, please note that this story will not be a short one. This story is inspired by many unlimited-flow Chinese novels I often read, Alice in Borderland, and my childhood favorite cartoon show, Adventure Time. Although this is my first time writing a story and may be an amateur, there would also be some terrible grammar, prose, and repetition of words since English is not my native language, I still hope that some of you will be able to enjoy reading this story I created during quarantine.  This story may also be slow in terms of updating, but I'll try my best to upload frequently or find a schedule to upload the chapters. I accept any form of criticism, tips, and advice!
T3CHN1CREADER · 2.5K Views

Insights of the Medical Examiner

Setelah beberapa tahun, Shen Junci memanjat gunung darah dan mayat dan akhirnya bisa bertemu dengan orang yang ia rindukan. Pemeriksa Medis Shen Junci, setibanya di Biro Kota Penang, menjadi anggota Divisi Kriminal Khusus yang baru dibentuk. Meskipun penampilannya tampan dan angkuh, Shen Junci adalah pemeriksa medis terbaik dengan sikap yang terampil dan penuh kasih sayang, ia menyembunyikan teknik yang luar biasa. Kapten Divisi Kriminal Khusus, Gu Yanchen, ditarik dari Departemen Logistik oleh direktur saat ini, Ding, dan memiliki keahlian menembak yang luar biasa serta kemampuan detektif yang solid. Saat pertama kali melihat Shen Junci, Gu Yanchen merasakan keakraban, yang berulang kali dibantah Shen Junci. Saat mereka menjadi rekan kerja dan kemudian tetangga, hubungan mereka berkembang menjadi kemitraan terbaik. Selama proses memecahkan kasus bersama, Gu Yanchen secara bertahap mengungkap rahasia yang disembunyikan oleh Shen Junci. Seluruh kota Penang bergejolak, secara bertahap membentuk badai. Di bawah debu waktu terletak cahaya abadi yang ditempa oleh darah dan kehidupan. “Jika kau ingin melawan kegelapan, aku bersedia menjadi senjata paling akurat di tanganmu.” – – – – – Penjelasan judul: Ada dua judul berbeda untuk novel ini. Judul web, “Fatally Destined Medical Examiner,” (绝命法医) dan judul cetak, “Interpretations,” (解语). Kami memutuskan untuk menggabungkan kedua judul ini menjadi satu untuk menyebutnya “Insights of the Medical Examiner.”
Elhafasya · 41.1K Views
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